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Ace lost his anger when he lifted up Star "sorry, sorry yes we need to get you somewhere safe." Ace said walking up to the guards. "We need help! We got wounded!" Ace then looked over to Swish. "ok I must admit I blacked out when I charged in what happened?" Ace asked.

 

"You picked up a sword and began to fight with Sharaku if that's what you mean. You really flew into a rage." Swish said.

 

 

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30 clad ponies  in silver armor, all bearing spears twice their height. In unison they galloped onto the hill, surrounding the small company in seconds. They were still suspicious of these new comers, unsure of why or where they came from. A larger pony stood forward, his helmet topped with a large red crest. He withdrew his spear as he spoke.

 

"What business does a Pegasi, a Unicorn and an Earth Pony have near Hoofington?" None responded . "Speak quickly."

 

Their were nearly fifty guard surrounding them, each with his spear aimed directly at the group. They were a grim and hard fought bunch, all of them veterans of war against the Crystal Empire. The Timberwolf Riders were right to flee before them.

 

Swish looked back at Star and Ace as if to confirm what to say. He turned back to the guards, remaining calm.

"We don't mean any harm." Swish felt like he has said this many, many times before... "We're not one of those soldiers that you scared off." Swish smiled, "In fact, we're fighting against them. That's not the point though, one of us got shot by an arrow, and the it's is barbed. She's losing blood by the minute, so we have to get it out and treat is as soon as possible!"

Edited by N8C8

A strange boy and his dog came walking through here earlier today...

 

My OC: Swish

 

"I did not tell half of what I saw... for I knew I would not be believed..." -Marco Polo

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Swish looked back at Star and Ace as if to confirm what to say. He turned back to the guards, remaining calm. "We don't mean any harm." Swish felt like he has said this many, many times before... "We're not one of those soldiers that you scared off." Swish smiled, "In fact, we're fighting against them. That's not the point though, one of us got shot by an arrow, and the arrow is barbed. She's losing blood by the minute, so we have to get it out and treat is as soon as possible!"

 

"They were after you? What would you have that would warrant the attention of those devils?" The leader turned to the injured mare, she was in no state to make the journey herself. "We can answer these questions when we reach the city. Ruby, Goldhelm, take this mare to the hospital as fast as your wings may carry you."

 

The two soldiers took Star in their hooves and flew towards the city walls. The commander turned back the the two remaining ponies. "You will come with us. We will see to it your friend is treated, though it would seem she was hit by one of their poison arrows. Whether she will survive... I don't know."

 

The remaining guard lifted their spears, no longer pointing them at the company. "We must get back within the walls. We do not know if the Wolves will return."


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"They were after you? What would you have that would warrant the attention of those devils?" The leader turned to the injured mare, she was in no state to make the journey herself. "We can answer these questions when we reach the city. Ruby, Goldhelm, take this mare to the hospital as fast as your wings may carry you."

 

The two soldiers took Star in their hooves and flew towards the city walls. The commander turned back the the two remaining ponies. "You will come with us. We will see to it your friend is treated, though it would seem she was hit by one of their poison arrows. Whether she will survive... I don't know."

 

The remaining guard lifted their spears, no longer pointing them at the company. "We must get back within the walls. We do not know if the Wolves will return."

"Yeah, I will be going with Star. If you don't mind." Ace took off and catched up with the two soldiers who were carrying Star. "She better be alright, she better be." Ace mutterd to himself, his voice neither happy, sad, or angry it sounded...empty like he didn't know what to feel yet.

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Weightless, that was what Star Felt when she awoke. She looked down and saw she was on the backs of two Pegasi, one blue and one light green; to the left was Ace keeping pace with them. "What? where am I?" Star asked Ace cringing at the sight of how high they were. Star Flare was not a fan of heights, she fell from her balcony in the castle when she was a filly her mother caught her before she hit the ground, but ever since she'd been deathly afraid of high places, falling, and worst of all, flying. "G-g-g-get...me d-d-down!" Star said panicking. 


