visual art Poisoneye snarl (need feedback)

[Feather Spiral 1,892]

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The shoulder, and indeed the rest of the arm/wing, was rushed. I realized I had made the neck too short as well - see her first references.

 

That's not what I'm asking for feedback about, however. It's the two zones circled with a '?' on their left.

 

As I understand on my own, the frill's bottom "rod" should've been pointing downwards more. And her 2 free fingers (minus the thumb) are supposed to be thicker at the base, around the first phalanx.

PS: She's crouching here, in case it's not very obvious, and her hand/wing is laid flat against the ground. Hence the digits put on the same horizontal plane.

For those who don't know her, Poisoneye has a forelimb with 6 digits.The membrane forming the wing part stretches between 3, and she has a "hand" portion formed by 3 clawed fingers (one being an opposable thumb). Edited October 6, 2012 by Feather Spiral

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For those who don't know her, Poisoneye has a forelimb with 6 digits.The membrane forming the wing part stretches between 3, and she has a "hand" portion formed by 3 clawed fingers (one being an opposable thumb).

 

wow bro, this is really amazing! I think it is really good! but, I could not critic someone to save my life XD

the only thing, if it is even wrong, id i think you should move the top of the wing a little lower, off the hand and right below the wrist. i don't know if its right, but i think it will look more realistic there.

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the only thing, if it is even wrong, id i think you should move the top of the wing a little lower, off the hand and right below the wrist. i don't know if its right, but i think it will look more realistic there.

I'm not sure what you mean by "off the hand and below the wrist"...

But if I got you right, that goes against her anatomy as I imagine it. See, it's like a hand, only with 3 fingers supporting the wing. And here, she's crouching (I should probably mention that in the desc), so it's laid flat against the ground.

 

Thanks for commenting. :3