Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 Doing the same thing as I did last time for fanfics. Except this time I'm taking any OC so long as they are serious and fit for the story. I won't be too picky, but if I deem him/her unfit for the nature of the story I'll say so. This is a link to the story. It is a Death Note crossover. As usual the only thing I really ask in return is for you to either like the fic or review it. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/339792/death-note-alight-equestria 1 http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Pen 1,348 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 If you wish, you can pick my OC Sweet Pen, if you didnt do this before ofc Totally not a support main. Battletag: Cloudie#11327 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kronos the Revenant 1,971 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 I dont know if he'll make the cut, but I'll be impressed if you can actually use Kronos in a fanfic like this: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/kronos-foe-r9358 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 If you wish, you can pick my OC Sweet Pen, if you didnt do this before ofc Oh yeah. I'll need some sort of personality description or an OC page: I dont know if he'll make the cut, but I'll be impressed if you can actually use Kronos in a fanfic like this: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/kronos-foe-r9358 Depending on he context you want me to use him I might be able to work something out. It may be more difficult though. http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reader8363 1,281 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 I seen it, but haven't read it, I can only of one oc, https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/shadow-beast-r8717 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 I seen it, but haven't read it, I can only of one oc, https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/shadow-beast-r8717 The problem here is I would have trouble putting him in a fiction where talking and communication matters a lot with the story. http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reader8363 1,281 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 hm, my other are mostly soft, Maybe one of my twins or feeder would have been better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReverieRiver 526 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 I... don't have an FiMFiction account, so I can't really comment or like the fic. Would it be okay if I just reviewed it here? I think it's a very interesting take on this kind of crossover! I really like how you alluded to the original plot of Death Note, and the idea that Ryuuk moved on to the pony universe after having his fun with the universe. It really seems like something he would do, and being a god and all, I wouldn't put it past him to be able to cross universes and, y'know, multiverse theory and all. So, yes, interesting story so far, I'd like to see where it goes! As for characters, Ariel is... probably not suited for this kind of story, given how anxious she is. Galatea might be a good fit, though. While she's not one for close attachments, she'll still talk and probably be able to fulfill whatever role she needs to in the story. As for her backstory, you can ignore the bit about her actually being from the future for the sake of simplicity lol. The important facts about her past are simply that she had a high school sweetheart that ended up murdered, and she adopted and raised a unicorn filly by the name of Ariel. c: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kronos the Revenant 1,971 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 Depending on he context you want me to use him I might be able to work something out. It may be more difficult though. I dont care what context you put Kronos in. I'm just curious to see how you'll utilize him in the fanfic. Just be sure to remember to give credit to the creators to any OCs that you use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 hm, my other are mostly soft, Maybe one of my twins or feeder would have been better I'm gonna take into consideration any character as long as they are reasonable. Just toss me an idea I... don't have an FiMFiction account, so I can't really comment or like the fic. Would it be okay if I just reviewed it here? I think it's a very interesting take on this kind of crossover! I really like how you alluded to the original plot of Death Note, and the idea that Ryuuk moved on to the pony universe after having his fun with the universe. It really seems like something he would do, and being a god and all, I wouldn't put it past him to be able to cross universes and, y'know, multiverse theory and all. So, yes, interesting story so far, I'd like to see where it goes! As for characters, Ariel is... probably not suited for this kind of story, given how anxious she is. Galatea might be a good fit, though. While she's not one for close attachments, she'll still talk and probably be able to fulfill whatever role she needs to in the story. As for her backstory, you can ignore the bit about her actually being from the future for the sake of simplicity lol. The important facts about her past are simply that she had a high school sweetheart that ended up murdered, and she adopted and raised a unicorn filly by the name of Ariel. c: Any pictures or a visual descriptor? I dont care what context you put Kronos in. I'm just curious to see how you'll utilize him in the fanfic. Just be sure to remember to give credit to the creators to any OCs that you use.I have the human decency to do at least that much. I'll see what I can do, there's only so much I can do with an OC of this nature