visual art Shoryuken! (Animation Test)

[Greg 33]

Shoryuken! Part of an Animation Tutorial I’m currently working on. It’ll be out in around 2 weeks, so keep your heads up!

 

youtube.com/glumauig21

 

Tell me what you guys think!

 

Shoryuken bump! Feedback is appreciated, everypony! It would really help me a lot, as a to-be-animator. Woooooooo let's do this!

[Wubsie 1,123]

This is pretty good! You'll be like Terkoiz in no time!

I wish I could animate like some people though. /:

I might start trying it looks pretty cool.

[Greg 33]

This is pretty good! You'll be like Terkoiz in no time!

I wish I could animate like some people though. /:

I might start trying it looks pretty cool.

 

Thanks! Although I'm kinda scared that you're staying true to your Username...Hahaha just kidding. I'll look up on this Terkoiz guy!

[Motion Spark 7,807]

why it looks so fast? slow it down bro

another thing, when he lands, make his knees bend down a little (this part is kind of slow), because he's landing to the floor, that way it would look much more realistic.

 

This animation look as stiff as a stickman ...

 

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.... stickman ...

 

forget, about all the shit I said, it's cool -_-

 

This is pretty good! You'll be like Terkoiz in no time!

I wish I could animate like some people though. /:

I might start trying it looks pretty cool.

 

OMG! I love this guy and his talent, buy I can't stand his tutorials, he's so annoying with his bad puns, ok some are good, but still, I'm there for learning animation, not for hearing his weird stuff :/

[Cranium Tyranus 216]

This is good for a start, but your gonna wanna put more frames inbetween the ones you already have. It'll make the animation go a lot smoother and the figure will look more alive, also while your putting the inbetweens in them, try to put more detail in where the arm goes up for the the uppercut, that way it'll look more organic rather then his arm going from bent to strait.

 

But still man, good for you, I animate as well, but I haven't posted any of my work for fear of scrutiny. Unless I'm 100% satisfied with the result myself, I have no confedinece in asking others how I can improve.