critique wanted Sketch Before Digital work

[Spacey 748]

I did a sketch of a pony in armor and looking for advice and ways I can make it better. Please ignore some of the half-erased lines 

 

 

 

[RainbowCash 127]

Looks good!, to be honest it looks cute. ~ Can not wait to see what this looks like when it is 100% complete.

[Sporemane 546]

The Torso looks a little to long besides that it looks great

[Roy 15]

Super nice work! I think the over-detailing on the wings will probably leave you sore during the digital work though. Try to simplify them more!

[Spacey 748]

Okay here is the digital version, I was afraid that if I made the torso shorter I'd need to erase half the body so laziness took over there, but for the wings, I did tone it down and didn't add to much detail. 

 

[scribblepatch 13]

This is awesome! I love your art style! I really don't have any critique because it's already really good! The only thing I noticed is that the neck looks a little skinny, but it's minor, it's probably just my eyes.

[Spacey 748]

@@scribblepatch,

Awe thank you   Yes I do agree the neck is slightly small, my proportions aren't the best yet, just need to keep practicing  thanks for the input!