though. http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReverieRiver 526 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 Any pictures or a visual descriptor? Oh, both their profiles are linked in my signature! Should have everything you need to know about backstory and personality, including pictures! Buuut, in the case that you might be on mobile and can't see my signature, I'll link them here :> Galatea Ariel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 Oh, both their profiles are linked in my signature! Should have everything you need to know about backstory and personality, including pictures! Buuut, in the case that you might be on mobile and can't see my signature, I'll link them here :> Galatea Ariel Yeah I'm sorry lol. I'm on iOS mobile version. I can't see signatures. Oh, both their profiles are linked in my signature! Should have everything you need to know about backstory and personality, including pictures! Buuut, in the case that you might be on mobile and can't see my signature, I'll link them here :> Galatea Ariel I would possibly consider using Galatea as an investigator for the "Kira" investigation. Not exactly sure what I'm gonna call the old Major. 1 http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reader8363 1,281 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 Here's the three that might be a little better Dark Days https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dark-days-r9523 Starry Days https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/starry-days-r9522 Feeder https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/feeder-r8844 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Pen 1,348 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 @@Deviousnights, Here's her page. Sorry, i'm bad at writing stories of OCs or something alike, but I hope you understand it. https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sweet-pen-r5530 Totally not a support main. Battletag: Cloudie#11327 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 Here's the three that might be a little better Dark Days https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dark-days-r9523 Starry Days https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/starry-days-r9522 Feeder https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/feeder-r8844 Considering Feeder. What role could he play? @@Deviousnights, Here's her page. Sorry, i'm bad at writing stories of OCs or something alike, but I hope you understand it. https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sweet-pen-r5530 I understand it. Just what role do you want her to play? http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Pen 1,348 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 @@Deviousnights, Anyone that seems to fit her is fine for me~ I won't remember the Death Nothe characters right now x.x Totally not a support main. Battletag: Cloudie#11327 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 @@Deviousnights, Anyone that seems to fit her is fine for me~ I won't remember the Death Nothe characters right now x.x I'm not exactly sure myself. She seems like she'd have a death note herself http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reader8363 1,281 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 @@Deviousnights, doesn't really matter to, ya can decide, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Pen 1,348 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 I'm not exactly sure myself. She seems like she'd have a death note herself So, basically saying she would be Light? Totally not a support main. Battletag: Cloudie#11327 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 So, basically saying she would be Light? A more violent version yes. But there's already the main character filling that role. @@Deviousnights, doesn't really matter to, ya can decide, I'll get back to you on that then. http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Pen 1,348 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 @@Deviousnights, I actually don't see as Light, so any other one that she can take the spot is fine. I don't mind changing her personality when it comes to put in a fic Totally not a support main. Battletag: Cloudie#11327 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kronos the Revenant 1,971 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 I have the human decency to do at least that much. I'll see what I can do, there's only so much I can do with an OC of this nature though. That's okay. Kronos is a challenging character to deal with anyways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 @@Deviousnights, I actually don't see as Light, so any other one that she can take the spot is fine. I don't mind changing her personality when it comes to put in a fic Need a lil more to work with here http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Pen 1,348 July 27, 2016 Share July 27, 2016 Need a lil more to work with hereTold ya that it wasnt good her backstory. Totally not a support main. Battletag: Cloudie#11327 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deviousnights 48 July 27, 2016 Author Share July 27, 2016 Told ya that it wasnt good her backstory. I meant as in what she would be in the story. I'd need some idea, does she have a sense of justice, would she want to help kira? Something Right now I really need ponies to be police officers in charge of the investigation. http://s29.postimg.org/emb22z4af/Darkside_shippadge.jpg Thanks a million monotone! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jupiter-moonlit-r7728 https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treacle-moonlit-r9624 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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