OC Request, Red Lightning

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

This was a request someone asked me to do a few days ago on DA. I had some time today and just needed to draw a little, so I figured I'd get this done here. Critiques are welcome to help further myself.

[Bari 7,023]

I like it, but it seems a bit disproportionate.

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

I like it, but it seems a bit disproportionate.

 

Where exactly

[Bari 7,023]

The wing and the hooves. The head seems pretty good though.

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

The wing and the hooves. The head seems pretty good though.

 

The hooves are like that on purpose. Since the show has a tendency of stretching and making it in odd places, I just took that and had them placed on the borders of the picture.

 

As for the wings, yeah, the bottom half should be flocked into itself instead of the three round bumps but I didn't think it hurt the picture overall from having it like that. It DOES look a bit off coming up like that and I agree with you there entirely, but it's supposed to come off next to the shoulder blades and instead of having it shoved outwards, I figured inwards was the better option. On sketch, it was.