critique wanted In need of an editor/advisor for first large fanfic attempt

[4HFan 476]

Heya! I'm writing a Slice of Life fan fiction involving a Changeling attempting to integrate himself into pony society. But trust me, the plot is a lot more interesting than this sounds. So if you're interested, just let me know. I'd really appreciate the help!

[MuttonYolk 63]

This post has sufficient grammar and sentence structure for me to take you seriously. I'll gladly help.  :-P