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"Wake up sleepy head...," the voice sounded again. Drowsily, Stonewall opened his eyes to see a completely different scene in front of him. It looked somewhat like a medium class hotel room. In place of windows was a screen showing rotating pictures of various scenes pleasing to the idea. Somehow they had transfered him here, and even taken the liberty of tucking him into bed. Slowly, he pulled the sheets back, and was shocked by the difference. All the scars on his body had been erased. Somehow, he felt vaguely sad. Alot of those scars had bad memories, but they were his none the less. He noticed that the device was still attached to his forehoof. "Welcome to the Pony Incorporated Relaxation and Meditation Facility," a mechanic voice announced. "You, test subject 37a, have just awakened from our top of the line stasis processing center. Please return to your bed so that you can be returned to stasis until further processing can be determined." Stonewall, after attempting to escape by every means possible, finally decided to hope for the best. Climbing into the bed, he pulled the sheets up over his head. The next time he awoke, he would be changed drastically.

 

{Test Subject 23c}

The mare had been in stasis for what seemed to be an eternity. After the incident with her last testing, it appeared that the management had decided to quarantine her. As a pegasus, she wasn't really suited to obstacle and problem solving. Most of the time she could simply find a way around it. There had been one test that she couldn't complete, but then again nopony had completed the latest test the Matrix had devised. So, had refused to test anything after that. Nothing they had tried would convince her otherwise. Now, it seemed that they had found something that could. The screens in the place of windows changed to show a hooded filly. "Welcome back to Reality 23C," it said with a chuckle. "Are you ready to begin testing?" The mare promptly rolled her eyes and turned away. "You might want to rethink that if you ever want out of here..." Instantly, her attention was grabbed again. "Yes. That's right. We have decided to have you go through one final test. If you complete it, you can go free." The pair eyed each other suspiciously for a moment, before the mare gave her acknoledgement.

 

"Good," the filly said. "You will be outfitted with the Portal Device, body armor,.and a pair of boots. Your mission is to kill this Test Subject by any means possible." A picture of Stonewall appeared on the screen. "However, there are a couple of rules. We cannot bring you directly to him. So, you must find him yourself. Also, there is a time limit. You have until tomorrow at one after noon. Good luck." The screens promptly shut off. For a minute, nothing happened, then a closet gave an audible click of unlocking. Further inspection revealed the assigned items, and an exit. Better described as a gaping gash in the wall, it led only to empty space. Looking out, 23C was amazed at the number of Relaxation chambers like hers. There must have been hundreds. Sighing to herself, she started the search.


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Aqua Mortem- (Dark) http://mlpforums.com/topic/66720-aqua-mortem/

To the last Man standing- (Comedy/Fighting) http://mlpforums.com/topic/69520-to-the-last-man-standing/

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Inspectory Coppertail entered at this point. Compared to when they had first met, he looked frazzled. He was about to say something, when a waiter entered the room, carrying whatn appeared to be a platter of cupcakes. They looked delicious by anyone's standards. The icing wasn't too heavy, and a heavenly scent came from them, as they had been just baked. Carefully, the waiter set the cupcakes on a table and bowed before leaving. Inspector Coppertail was cautious, and magically checked the cupcakes to be sure. Finding them to be clean of poison and anything else, he sighed, taking a bite of one. While the stallion was distracted, a small sharp object dropped from the ceiling and pricked Ebony in the neck. The Nix responsible promptl vanished in a puff of smoke.


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Aqua Mortem- (Dark) http://mlpforums.com/topic/66720-aqua-mortem/

To the last Man standing- (Comedy/Fighting) http://mlpforums.com/topic/69520-to-the-last-man-standing/

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Ebony was about to bite her cupcake when she left something on her neck. She dropped the cupcake, her eyes widened slightly. She winced and reached for the back of her neck, then cried out quietly in pain, her head swimming. He put her hoof on the table to steady herself and looked up at the ceiling, her vision hazy. Her eyes closed and she exhaled, falling unconsious on the ground, her tiara clinking on the ground beside her.

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Artemisia was thinking about brunch, hmm he really is fine....she thought to herself but was snapped back to attention as the cupcakes were brought in. Seeing the princess fall she screamed "WHAT WAS THAT?!" She dropped her cupcake that very second and her eyes darted around the room. "EBONY" She neighed and fell to her side. She turned her head to face the detective and Fine Tune "Get some help!" she ordered.

