Fluttershy Brobama Brohoof

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

Apparently it wasn't good enough for Equestria Daily, ,but Im looking for some constructive criticism to make it better. I have already started redoing the eyes, but is there something else in particular that I could do? Oh, and I am not voting for Obama (or Romney for that matter) It just seemed fitting considering the internet meme of Obama's Brohoof. THANKS SO MUCH!!!!!

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

I can see why it wasn't accepted in EQD (sorry if I sound mean :c)

 

Well the leg that is bro-hoofing Obama is a bit long compared to the rest of the legs. Fluttershy's eyes need some work. The ear is a bit too small, and the mane looks odd. Her body needs a little work too, she seems a bit chubby, and compared to her head it's a bit too big. You should try to use some references, because the face is a bit too wide.... also you should make the bush pink and add some eyelashes.

 

You should also try to crop that picture of Obama, and make it a bit more smooth along the edges.

 

Again, I'm really sorry if I sound too mean or too harsh, I hope the post helped in some way, I'm not trying to offend you or anything xD

[Crombie 32]

Yeah, well the blowjob picture I sent them the other didn't get featured either. Also they don't feature anything pornographic/political/religious, as far as I know.

 

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Because the reply box was like "Looks done. Herp-a-derp."

 

Anyway, getting featured on EQD doesn't really do anything for you. It's better to build an "audience" (if you want one) through networking. It's a business tactic a lot of people use on the webs or at least on Tumblr that's very efficient. (You should also research other business tactics, that's how you get popular, not features.)

 

Just keep in mind an audience on the internet is worthless unless you just like people looking at you, or you intend to sell them something like commissions or comics.

Edited October 18, 2012 by Crombie

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

I can see why it wasn't accepted in EQD (sorry if I sound mean :c)

 

Well the leg that is bro-hoofing Obama is a bit long compared to the rest of the legs. Fluttershy's eyes need some work. The ear is a bit too small, and the mane looks odd. Her body needs a little work too, she seems a bit chubby, and compared to her head it's a bit too big. You should try to use some references, because the face is a bit too wide.... also you should make the bush pink and add some eyelashes.

 

You should also try to crop that picture of Obama, and make it a bit more smooth along the edges.

 

Again, I'm really sorry if I sound too mean or too harsh, I hope the post helped in some way, I'm not trying to offend you or anything xD

 

Of course you didnt insult me at all! In fact that is EXACTLY what I wanted. Nobody with comments like "good" and No comments like "Its bad just because it is". This is super, Move Obama over so that the leg is shorter, reduce width on the head and body, and then make the tail more... Puffy and stuff. Thanks!