"My soul shines brighter than any star in the galaxy, for my soul is a Blue Flame." ~Star Flare

 

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Weightless, that was what Star Felt when she awoke. She looked down and saw she was on the backs of two Pegasi, one blue and one light green; to the left was Ace keeping pace with them. "What? where am I?" Star asked Ace cringing at the sight of how high they were. Star Flare was not a fan of heights, she fell from her balcony in the castle when she was a filly her mother caught her before she hit the ground, but ever since she'd been deathly afraid of high places, falling, and worst of all, flying. "G-g-g-get...me d-d-down!" Star said panicking. 

Ace flew over to star when she looked paniked "whoa, calm down Star, these guards aint gunna let you fall, why do you look scared don't you know how to fly?" Ace asked with a confused look. "Beside the guards are taking you to the hospital to get that wound treated."

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Ace flew over to star when she looked paniked "whoa, calm down Star, these guards aint gunna let you fall, why do you look scared don't you know how to fly?" Ace asked with a confused look. "Beside the guards are taking you to the hospital to get that wound treated."

(OOC: Don't know if this is breaking the "Alicorn rule" but I guess she sort of has to be an alicorn, but if anyone has a problem with this post I'll change it, I just got confused bye Ace's post...I'm not a Pegasus... :unsure: )

"N-no, my wings haven't fully developed, y-y-yet." Star said through her shaking "I'm still only just a bit shy of being a filly, like 15, I lose track of time in the castle." Star explained starting to calm down now, realizing these pegasi weren't going to drop her. She decided it would be best to just lay down on their backs to rest. Too much movement isn't good for her wound.


"My soul shines brighter than any star in the galaxy, for my soul is a Blue Flame." ~Star Flare

 

My OC: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-flare-r1916

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(OOC: Don't know if this is breaking the "Alicorn rule" but I guess she sort of has to be an alicorn, but if anyone has a problem with this post I'll change it, I just got confused bye Ace's post...I'm not a Pegasus... :unsure: )

"N-no, my wings haven't fully developed, y-y-yet." Star said through her shaking "I'm still only just a bit shy of being a filly, like 15, I lose track of time in the castle." Star explained starting to calm down now, realizing these pegasi weren't going to drop her. She decided it would be best to just lay down on their backs to rest. Too much movement isn't good for her wound.

(OOC: Oh no! How did I read that wrong?! I thought the species section of the charecter said Alicorn! Hahaha ahh I feel so ashamed :lol: sorry for the confusion my bad)

Ace chuckled"Then that's make twoof us, my wings are not realy good either." As if to prove his point Ace acedently fodled his wingscausing him to drop but quickly opens them up. (i'm not gonna get over this epic fail :lol:)

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(OOC: Oh no! How did I read that wrong?! I thought the species section of the charecter said Alicorn! Hahaha ahh I feel so ashamed :lol: sorry for the confusion my bad)

Ace chuckled"Then that's make twoof us, my wings are not realy good either." As if to prove his point Ace acedently fodled his wingscausing him to drop but quickly opens them up. (i'm not gonna get over this epic fail :lol:)

 

(OOC: No big deal, secretly I wanted to make her an alicorn anyway, not for the op just cause I'd like to fly, although I love magic...now I can implement that...yay  ^_^)

Star giggled at the Pegasus's stumble, though she couldn't help but feeling he was just trying to make her feel better. The pegasi began to descend quickly and Star Flare was weightless for a momentmuch to her dismayand she quickly fell back to the pegasi's back. Below was the Hoofington hospital, the wooden building kept to the rustic forest look of the town. With a log frame and tree decor all over the building. Star Flare sighed with relief and sat her head down to rest as the pegasi descended.

 

As soon as they were on the ground, Star was rushed off to a doctor. Passing other patients who looked like they'd suffered from mercenaries as well. Those Timber-Riders must have occupied this town for a while. Star then felt she wasn't very important any more, her people were.