 

 

 

(What are you doing mister, making everything too complicated with like half a dozen characters and portal? what is going on?!)

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((This is getting pretty confusing now...))

Splinter and his squad investigated the scene. ''Nothing Here.'' Splinter said as looking in a hole. ''Did you guys find anything?'' ​Said Splinter as looking at his investigating squad. They all frowned and said no. Splinter rolled his eyes and continued to investigate.

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Ebony stayed perfectly still, except for the gentle rise and fall and she breathed somewhat shallowly.

 

//ok, i gtg guys. I'll talk to you in a week....just keep in mind that Ebony will be in a coma and the poison will slowly start killing her, so her condition will get worse.

Keep rping, I'm excited to read everything when I get back :)

bye guys.~//

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''I told her I had a healing factor... But NOOOOOO! I knew something like this was going to happen!'' Said Splinter as looking at Ebony.
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Artemisia was taken aback "You can't just assume that he is dead! Should we send out a search party?" She looked at them, wondering what to do "We are spreading ourselves thin...is it possible that the enemy or whomever is causing all this to happen is doing this on purpose?'

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''To The Truck, Troops!' Ordered Splinter as saluting. Him and his squad ran out of the door heading for Splinter's truck. When they arrived at the truck, Splinter opened the trunk. There was a large Pile of weaponry. ''Grab whatever you can!'' Ordered Splinter as putting a sniped rifle on his back. Then Splinter, Ryan, Cameron, and Conner began to carry all the gear and weapons they could. When they were done they ran back into the room. ''Everybody, follow Us!'' Yelled Conner as loading the Assault Rifle he had in his hooves. Edited by Calirolls
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Splinter, his squad, and the others arrived at the hospital.''Move In!'' Said Splinter as opening the door. ''Conner, Ryan, Get the others in! Cameron, Your with me.'' Said Splinter as breaking 2 nearby windows. ''What are we going to do?'' Said Cameron as cocking an eyebrow. ''Do you know how to shoot a sniper rifle?'' Said Splinter as giving Cameron a Sniper Rifle. ''Buck yeah.'' Said Cameron as smirking. ''Were on guard.'' Said Splinter as loading his own Sniper Rifle.

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''He's acting like the crabby guy I pushed off a bridge...'' Said Splinter as rolling his eyes. He pressed his ear. And 15 minutes later, the Marshall Officer Arrived ''There's your Marshall Officer. Ya happy now, Captain Red?'' Said Splinter as shrugging. Edited by Calirolls
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Splinter looked at Fine Tunes with a 'You owe me Big Time' Expression on his face. ''Well... I'm with the army. Along with my squad, we will Guard the area and make sure the doors of the hospital are secure at all times. Temporarily, Me and my friends will make sure none of you in here get hurt. Is that.. Reasonable?'' Said Splinter as sweating.

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''Uh... Splinter Hood, Sargent, I don't have a phone, I just have a Squa- You know what? Let's do this my way.'' Said Splinter as loading the Sniper Rifle in his hooves. ''Listen, Mister. Don't go nagging now. I don't want to play war with you and your fancy police team now.'' Said Splinter as smirking. ''So.. Just let us continue doing what were doing and I won't have blood on my knife...'' Said Splinter.

((What Can I say? Splinter has a different approach. :3 Don't be mad now... :C ))

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((WOO! I'M CALIROLLS THE HOODIE NINJA AND I'M GOING TO REVIVE THIS RP!))

''Cameron! I need That tracking device!'' Splinter Barked as Cameron gave him the Tracking Device. ''If we go there by Truck it will take 2 hours.'' Said Splinter as saluting.

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Artemisia smiled, "I'm glad you have not forgotten." but she hesitated "Are you sure you wouldn't rather be helping with the investigation? I mean..."

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//holy balls guys, don't let it die D:

I regret leaving now xD

Hopefully Hig will come back.//

 

Ebony was lost in darkness. She felt like she was sinking in black water and couldn't tell which way was up. What happened? She thought. She felt weak; even in the depths of her comatose dream, she could barely move.

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