Shady Mist 55 January 5, 2022 Author Share January 5, 2022 12 minutes ago, Kujamih said: to clarify things I'm sure that pear butter is a kind mother..... and would still do anything for her child. AND that would even make a solid reason for her to stay even longer. because she is going to try to teach love and learn stuff from apple wood. but 6 years have passed and nothing grew into fruition of her trying to teach apple wood. apple wood would still be a timberwolf through and through... so thats when she gives up. and give a solid reason to tell apple jack to give up. plus your time line is very very messed up. if the alpha is one of the 3 timberwolves In the series.... I suggest you make it an entirely different timber wolf. oh and time line. missing parents: apple bloom; still a baby and AJ and big mac; maybe 5 years old( in terms of human age) dosnt work on farms yet. missing parents ark: it takes 6 years ah and bigmac have never met the mane 6 fluttershy dosn't leave in ponyville yet. you actually need twice the amount of 6 years off missing before fluttershy leaves in ponyville. I think I got it, I think I have a plan, I wrote it down so I didn't forget, I'm going to change a few small things but I think I solved it! Thank you. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Pink One 13,505 January 5, 2022 Share January 5, 2022 1 hour ago, Shady Mist said: I think I got it, I think I have a plan, I wrote it down so I didn't forget, I'm going to change a few small things but I think I solved it! Thank you. can't wait for the final product! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shady Mist 55 January 5, 2022 Author Share January 5, 2022 3 minutes ago, Kujamih said: can't wait for the final product! Same. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shady Mist 55 March 24, 2022 Author Share March 24, 2022 @Courageous Thunder Dash, @Kujamih and @Brony Number 42 Chapter 1 of "Applewood" is now up of FIMFiction. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Pink One 13,505 March 25, 2022 Share March 25, 2022 First step is trying next step is learning! If you have 10 readers be happy and check your flow off people continuing to read your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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