pjsforever 89 July 13, 2012 Share July 13, 2012 (edited) Well, as the title said, here's my first try at drawing a pony: I didn't color her body very well because I was using stupid twistable "colored pencils" (more like super fine crayons). I sorta ruined her, and that's why I called her Rubin Jubillee. At least I have a picture of her before I colored her body, but I decided to post this instead. To be honest, I think I just got lucky this time xD my drawings are usually worse. Edited July 13, 2012 by cleva 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusty Soul 2,614 July 13, 2012 Share July 13, 2012 I think it's great! Good job 1 Soundcloud-------------------Facebook---------------------------Youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,289 July 13, 2012 Share July 13, 2012 My critique: Why is it so hard to find someone who draws pupils? Blank stares all around. Besides the blank stare, her eyes are well done, just many blank spots. Her mane is great, save the top portion where the hair gets too pointy and thin. Her horn isn't high enough on the head. Her body is pretty well made save the flank, which is a little too high in the air. Her hooves aren't flat enough. They need to round and be flat at the same time, or they don't look like hooves. Flawed, but adequate. 3/5 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SinisterMongoose 104 July 13, 2012 Share July 13, 2012 I think that you did pretty well for your first attempt. Ponies certainly take some time to get used to drawing. Trust me, I know. I think that you have good potential. Just keep on working at it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nah 3,182 July 13, 2012 Share July 13, 2012 It'd pretty decent for your first attempt, keep it up, with some practice, you'll get better. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjsforever 89 July 13, 2012 Author Share July 13, 2012 Thanks you guys! ^.^ My critique: Why is it so hard to find someone who draws pupils? Blank stares all around. Besides the blank stare, her eyes are well done, just many blank spots. Her mane is great, save the top portion where the hair gets too pointy and thin. Her horn isn't high enough on the head. Her body is pretty well made save the flank, which is a little too high in the air. Her hooves aren't flat enough. They need to round and be flat at the same time, or they don't look like hooves. Flawed, but adequate. 3/5 Yeah, now thinking back on it I've always had trouble with blank stares in my other drawings too... and I definitely had a lot of trouble with the flank. Thanks for the criticism! :3 Much appreciated. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pencil Hoof 169 July 13, 2012 Share July 13, 2012 My critique: Why is it so hard to find someone who draws pupils? Blank stares all around. Besides the blank stare, her eyes are well done, just many blank spots. Her mane is great, save the top portion where the hair gets too pointy and thin. Her horn isn't high enough on the head. Her body is pretty well made save the flank, which is a little too high in the air. Her hooves aren't flat enough. They need to round and be flat at the same time, or they don't look like hooves. Flawed, but adequate.3/5 Adding on to this, the front legs are bending the wrong way, the neck is a little long, and the dip in the hind legs are a little too high, or the body drops down too low (hard to tell which one Over all, a lot better than my first pony drawing XD 1 God over games Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjsforever 89 July 13, 2012 Author Share July 13, 2012 Adding on to this, the front legs are bending the wrong way, the neck is a little long, and the dip in the hind legs are a little too high, or the body drops down too low (hard to tell which one Over all, a lot better than my first pony drawing XD Thanks! I'll take that into consideration next time, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Chaos~ 3,971 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 Really nice choice of colours, looks great! Nice job 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snizox15 14 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 First pony art? This actually looks pretty nice. Keep it up. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Join the herd!Sign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now