writing Just one more word

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Just a word, not much to tell.

Just two words, together this duet.

Three words now, A sntence forming.

Onto the fourth, senses come to life.

Now, on five, a world is made abundantly clear.

And unto six, my heart is opened.

 

On my seventh word, I change the pace.

On my eigth word, I reveal that pain.

Forward now, on to nine, I show the mercy in them.

Left with ten, I continue new meaning.

the eleventh, joyous, such glee.

Twelve words now, what is left to see?

 

These words I write, in order, or not. I find them to be the easiness that rests upon me, their meanings are the wieght that binds me to this world. So I must ask, no, I place myself in beggars shoes and plead with you! Just one more word, I need them so.

 

 

 

-David Favret

[LightRaider 148]

Awww yea. more poetry from you! I love this one too, much more lighthearted then the last ones you wrote

I loved it regardless, and i can't wait to see more from you

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Awww yea. more poetry from you! I love this one too, much more lighthearted then the last ones you wrote

I loved it regardless, and i can't wait to see more from you

 

Why thank you, you will find that most of what I have wriiten thus far has not been very dark like Dedication of the damned.

 

However I fell the need to direct you to the link in my status.... perhaps you would like that one?