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critique wanted Need a Beta Reader for Pony Fic!


Tao

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So I'm looking for a beta reader who does not use google docs or require to use it!   Look, I have problems with the layout and yes tired it out,  so don't be all on my case.   Mostly looking to do all editing on here if we can or email is ok!  Just post here or pm me if you think you can help and if you do,  thank you!

 

Here is a light intro to my story,  I'm working on chapter 3 and I hope to hit 5 if things work out in my head!

 

Cover: findingmylight_zps5guxqdnt.png

 

(loose summary)

Sum: Glimmer is proud to be Twilight's Student in Friendship and magic but still has some heavy doubts in the back of her mind in being chosen.  Adding in it seems these plaguing doubts seem to make her loose control of her magic in random moments and Glimmer fears if she looses her magic,  she looses her place along Twilight.

Spike sees Glimmer's problem and reaches out his claw and friendship to Starlight one night in hoping they might find the reasons her magic is fading and trying to find her light again in herself.
 


 

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