my OC and his crew(critique wanted)

[Skullbuster 1,906]

so i had an idea and i thought to my self, hmm how can i make my OC even more bad ass(because you know, he isnt bad ass enough already) so i got the idea to give him 2 changeling buddies! because changelings are bad ass, and so they stand out, one has a tuxedo and the other one has a top hat! they dont have names yet, you can help me with that

 

so tell me what you think!

one note though, i did kinda mess up on the colt SMG and i altered the wing design of the changelings making them more insectiod

Edited July 29, 2012 by SkullBuster

[Spring Veil 255]

Nice drawing, I like the changelings suit and top hat. The only other things I could say for improvement you've already mentioned, like the AK-47's clip looks a little wide and the M4's looks a little long. But other than that it's a pretty good drawing. Keep up the good work!

[Skullbuster 1,906]

Nice drawing, I like the changelings suit and top hat. The only other things I could say for improvement you've already mentioned, like the AK-47's clip looks a little wide and the M4's looks a little long. But other than that it's a pretty good drawing. Keep up the good work!

 

thats actually not an M4, its a 9mm SMG called the Colt SMG, well it might have a different name, but im not sure, but thanks!

 

please other people, i would like a critique

[~Chaos~ 3,969]

Man, I don't think you can get more bad ass than that, the changelings, the guns, just oh so awesome!

 

Nice job

[Ol' Sarge 885]

Looks pretty good. I would like to see this juiced up. I mean basically, this is a nice rough draft, and I think if someone worked on a final product, this would be real cool. I know art's not your main deal, but I think your imagination is top notch.

[Skullbuster 1,906]

hey, you guys can suggest names for the changelings, they dont have any yet

 

and thanks for all the positive feedback, i didnt expect that

[Fox 5,331]

It's unique and gives it's own sense of style. I'm quite a fan of top hats, but when you include classy suits... It just adds more in my favour of it being awesome.

[ThatGuyWhoAteTheCookies 51]

It's awesome. Now all you need is colors... Yes, COLORS GOOD SIR!

 

 

Colors.

 

Also, I would put the leader, (Presumably you,) in a more facing forward position, and make his hind legs farther apart.

 

Names for the changelings:

Left: T.O.P., Hat, Sile, Bullet, One-Shot-Kill,

Right: Suit, Tux, Business, Auto, Trigger,

Just some suggestions. Give me credit if you use any of them!

Edited July 29, 2012 by ThatGuyWhoAteTheCookies

[Ol' Sarge 885]

To steal an idea from ThatGuyWhoAteTheCookies^^ how about Top Hat and Machine Gun Pony? Keep looking, somepony is bound to give a good one.

[FortyShadows 217]

Ok. Critique time I guess.

OC:

-All dem clothes. Anthro? I'm kidding; I think it works out.

-Tail should point downwards and be less "messy"

-Snout is either pointing down too much or your hat's pointing up too much

-Wing feathers should have gaps in between and be thicker

-Neck isn't aligned with body

-Hooves should be more rounded

 

Other things:

-Paper has a lot of smudges that should be erased

-A background would be cool

-Right changeling's eyes are too close together

 

That's all I can see...

[Jokuc 8,174]

It looks pretty good Skully, maybe some improvements could be made, but for a non art-experienced person this is good.

 

Sorry it took me forever to comment, I had 20 tabs open.

 

Also, which colors are your OC?I thought about making a vector since I am bored..

[Skullbuster 1,906]

It looks pretty good Skully, maybe some improvements could be made, but for a non art-experienced person this is good.

 

Sorry it took me forever to comment, I had 20 tabs open.

 

Also, which colors are your OC?I thought about making a vector since I am bored..

 

my OC is dark grey with black mane and tail, black jacket and fedora(fedora has white stripes) his aviators are mirrored, and his shirt is a darker shade of black than the jacket and fedora

 

hope this isnt too complicated

 

and lol i thought i had a lot of tabs open XD