"My soul shines brighter than any star in the galaxy, for my soul is a Blue Flame." ~Star Flare

 

My OC: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-flare-r1916

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Rift heard a commotion outside. He went outside to check but he was too late to see the pegasi arrive at the hospital. He asked around and found out that the injured pony was in fact the pony he was looking for. He returned to the inn to wait. These things take time and he wouldn't want to hurt a pony by rushing them into something before they were ready.


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Rift heard a commotion outside. He went outside to check but he was too late to see the pegasi arrive at the hospital. He asked around and found out that the injured pony was in fact the pony he was looking for. He returned to the inn to wait. These things take time and he wouldn't want to hurt a pony by rushing them into something before they were ready.

Ace walked in the inn after being forced to leave the hospital because he was distracting the doctors once Ace walked in he saw Rift again. "Hey! I know you your.....that pony from berfore! Rift was it? Is this where you ended up after your little disapearing act?"

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Ace walked in the inn after being forced to leave the hospital because he was distracting the doctors once Ace walked in he saw Rift again. "Hey! I know you your.....that pony from berfore! Rift was it? Is this where you ended up after your little disapearing act?"

"I am surprised that you remember me. Our meeting was brief earlier." Rift responded He continued to explain why he had disappeared  leaving out the part about his arm, which was hidden beneath his cloak. "I fear that there are dark powers working in this land. One of which seeks to tear it apart. Which is what brought me here. I need to speak to your friend, the fire mage. She is, or knows where to find someone who is, strong enough to heal this dimension."


Why is it called Common Sense if it is not that common?

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"I am surprised that you remember me. Our meeting was brief earlier." Rift responded He continued to explain why he had disappeared  leaving out the part about his arm, which was hidden beneath his cloak. "I fear that there are dark powers working in this land. One of which seeks to tear it apart. Which is what brought me here. I need to speak to your friend, the fire mage. She is, or knows where to find someone who is, strong enough to heal this dimension."

"Heh, you think I would be surprised by that but after what i found out, I'm willing to accept anything now. As for Star well you could try to talk to her but I think the doctors will just kick you out like they did to me...but i'm not going into detail about why they did."

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"You insolent fool!"

 

Sharaku's head burst like a grape under the pressure of Silmor's magic, his lifeless body falling to the tiled floor. The Dark Lord stood from his throne and looked out over the empire from his balcony. Too long had the outlying cities and towns of Equestria evaded his reach, too long had they mocked him. Canterlot was lost to madness, but that did not mean he could claim something from this. The guard would be depleted after the attack, resources worn thin with a tide of refugees. Sharaku had mentioned that they were heading to Hoofington. Perhaps the Rift Tearer was there as well. Kill two birds with one stone; take the city and find the Rift Tearer.

 

"Grishnak!"

 

The Heavy clad second in command stood next to Sharaku's body, giving it an uneasy gaze.

 

"Take the second legion, turn the city to ashes."

 

"Yes my lord."

 

Silmor returned to his dark iron throne, turning back to face the nervous crystal pony.

 

"Do not disappoint me, captain. You have 5000 soldiers under your command, more than enough to bring the city to it's knees. Your failure will not be tolerated. Bring me the Rift Tearer, alive!"


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Ace walked in the inn after being forced to leave the hospital because he was distracting the doctors once Ace walked in he saw Rift again. "Hey! I know you your.....that pony from berfore! Rift was it? Is this where you ended up after your little disapearing act?"

 

'Eyuck!' Star thought, breathing in the the sterile hospital smell.

 

She hated this smell, so unnatural; made by ponies, not nature. Star was wheeled into an operating room and then she went black, obviously under the influence of anesthesia. She dreamed of the library, all the books she could ever read, the peace the serenity, everything so...bliss. Then she was ripped away from it, torn back to reality unwillingly by the lessening effects of the medicine. Star sighed softly as she began to regain feeling in her hooves, she thanked the doctors, dropped a couple gold coins-brought from the castle when she fled-in their hooves and left the hospital. She headed down the street and into the inn, where Ace stood next to the Rift pony from the battle at the Crystal Empire.

