who wants to help me write a rap song?

[Skullbuster 1,906]

In the original, it's Eminem going 'meh meh meh meh meh' (or something) so why not go 'ha ha ha ha ha' in kind of a mocking voice, which represents the audience making fun of him because he isn't funny.

 

alright ill use this

 

i tested out the chorus, i found out that it needs to be a bit longer, i tried repeating it twice its just a tad too long

 

and so far i think we only have a 3rd of the first verse, im still thinking of stuff,

 

ok, heres another line for the first verse

 

im rhyming so hard your skulls gonna get busted

 

im thinking for a follow up line that ends in a "sted" sound

 

oh, now i have a bigger reason to complete this project

 

my real life friends will be stunned when they found out i made a song! i will be working on this even more now

[FedoraMemes 582]

alright ill use this

 

i tested out the chorus, i found out that it needs to be a bit longer, i tried repeating it twice its just a tad too long

 

and so far i think we only have a 3rd of the first verse, im still thinking of stuff,

 

ok, heres another line for the first verse

 

im rhyming so hard your skulls gonna get busted

 

im thinking for a follow up line that ends in a "sted" sound

 

oh, now i have a bigger reason to complete this project

 

my real life friends will be stunned when they found out i made a song! i will be working on this even more now

 

And that, is why it is worth making music. I can't wait till I start my music project, it's gonna be awesome.

 

I'll try and think of some more verses, got anymore ideas?

[Skullbuster 1,906]

And that, is why it is worth making music. I can't wait till I start my music project, it's gonna be awesome.

 

I'll try and think of some more verses, got anymore ideas?

 

well, ive spent some time and ive lengthen the first verse, but i dont think its long enough, ill post it soon

 

i still need the chorus to be a bit longer

 

for the second verse i was thinking it would contain jokes, and the 3rd verse would be complaining about the audience, i do have line for that verse:

hey buddy, step away from that pie

i see that twinkle in your eye

looking at me like im a bullseye

 

Current first verse:

Hi fillys and gentalcolts!

Your gonna love me cuz I'm all sorts of nuts and bolts

Oh come on guys don't be a bunch of dolts

Now lemme tell you something about me

I got more swag than you I'll bet you 8 bits

I'm so funny I'll leave pinkie pie in fits

But wait there's more, nope your off to the moon

Yet I'll be waiting for you, hope you come back soon

Oh much lulz will be had just wait and see

Because no more will we have celestian tyranny

Now listen here see

I'm rhyming so hard you skulls gonna get busted

My skills are so rad they're not the least bit rusted

Woah, you better watch out

So I don't spill my flow all over the row

 

I have not tested this against the beat, but I think it needs to be longer

 

i did test the verse, it still needs to be longer

 

i also completed a sketch of the cover art, ill probably upload that soon

 

and will probably make a status update to get attention to this project

[FedoraMemes 582]

@@Skullbuster, It's looking good so far! Here is some more:

 

Because you see, I'm not your average one trick pony,

I've got more jokes than the apples in sweet apple acres,

You can see now that I'm no big fat phony,

I'm on the stage screaming mother BUCK the haters,

 

(I edited it because I think 'buck' is better)

Edited August 31, 2012 by DylanKLJ

[Skullbuster 1,906]

@@Skullbuster, It's looking good so far! Here is some more:

 

Because you see, I'm not your average one trick pony,

I've got more jokes than the apples in sweet apple acres,

You can see now that I'm no big fat phony,

I'm on the stage screaming mother BUCK the haters,

 

(I edited it because I think 'buck' is better)

 

lol yeah i read it before the edit, i was most likely not going to use that one line

 

mainly because i know my mom will listen to this song XD

 

heres the cover art http://mlpforums.com/topic/31638-stand-up-cover-art-sketch/ its just a rough sketch however, but its an idea of what its going to look like, hope you like it, once the song is done, ill draw a better version and get it vectored

[Twiliscael 3,960]

I can't write raps for shit but I have one, and only one suggestion.

 

Actually, it's more of a requirement.

 

Make as many Trixie hate jokes as possible.

 

PLEASE,

[JeanHover 326]

My raps are tighter than Rarity's dress,

and compared to me, you're just a big mess,

If you're gonna tussle with me, you will see,

I'm not just another backstreet pony,

 

etc.

 

I'm not much of a rapper or writer, but I think this may fit into your song nice.