Vector art fanish oc thing

[Xero1 124]

So... Hi! i'm new. names Xero1 or 01 for short I introduced myself in the welcoming pages but... Truth be told this is more my scene. I'm an artist or rather I try to be. I love drawing things i've always got something in my head but anyway. I had a freind ask me to draw her as a pony for a bit of pocket change (hey I'm college student, I need food.) I agreed. then i went overboard and taught myself to vector on illustrator taking a grand total of 8 hours and some lost sleep time. but there are some issuse with my vector and I'd like some critique (by anypony but especially an experinced vector artist) before I hand her the final peice.

 

check it out here

http://johnshowes.de...ision-325584837

^also i'd like to know why the background goes black unless your in fullview... if anypony knows.

I have also attached it if you don't wanna visit DA.

Edited September 6, 2012 by Xero1