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[Plume 922]

Hey all! So I've had this vector image lying about on my laptop for at least half a year, and I keep going back to it and editing here and there because I was never quite happy with it. To compress the deal, I think maybe I've reached a point where I'm decently happy with what I've got. This is the first time I've ever vectored over a screenshot, and also the first time I've really vectored something large in a while, so it was quite the harsh learning curve ^^'

 

 

 

I sort of had to make up colours for the flowers and bouquet wrap since the original screencap was all sepia and shizzle.

 

 

 

Could any experienced vectorers (?) or just general artsy people give me some critiques or pointers for next time? 

 

Thanks!

Edited March 28, 2016 by MiniKirby123

[95% Chance 78]

Well, I can't really call myself experienced, but having done a few vectors myself, I can say that you did pretty well if it's your first time.

 

When doing pony art vectors, generally you want to keep endpoints for lines (usually the outlines that end inside) tapered to a point.

Sorta like this

 

 

 

But honestly, that's the only real advice I can give without seeing the actual anchor points and such. using as few of those as possible is really key to smooth lines.

 Keep it up!