fan fiction When I Wandered

[Linguz 140]

Linguz here with my fanfiction.

 

 

When I Wandered

 

Description: Dragmire is an island country which accepts all Equestrian, Lion Hybrids, and Draconic Tribe to settle in it. Meteor Blaze, a recent arriver to this country and a nomad for life, travels across the country searching for two old friends.

 

Chapter 1: Hoofsdale

Chapter 2: Lion's Port

 

Image:

 

Map

 

Please give me any comments about it possible. Note that Chapter 2 will be rewritten soon to transfer the writing style from Telling to Showing. Feel free to read it and comment about the plot.

Edited November 9, 2011 by Linguz

[Derpy1 137]

I love that sketch :3

[Linguz 140]

I have completed the map to Dragmire. Added it to first post.