 

'Strange' Star thought as she walked up to the two colts.


"My soul shines brighter than any star in the galaxy, for my soul is a Blue Flame." ~Star Flare

 

My OC: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-flare-r1916

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'Eyuck!' Star thought, breathing in the the sterile hospital smell.

 

She hated this smell, so unnatural; made by ponies, not nature. Star was wheeled into an operating room and then she went black, obviously under the influence of anesthesia. She dreamed of the library, all the books she could ever read, the peace the serenity, everything so...bliss. Then she was ripped away from it, torn back to reality unwillingly by the lessening effects of the medicine. Star sighed softly as she began to regain feeling in her hooves, she thanked the doctors, dropped a couple gold coins-brought from the castle when she fled-in their hooves and left the hospital. She headed down the street and into the inn, where Ace stood next to the Rift pony from the battle at the Crystal Empire.

 

'Strange' Star thought as she walked up to the two colts.

(OOC: and here I was gonna sneak into your hospital room)

 

Rift noticed the mare's entrance and moved over to her, offering his shoulder for support. "You should be resting. I may have something of importance to tell you but It will do no good if you kill yourself first." Rift was very careful to keep his right forleg under his cloak, no sense freaking anypony out with his...condition


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Swish walked into the inn. He saw Ace walk in here before, so he though he might join him. To his surprise, Star was there, apparently feeling better and out of the hospital.

"Wow, you're feeling better already? That was oddly quick." He said, walking to the group she was in.

Swish made out Ace and another familiar face. He couldn't quite get the name, but he was certain he had seen this pony before.

He turned to the familiar pony, "I know you, don't I? It's... "R" something, right?"


A strange boy and his dog came walking through here earlier today...

 

My OC: Swish

 

"I did not tell half of what I saw... for I knew I would not be believed..." -Marco Polo

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Rift looked around the room. The small group was receiving several stares from the other patrons.

"Perhaps we should take this somewhere more private. There is a room upstairs we can use, The dragons are already there."

Rift led the way up the stairs and into the room where the two dragons were resting. He turned towards the other ponies and began

"This is a long explanation so I am not sure where to begin..."

 

(Long story short Rift reveals that he is from the Void and explains that the world is falling apart and only a very powerful magician can cast a spell to seal the rifts. Rift can show the magician what needs to be done with the spell, but he cannot cast it himself)

 

(OOC: now might be a good time to introduce the Keeper, i think.)

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Rift looked around the room. The small group was receiving several stares from the other patrons.

"Perhaps we should take this somewhere more private. There is a room upstairs we can use, The dragons are already there."

Rift led the way up the stairs and into the room where the two dragons were resting. He turned towards the other ponies and began

"This is a long explanation so I am not sure where to begin..."

 

(Long story short Rift reveals that he is from the Void and explains that the world is falling apart and only a very powerful magician can cast a spell to seal the rifts. Rift can show the magician what needs to be done with the spell, but he cannot cast it himself)

 

(OOC: now might be a good time to introduce the Keeper, i think.)

"Wait, wait, wait a powerful magician? Now hold on I think I read something about a powerful Magician but...I can't seem to remeber the name, i'm use to that but now is a good time to remeber that! Gah!" Ace slammed his head on the wall trying to knock some memories back into his head.

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"Wait, wait, wait a powerful magician? Now hold on I think I read something about a powerful Magician but...I can't seem to remeber the name, i'm use to that but now is a good time to remeber that! Gah!" Ace slammed his head on the wall trying to knock some memories back into his head.

