~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 (edited) Alright, so this is a piece of fanart I did for the fanfiction 'A Precious Rainbow', by milesprower06. It is one of the many alternate endings to Sergeant Sprinkles infamous 'Cupcakes' grim dark fanfiction. Unlike the other 'alternate endings', this one really touched me. In this alternate ending, Applejack rescues Rainbow Dash while she was being tortured by Pinkie pie beneath sugarcube corner. Applejack accidentally kills pinkie pie in the process. She manages to get Rainbow Dash to emergency care just in time to save her life, but it was too late to re-attach her wings. This story focuses on Rainbow Dash trying to move on with her life while dealing with both the mental trauma of being brutally tortured by someone she thought she could trust, and having to come to terms that she could never fly again. This picture shows Rainbow Dash wallowing in her sorrow a few days after being released from the hospital. She is wearing her custom Wonderbolts hoodie that rarity made for her. It is just sinking in that because of her former friend, she will never be able to do the one thing that made her truly happy; fly. http://eljordo911.de...inbow-315561856 Not gonna lie, shed manly tears while reading this. heres the link if your curious: http://www.fanfictio...recious_Rainbow Any Critique would be welcome Edited July 19, 2012 by Eljordo 4 Signature by Klopp Wonka ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Officially taking Art Requests!: http://mlpforums.com/topic/65291-im-pretty-bored-taking-art-requests-3/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flicker Sweet 3,391 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 ............... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zerul 554 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 (edited) Nope gonna make me ball like a toddler can't do it to myself WTF is up with Pinkie always being the murderer in everything Edited July 19, 2012 by OdinForced "Why, am I not royal enough for you? Don't you know who I am?" Ooh! Ooh! More guessing games! Um... Pokey Smokes! How about Queen Meanie? No! Black Snooty, Black Snooty! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flicker Sweet 3,391 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 (edited) Nope gonna make me ball like a toddler can't do it to myself WTF is up with Pinkie always being the murderer in everything not always: Edited July 19, 2012 by Vexx3 That Tumblr is not forum appropriate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilight Sky 449 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 Not even gonna read, yes it is that sad.... 1 Twilight Sky OC Picture of some friends and me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpy Dash 233 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 I kinda wanna read cupcakes because everyone talks about it, but I really don't want to. I hear so many people talk about how they can never see Pinkie the same, and other awful stuff. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flicker Sweet 3,391 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 I kinda wanna read cupcakes because everyone talks about it, but I really don't want to. I hear so many people talk about how they can never see Pinkie the same, and other awful stuff. I wouldn't reccomend reading it as your FIRST fan-fic (mistake I made) because then you're not gonna wanna read a fan-fic ever again. But I still reccomend that you at least give it a shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilight Sky 449 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 I wouldn't reccomend reading it as your FIRST fan-fic (mistake I made) because then you're not gonna wanna read a fan-fic ever again. But I still reccomend that you at least give it a shot I know that feel bro....it was the first one I read too..... 2 Twilight Sky OC Picture of some friends and me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flicker Sweet 3,391 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 I know that feel bro....it was the first one I read too..... *trembles* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zerul 554 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 I kinda wanna read cupcakes because everyone talks about it, but I really don't want to. I hear so many people talk about how they can never see Pinkie the same, and other awful stuff. I made a whole thread about that when I first joined. Personally I want to forget that it even existed but if you must do it good luck. not always: In most cases 1 "Why, am I not royal enough for you? Don't you know who I am?" Ooh! Ooh! More guessing games! Um... Pokey Smokes! How about Queen Meanie? No! Black Snooty, Black Snooty! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FortyShadows 217 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 Aww that's really well done! I wanna give her a hug now. Q_Q I like the style too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066 July 19, 2012 Author Share July 19, 2012 Aww that's really well done! I wanna give her a hug now. Q_Q I like the style too! Why thank you ^.^ I kinda wanna read cupcakes because everyone talks about it, but I really don't want to. I hear so many people talk about how they can never see Pinkie the same, and other awful stuff. Honestly, I don't like Cupcakes myself, but I LOVE a precious Rainbow. If you do end up reading cupcakes, do yourself a favor and read a precious rainbow right after. just get ready to cry manly tears Signature by Klopp Wonka ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Officially taking Art Requests!: http://mlpforums.com/topic/65291-im-pretty-bored-taking-art-requests-3/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cocodrillo 1,565 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 (edited) Fanfics often gets me bored so I stop reading them, but I was willing to finish this one and so I did. And I must say it was really touching and beautiful. But just got on my mind.. remember Twilight´s wing spell? She could give Rainbow a pair of wings http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png And about the art? I like your watercolours-like style. And perfectly fits the story . Edited July 19, 2012 by Suntouched Coco Try to try again To see yourself again from time to time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juggler 