Fanfic. How Cadance became an alicorn

[Evelyn Light 28]

After Celestia and Luna defeated Discord, peace flowed into Equestria. But at the edges of Equestria, chaos still reeked havoc, and ponies still hated and hurt one another. In a small village in the clouds, in the far edges of Equestria, a young pink pegasus pony, named Cadance, lived with her mother and father.

Cadance father was a mustang of a broken spirit, and drank his pain away. Cadance mother was a mare of weak will and fears, and drank her fears and insecurities away.And just like every other night, Cadance hid in the closet as she watched her parents drink their lives away.

One night while her parents were drinking, they began to fought, which isn’t unusual for them, but this time, it became violent. Her parents began to hit each other, her father began to choke her mother.

Tears rushed down from Cadance eyes. She bolted from out of the closet, and looked at her parents. She began to wish, wish that she could fix their broken hurts, wish that she could remind them how much they loved each other, wish that she culd make them happy again. As she wished, something in her turned on, a mix of beautiful colored lights, seem to come from her heart, surrounded her, and rushed to her parents. Her father released his grip of her mother and her parents faced each other, smiled and began to cry. They rushed to there daughter and hugged her, and apologized.

They all jumped, startled by a loud crash. Cadance turned her head and saw Princess Luna. “hello little alicorn.” Luna spoke in a gentle and soft voice. Alicorn? Cadance thought. “We need to talk” Luna said to pegasusi.

Luna explained to them that Cadance held an extremely powerful magic within her, a magic too powerful for her pegasus form, a magic too powerful for a form other than an Alicorn. She offered to train the new alicorn and her parents accepted. The next week, Cadance left for Canterlot.

[Midnight Seashell 206]

This is quite interesting and has potential although there are some mistakes like "they began to fought" when it should be "they began to fight".

[Evelyn Light 28]

thanks, yeah it was a bit of a freewrite. i'll definetly fix it

 

This is quite interesting and has potential although there are some mistakes like "they began to fought" when it should be "they began to fight".

 

thanks. it was a free write. I'll definitely fix the mistakes

[TwilightPomegranate 324]

I love the story, but I have a question;

 

When Cadance was a filly, was she an alicorn or a pegasi? It was really confusing.

 

Plus; It has been revealed that she became an alicorn from Celestia in the book Twilight Sparkle And The Crystal Heart Spell.

 

 

So that's my opinion. Not trying to give hate though!

[Lunarpalette 2,175]

Pretty good. Sad that her parents fought like that gut nice explanation anyways