critique wanted Nearly done with my Rainbow Dash RainBoom

[3k932jd22328jdsf 113]

I know I've been working on this for like who knows how long now but I'm almost done plus the only colored pencils I had were these little kids crayola ones from like years ago and they are crap to work with for art and the wax had trouble adhering to the paper the way I wanted it to. What do you guys think so far? Any changes you would make or things I could do better and stuff like that would be very appreciated and helpful?

Edited December 23, 2015 by Emerald Meteor

[Nintenboy195 384]

Its looks super cool! ^^ I love hand drawn a lot...

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Thanks I'm glad you like it so far.

[Astral Blade 6]

I think it's really good so far. There's not much for me to critique since nothing major is wrong with it, but which parts do you have left to finish? It might just be the camera glare, but if you want tips, I'd color in RD a little more.

Good job