Some more drawings of my OC

[Krystal 1,468]

Okay so heres some more drawings of my OC, Krystal: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/krystal-r805. I'm still pretty new to drawing ponies so I'm going to stick to that as my excuse for any imperfections.

 

 

The eyes in this one are a little "derped", I know.

 

 

Let me know what you think

Edited June 23, 2012 by Jarrettlicious

[FortyShadows 217]

Cool OC! Now some tips XD

1st pic: rounder face, eyes larger, top of mane more ragged?

2nd pic: right eye could be larger

3rd pic: head looks almost detached o_O

But this is really good for one who's just started. Keep it up!

[False Perception 482]

Cool OC! Now some tips XD

1st pic: rounder face, eyes larger, top of mane more ragged?

2nd pic: right eye could be larger

3rd pic: head looks almost detached o_O

But this is really good for one who's just started. Keep it up!

 

1) I agree, head is boxy.

2) Missing something, could be.

3) I feel it to be really good, but the perspective could change for better results?

 

Also, the name reminds me of Star Fox Adventures.

Edited June 23, 2012 by frenzyhero

[Sky 746]

I like it though on the third pic the mouth needs to be a little more curved but except for that there all pretty good

[False Perception 482]

I really like her mane(s).

[Krystal 1,468]

Also, the name reminds me of Star Fox Adventures.

 

Yeah I realized that after I named her. She has nothing to do with her though. Edited June 23, 2012 by Jarrettlicious

[False Perception 482]

What's her Cutie Mark stand for?

[Krystal 1,468]

What's her Cutie Mark stand for?

 

A cresent moon (her quick witts) with a small dot in the middle (a period to signify that she finishes what she starts). I added the link to her profile at the top of the original post.

[Nah 3,182]

That's pretty nice looking, keep up the good work!

[Adolf 12]

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