critique wanted Opinions on my OC?

[EverEverOn 346]

 

This is my only OC, Parakeet Song. I made her just at the beginning of this month after planning her for several days.

I was wondering if anyone here had advice for editing her, such as name and design changes. A change to her name is the part I'm most concerned about.

[galaxysquid 2,122]

She's pretty cute, and that's a nice design you've got going on there. ^.^

 

Let me ask you these questions:

 

• What is her cutie mark and what does it mean?
• What is her talent and does it pertain to her cutie mark? 
• Other hobbies?
• Personality traits?

Edited November 19, 2015 by PrincessWubsyButt~

[EverEverOn 346]

 

She's pretty cute, and that's a nice design you've got going on there. ^.^

 

Let me ask you these questions:

 

• What is her cutie mark and what does it mean?
• What is her talent and does it pertain to her cutie mark? 
• Other hobbies?
• Personality traits?

 

 

 

-Her cutie mark is a quill with rainbow ink around it

-Her passion is writing, and another skill she has is understanding and accepting differences in other ponies

-Her other hobbies are spending time with other animals, mostly birds

-She is very outgoing and loves classical music.

[Snake 516]

She's really, really cute! I like her a lot! Though I have the same questions as PrincessWubsyButt~!
Design wise though, she's really cute! I really, really like her. Probably one of my favorite OC designs! I dont know why, but something about her just fits!

[EverEverOn 346]

She's really, really cute! I like her a lot! Though I have the same questions as PrincessWubsyButt~!

Design wise though, she's really cute! I really, really like her. Probably one of my favorite OC designs! I dont know why, but something about her just fits!

 

 

I'm glad you love her design!

[Lulubelle 64]

She's adorable! I love those fluffy hooves. >owo< so cute.

[3Dode 55]

It doesn't look so good in my opinion, in fact my Oreo and milk combo was better, honestly, you should make her completely yellow, it would look a lot better.

[EverEverOn 346]

It doesn't look so good in my opinion, in fact my Oreo and milk combo was better, honestly, you should make her completely yellow, it would look a lot better.

Thanks for stating your opinion, but I wasn't necessarily wanting a comparison between my OC's design and another's.

[3Dode 55]

Thanks for stating your opinion, but I wasn't necessarily wanting a comparison between my OC's design and another's.

Who's exactly? All I just said was that it looks better if you were to color it in more.

[EverEverOn 346]

Who's exactly? All I just said was that it looks better if you were to color it in more.

You said your Oreo and milk combo was better.

[3Dode 55]

You said your Oreo and milk combo was better.

Those we're meant as snacks. But yeah you should color it a bit more in my opinion. Edited November 20, 2015 by 3bode