Humanized Twilight Sparkle.

[Samurshy 708]

This was a quick drawing I did for my sister a couple nights back. It took me probably all of 10 minutes to finish the drawing. I fully plan on vectoring it in photoshop here soon, but I was just wondering what you thought. Do you guys like it? I know that there are smudges (I go eraser crazy sometimes), and I know that not all lines all lines are perfectly straight and that when shading her hair I may have gone outside the lines a bit. But other then those obvious striking errors, what else do I need to improve on?

Edited August 8, 2012 by Bronynonymous

[PonyEcho 1,610]

well its a good drawing but you could do with putting her cutie mark on the skirt to indicate that it is Twilight Sparkle and not just some mage.

[Samurshy 708]

Sadly, I even thought about doing so before uploading the picture. But when I drew it I was no where near a reference source, and I do not know her cutie mark by memory, so there you have it. In the vector I plan on adding the cutie mark to the shirt and the staff.

[Lolness The Hunt 39]

It would've been kind of hard to tell that this is Twilight Sparkle by the picture alone.

 

Anyways, she's a tad skinny which is fine except her hair is way too long and large.

 

Good try though.

[Mindrop 412]

I like it. It is a good take on her. Maybe not quite so skinny, but otherwise, i can't wait to see the vector.

[PlunderSteed 1,252]

A humanized version of Twilight Sparkle, and she doesn't have a unicorn horn? Always good to see. The horn always looks forced and out of place on a biped.