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Okay so I updated my OC but I still need help with the name. I updated my propic already and I wrote a work-in-progress bio&backstory ("Blue" is a placeholder name).

Backstory:

Blue was born and raised in Manehattan with her parents and two older siblings. Her siblings were extremely abusive and blamed her for their parents divorce. At school she excelled academically but was bullied for just about everything. From this, Blue developed depression and anxiety. She had multiple escapes but those are only temporary. So she built a pair of wings so she could fly away from the tormenting environment. Blue currently moves from place to place every couple of weeks but likes to stay around Ponyville since she finds the ponies there particularly fascinating.

Bio:
Gender: Female
Species: Unicorn
Age: 17

Personality in general- Introvert
Fatal flaw- Never thinks she’s good enough
Likes- Music, movies, learning, exploring
Dislikes- Family, social things, herself

Place of residence: Doesn’t have a set place
Occupation: None
Talents: Writing/storytelling, most other things creative
Hobbies: Listening to music, reading, writing, creating

 

So if I could get feedback and help with a name I'd appreciate the help! (Reminder that while my OC is self-based I did exaggerate some things)

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