visual art Critique So Far?

[Cookie Feather 490]

So I've got an assignment in my new art class to create a fall-inspired piece of artwork.

I chose to make a Disney Halloween picture with the whole gang in front of the castle. I just need critique on my first character, Mickey Mouse!

 

 

EDIT: Just added Minnie! c:

 

I just wanna know if I nailed the shading. D8

Thank you~

Edited September 8, 2012 by Honey Puff

[Crispy 5,563]

I just wanna know if I nailed the shading. D8

 

I think the shading near the bottom of his eyes extends a little too high. Also, the white-ish shading in the middle of the shoes seems off to me, though I can't really place why. -__-

 

Looks great, though. I like his jack-o-lantern bow tie.

[Cookie Feather 490]

I think the shading near the bottom of his eyes extends a little too high. Also, the white-ish shading in the middle of the shoes seems off to me, though I can't really place why. -__-

 

Looks great, though. I like his jack-o-lantern bow tie.

 

Thanks for the feedback. c:

I dunno how to shade shoes correctly, it's kind of a weakness of mine, darn shoes! D8

I see what you mean about the shading in the eyes, but I looked at a ref and it's supposed to be like that, it still looks off~

[ErBoi 501]

Tell her how much I wish she was a human. Although, I suppose if it was humanized Fluttershy...Hello Best Birthday Present Ever!

How strange, this is not at all the thread this was supposed to be posted in, I meant to post it in the "Your favorite pony just kissed you' or whatever. Not sure I've ever made that mistake before...weird. Anywho, have a nice day.

Edited September 8, 2012 by ErBoi

[PonyEcho 1,610]

if the light is coming from were i think its coming from you've got the shading just right

also the shading around the eyes looks odd like he put make up on the wrong place