I need your help English Friends :)

[Windskyed 221]

Hello .

 

In this moment I'm working on a  semi animated mlp story. But I'm French, and it's difficult to me for traduct it it in English. I want to make subtitles and share it with you all.

 

In fact, the audio is in French.

 

Is anyone is ok for help me? Just "see" if my traductions are good or not?

 

Thank you .

[Mentis Soliloquy 3,025]

@@Windskyed, 

 

I can there mate sure, helping out is a thing I do now.

[Tesla 167]

i can check spelling and grammar for you but I'm no good at translating

[Windskyed 221]

Wow, what a fast reaction .

You are nice. 

I have already made a basic translation for the prologue, and tomorrow, I will end up the first episode. I have worked during all the day and the night on the publication of th first episode, and I'm a little tired. XD

The helping is just about to verify if the vocabulary, grammar are good or not. I try to increase my English, and, for that I will do my best to doing the biggest part of the translation.

Thank you for the future helping so, very kind .

[Night Shadow/Daw 170]

Wow, what a fast reaction .

You are nice. 

I have already made a basic translation for the prologue, and tomorrow, I will end up the first episode. I have worked during all the day and the night on the publication of th first episode, and I'm a little tired. XD

The helping is just about to verify if the vocabulary, grammar are good or not. I try to increase my English, and, for that I will do my best to doing the biggest part of the translation.

Thank you for the future helping so, very kind .

I don't speak French, but I can also help with the grammar, and vocabulary

 

It's always nice to help somepony in need

[Kafooku 156]

I speak a little bit of a french, so I might be able to help with translation if you want me to.

Edited January 17, 2016 by Kafooku

[Windskyed 221]

Make the French in English is not a problem for me.

It's more about the details and the type of sentences. I'm not very familiar with the adequat vocabulary or grammar.

I will make the first translation and, so, it will be already in "English". .

[Kafooku 156]

Make the French in English is not a problem for me.

 

It's more about the details and the type of sentences. I'm not very familiar with the adequat vocabulary or grammar.

 

I will make the first translation and, so, it will be already in "English". .

 

Hm, I would recommend using Grammarly, it's basically what it sounds. I used to use it for papers when I was a bit younger to check my grammar, etc.

[Tesla 167]

No worries just message me if you need anything,

 

although I may not reply straight away as im at college and working a part time job too,but I can do my best.

 

It also may be a good idea to get a few peoples opinions as you can then see how it reads to different people before you publish it 

[Windskyed 221]

Thank you all for the awnsers .

I have made two google doc where it's possible to comment in public. It's more simple I thinks. And I will have a better understanding of my mistakes.


 

Edit :
I've seen that a person have put some corrections about the prologue. I want to thanks her . I have applied the recommandation and understood them 0/.

Seconde edit : It's done.

Thank you all of you for the help 0/ really.

Edited January 18, 2016 by Windskyed