345 July 19, 2012 Share July 19, 2012 I have read several sequels to cupcakes, but the only one who really touched my heart was this one. I felt so sorry for Rainbow Dash Damn you for remembering me with that picture Nah I'm kidding It's a really nice picture Signature made by Midnightive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066 July 19, 2012 Author Share July 19, 2012 Fanfics often gets me bored so I stop reading them, but I was willing to finish this one and so I did. And I must say it was really touching and beautiful. But just got on my mind.. remember Twilight´s wing spell? She could give Rainbow a pair of wings http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png And about the art? I like your watercolours-like style. And perfectly fits the story . True, twilight could give her a temporary set of wings, but remember how fragile they were? She may be able to go for a brisk glide, but she'll never be able to preform stunts or fly with any sort of speed ever again. And thank you I have read several sequels to cupcakes, but the only one who really touched my heart was this one. I felt so sorry for Rainbow Dash Damn you for remembering me with that picture Nah I'm kidding It's a really nice picture Thanks you, and yeah, this is definitely the best sequel to cupcakes hands down. Signature by Klopp Wonka ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Officially taking Art Requests!: http://mlpforums.com/topic/65291-im-pretty-bored-taking-art-requests-3/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PonyPassions 32 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 That is so sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066 July 20, 2012 Author Share July 20, 2012 That is so sad It is very sad but it's also a very touching story. You get to see Rainbow dash come to terms with the fact that she can't fly anymore and slowly move on with her life. She even finds something else that becomes her new passion, and she becomes happy again. It shows that every cloud has a silver lining, and to never give up on yourself; even if your entire life seems to have been ripped away from you. It's powerful stuff man, I recommend a read Signature by Klopp Wonka ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Officially taking Art Requests!: http://mlpforums.com/topic/65291-im-pretty-bored-taking-art-requests-3/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuggleLugs 53 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 this is the only alternate ending i read and im glad i chose this one, You did a real good job at capturing the image the author intended 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066 July 20, 2012 Author Share July 20, 2012 this is the only alternate ending i read and im glad i chose this one, You did a real good job at capturing the image the author intended Yeah, this is the first alternate ending I read, and it's the only one I actually liked. It was very touching And thank you 1 Signature by Klopp Wonka ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Officially taking Art Requests!: http://mlpforums.com/topic/65291-im-pretty-bored-taking-art-requests-3/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpy Dash 233 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 Just finished reading this, and to my surprise I actually thought this story was more happy than sad. Rainbow made a fast recovery, found something to replace flying, and even found out her cutie mark didn't just represent her love of flying. Awesome story, best ending to Cupcakes in my opinion. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavelColt 22,880 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 (edited) Ugh, there goes my happy mood </3 A very nice and emotional piece, I think you captured the facial expression well. I only skimmed A Precious Rainbow one day out of curiosity, but didn't go very far or into detail. Still, just by your description and the picture itself, it's depressing :/ Frankly far more depressing than Cupcakes itself. Gore and such is disgusting and can be hard to read about for some, but this sort of thing, the trauma, the depression of living like this after what happened is far more heart-wrenching than the original could ever be. Good job </3 Edited July 20, 2012 by ~Chaotic Discord~ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066 July 20, 2012 Author Share July 20, 2012 Ugh, there goes my happy mood </3 A very nice and emotional piece, I think you captured the facial expression well. I only skimmed A Precious Rainbow one day out of curiosity, but didn't go very far or into detail. Still, just by your description and the picture itself, it's depressing :/ Frankly far more depressing than Cupcakes itself. Gore and such is disgusting and can be hard to read about for some, but this sort of thing, the trauma, the depression of living like this after what happened is far more heart-wrenching than the original could ever be. Good job </3 Thank you, and sorry for ruining your happy mood I'm the same way, the gore of cupcakes really didn't sadden me, it was the fact that Rainbow Dash had to live with the trauma that did. The story does have a silver lining though, as she finds something else to fill the void of flying in her life. She doesn't give up on herself, and it was really heartwarming :') 1 Signature by Klopp Wonka ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Officially taking Art Requests!: http://mlpforums.com/topic/65291-im-pretty-bored-taking-art-requests-3/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavelColt 22,880 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 Thank you, and sorry for ruining your happy mood I'm the same way, the gore of cupcakes really didn't sadden me, it was the fact that Rainbow Dash had to live with the trauma that did. The story does have a silver lining though, as she finds something else to fill the void of flying in her life. She doesn't give up on herself, and it was really heartwarming :') Ah, well that's good. And it's also reassuring to know that her four friends will be by her all the time if she needs it. I imagine AJ, being the sternly mature but affectionate one, as well as Rainbow's long-time friendly rival, would be a corner stone in her road to getting her life back on track. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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