Okay, here we go!

[ThatBronyGirl 49]

I would like to show off some of my art.. constructive critisism is apriciated

 

 

 

First we have some OC (Honey Swirl)

 

 

 

Then an art trade (Strawberry Syrup http://mlp-strawberr...deviantart.com/)

 

 

 

Then a panty shot (Honey Swirl)

 

 

 

...What? You didn't think I was a perv or somthing

 

/edit/ I should probobly link my DA http://smilebud.deviantart.com/

Edited November 5, 2012 by ThatBronyGirl

[Mephala 2,635]

*gasp*

I LOVE Strawberry Syrup!~

She's so cute!

I'll be sure to check out your dA some more, I like your style. And dat panty shot *laughs*

[Arrow 236]

GOD, I WANT TO LICK THAT CUTIE MARK. LOOKS. SO. GOOD. *drools all over keyboard*

 

... Seriously I got an sudden urge to eat honey D: Great drawing nevertheless.

[ThatBronyGirl 49]

*gasp*

I LOVE Strawberry Syrup!~

She's so cute!

I'll be sure to check out your dA some more, I like your style. And dat panty shot *laughs*

 

Isn't she? I wish I had come up with her.. Her owner is so creative.

 

I'm glad you like my style, I just started to post on DA again, so I've improved alot

[Standard User 2,127]

(Has NO idea how to critique art)

 

I really like that first picture's shading...and coloring...and shiny-ness...I just really like that first picture.

 

Strawberry is ADORABLE. All the d'aawww is drained from me after viewing that pic.

 

And dat panty shot. Well done! Consider yourself followed on dA (now that I ACTUALLY HAVE a deviantART account...)

[ThatBronyGirl 49]

You guys are so nice I still have a long way to go until I can figure myself possible for Equestria Daily (My dream), so any critques will help a lot.

[Throwaway19573639385 764]

They're looking great! I don't have anything to add as a critique. Well, maybe just one thing, the background of the second picture blends a bit too well with the colour of the pony itself. Aside from that they look amazing. Both Honey Swirl and Strawberry Syrup look great, not too simple and not too complex, just the right mix of awesome. I like Honey Swirl the most, her colour pallete appeals me the most.

[Dr_Waveband 745]

These are really cute! There are some things that could look better, though. Slightly darker body outlines would give the ponies a sharper and neater look, and Strawberry's body looks just a bit too elongated - try to imagine what she'd look like on four hooves with those proportions. Still, it's nigh-imperceptible. Finally, the third image is way too adorable. I wouldn't change that, though.

[MuniMoose 489]

Very nice looking but something we suggest is shadowing. For example with your OC could have darker tones under her chest, wings, and along the floor. The same would go for Strawberry, but as for all around love them and we'll love to see more of your work around the forums.

[Nocive 39]

Honey Swirl is so cute! Although I do recommend that you avoid blurring too much. Remember: Solid shading and lighting is good too! (Unless it's a crystal pony.) Too much blurring makes it look a bit odd, and a bit too bright. Otherwise, keep it up!

[JeanHover 326]

Haha, I saw that first one in the Character Database. I love it! You surely are a magnificent artist. It's a very cute and original style you have there. I will check out your DA and await more works for my eyes to bask in.

Edited November 5, 2012 by Jverne

[Lightning Fluttershy 1,845]

Cute. I like how you have two different perspectives of Honey Swirl and although Strawberry syrup only has one the artwork is still terrific. Good job.

[ThatBronyGirl 49]

Honey Swirl is so cute! Although I do recommend that you avoid blurring too much. Remember: Solid shading and lighting is good too! (Unless it's a crystal pony.) Too much blurring makes it look a bit odd, and a bit too bright. Otherwise, keep it up!

 

Thanks, it was my first try, so i'll try to keep the blur to a minimum

 

Very nice looking but something we suggest is shadowing. For example with your OC could have darker tones under her chest, wings, and along the floor. The same would go for Strawberry, but as for all around love them and we'll love to see more of your work around the forums.

 

I tried to do some but it wasn't very pronounced.. I'll work on that.

 

These are really cute! There are some things that could look better, though. Slightly darker body outlines would give the ponies a sharper and neater look, and Strawberry's body looks just a bit too elongated - try to imagine what she'd look like on four hooves with those proportions. Still, it's nigh-imperceptible. Finally, the third image is way too adorable. I wouldn't change that, though.

 

I'll try darker outlines Strawberry Syrup has a slightly elongated body in her ref, so I included it

 

They're looking great! I don't have anything to add as a critique. Well, maybe just one thing, the background of the second picture blends a bit too well with the colour of the pony itself. Aside from that they look amazing. Both Honey Swirl and Strawberry Syrup look great, not too simple and not too complex, just the right mix of awesome. I like Honey Swirl the most, her colour pallete appeals me the most.

 

Why thank you I agree.. the background on Strawberry's picture needs work..

[Pix3M 607]

To add to what another person said, I would darken body outlines to feel just as dark as the outlines on the hair. You have very clear contrast from hair to its outline but you don't see the same contrast from body to its outline.

[Arrow 236]

Were the eyes made to resemble honey as well?

 

And the background looks like maple syrup, omnomnom <3

 

I really want to eat your OC now ;__;

[Luriel Maelstrom 253]

Panty shot was the best xD

Anyways, good art, really good.

If you like doing something a lot, you should do it. I would draw more ponies but I don't have enough time, maybe on weekends I will