critique wanted Nightmare Shiny's First Story

[GodlyWolf Gusty 2,147]

Moments ago, Hadrien said:

Yeah, but that's too easy. I'm trying to see beyond the clues, to another possible reality where I'm right and you're wrong

Hahaha thats fair

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,729]

10 minutes ago, Gusty The Brave said:

 

Scroll up and you will see werewolves was the answer to the first clue lol

I actually used werewolves but I don't think those were humans during the day! However, they look like werewolves so... 

Edited October 29, 2023 by Shiny Silvermoon

[GodlyWolf Gusty 2,147]

2 minutes ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

I actually used werewolves but I don't think those were humans during the day! However, they look like werewolves so... 

Yeah I gathered that while listening to both stories lol

 

Hadrien read everypony not everybody if I heard correctly 

[Hadrien 950]

53 minutes ago, Gusty The Brave said:

Yeah I gathered that while listening to both stories lol

 

Hadrien read everypony not everybody if I heard correctly 

That's what was written ! 

[Evil Pink One 13,506]

Im telling you its real estate agents!

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,606]

20 hours ago, StrawberryMilk Simp said:

Im telling you its real estate agents!

STOP BLAMING US!!!! 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,729]

1 hour ago, Planeswalker Silky said:

STOP BLAMING US!!!! 

You are a real estate agent, @Planeswalker Silky?! It's okay, I still love you...