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Hehehehehehehehehe…..soooo, you came back, did you? And you brought a friend….how pathetic. Too scared to confront me alone, hmm? That’s typical of you….you’ve gone soft, having to rely on those who care nothing about you. They’re only pretending, you know...”

 

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Yup.”

A figure appeared in the mirror, an evil manifestation of myself. His eyes were pure white, his body a dark smoky black.

 

 

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*Twilight watches Loyal gazing intently into the mirror, even though she sees nothing in the mirror, herself* :wacko:

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You know, you have to admit you’re foolish to play right into their hooves like this. They don’t want you to feel bad….so instead they just keep making lies and--”


 

“Just shut the Tartarus up, you nasty cluster of particulates.”

 

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I know why you’re here. You want to know how to get rid of me. Foolish pony….you CAN’T. You can’t erase the past! I can’t believe you were stupid enough to believe that.”

 

 

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All those years, you let me develop. You let me manifest into a form to keep you going. Now, just because you claim you need ‘friends’, you don’t need me? Don’t be ridiculous. Without me, you would have just ended your own life! You would have been miserable!”


 

That isn’t true. My friends support me. They comfort me when I need it most. You never understood because I never had friends before. Feeding off of the bad past does not give you a future.”


 

It will...once I corrupt every inch of your mind. Soon you’ll realize how hopeless all of this is.”

 

 

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*Tearfully, shouting*

Loyal, don't listen to him! 

*I* am your friend & so are a *lot* of other ponies who care about you!

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I’ve learned to ignore him at this point, Twilight.”

 

 

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Oh, you have, have you? Well let’s see how you feel about THIS!" *he ‘punches’ the glass, shattering it, and ‘freeing’ himself, and steps out.*

 

 

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*he pins Loyal onto the ground*
“You will rue the day you turned me down, Loyal Defender...” He curses. “I swear it on your own name.” He looks up and shoots a black beam up into the sky, plaguing it a black color, which spreads across. 

“You have seven days to give in...if not, the element of darkness will consume you from the inside! May your dreams be plagued by nightmares!” He vanishes in a flash, leaving angry puffs of smoke.

 

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“I’m fine….but in a week I won’t be….the dream’s infected..you know what that means..” *the ground begins to shake and tear away*

 

 

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*A distant sounding voice*

 

Twilight, Loyal! Wake up! :blink:

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We’d better get back out there...PRONTO.”

 

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I ‘awoke’ from my dream, and Twilight woke back up herself. “Uuugh…..what a nightmare….literally, it turned into a nightmare.”

 

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(I'm off to bed. G'night! ^-^)

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Yeah. *Shaking away the cobwebs* That was intense. :blink:

 

 Are you guys, alright:blush:

 

*Twilight turns & smiles weakly at her dragon friend* 

 

Yes, Spike. We're fine. :rarity:

 

(I mean that in a, "We *barely* escaped the Dream Realm but otherwise, we're ok." sort of way.)

 

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Well...somewhat. Apparently now I have a week to live otherwise….eghhh, I don’t even WANNA think about it.”

 

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I know this might not be the *best* time, but Pinkie Pie just sent this "Welcome to Equestria Party" invitation for Loyal Defender.

There's NO TIME for welcome parties Spike! The fate of both Loyal & Equestria is at stake!

 

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