"Well normally there would be several options for such a spell. In the past the dimensional guards have gone to Princess Celestia and later one Twilight Sparkle, as well as other rulers for this spell but the only ruler I have met so far may have been the one to cause all this in the first place. Not to mention he was stark raving mad." He ran his claw through his short mane as he considered who could possibly cast the sealing spell. He came up blank, unless Star could but he was still unsure


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@@@Flying Ace,

 

Suddenly from the doorway entered a heavily armored guard. No, the same one that had saved them from the Timberwolf pack. He took no time for greetings, instantly jumping to the what he had come for. Based on his facial expression alone it was probably bad news.

 

"All of you need to come with me immediately. There is little time to explain." He signaled two more guard to enter, trotting up to either side. "The city is under attack from the Crystal Empire. We have to get the civilian population mobilized, any stallion who can bear a sword is being called to fight."


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@@@Flying Ace,

 

Suddenly from the doorway entered a heavily armored guard. No, the same one that had saved them from the Timberwolf pack. He took no time for greetings, instantly jumping to the what he had come for. Based on his facial expression alone it was probably bad news.

 

"All of you need to come with me immediately. There is little time to explain." He signaled two more guard to enter, trotting up to either side. "The city is under attack from the Crystal Empire. We have to get the civilian population mobilized, any stallion who can bear a sword is being called to fight."

 

"So, we're going into battle? Already?" Swish looked to the other ponies, "While Star was out, I thought about trying some new things..." He chuckled as he took out his sword and shield."New tactics, attacks, things like that. I'm ready when you guys are, and you'll probably have to be ready whithin the next couple of seconds."

Edited by N8C8

A strange boy and his dog came walking through here earlier today...

 

My OC: Swish

 

"I did not tell half of what I saw... for I knew I would not be believed..." -Marco Polo

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Rift cursed at the interruption. He turned towards Star and spoke in an extremely serious tone; "Do you think you can cast the spell? I need an answer. Now!" Rift was practically shouting, showing how urgent this was.

 

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(OOC: your answer will decide if we (Rift and Star) stay and fight, or leave for other things)

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Rift cursed at the interruption. He turned towards Star and spoke in an extremely serious tone; "Do you think you can cast the spell? I need an answer. Now!" Rift was practically shouting, showing how urgent this was.

 

@@BlueFlame

(OOC: your answer will decide if we (Rift and Star) stay and fight, or leave for other things)

 

"yes, I can. Although, I need to find a relic in the ancient ruins of the princess sisters' castle, in the ever free forest." Star said fearing her words had set more in motion than she'd planned. "But only I can go, The traps in the castle only deactivate to those of royal blood, I will not risk my friends life, but I'll need a guide, Rift can you take me there?" Star asked turning to Rift. 

Edited by BlueFlame

"My soul shines brighter than any star in the galaxy, for my soul is a Blue Flame." ~Star Flare

 

My OC: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-flare-r1916

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"So, we're going into battle? Already?" Swish looked to the other ponies, "While Star was out, I thought about trying some new things..." He chuckled as he took out his sword and shield."New tactics, attacks, things like that. I'm ready when you guys are, and you'll probably have to be ready whithin the next couple of seconds."

 

"yes, I can. Although, I need to find a relic in the ancient ruins of the princess sisters' castle, in the ever free forest." Star said fearing her words had set more in motion than she'd planned. "But only I can go, The traps in the castle only deactivate to those of royal blood, I will not risk my friends life, but I'll need a guide, Rift can you take me there?" Star asked turning to Rift, urging him to hurry. 

"Alright, while you and Rift are handling that me and Swish can stay and help defend this town, give another kick to Silmor and his army." Ace said giving up on remebering the name. It will come to me sooner or later. Ace thought as his mind was now thinking of the battle ahead.

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"yes, I can. Although, I need to find a relic in the ancient ruins of the princess sisters' castle, in the ever free forest." Star said fearing her words had set more in motion than she'd planned. "But only I can go, The traps in the castle only deactivate to those of royal blood, I will not risk my friends life, but I'll need a guide, Rift can you take me there?" Star asked turning to Rift. 

Rift nodded. "Take care of those two. They have been through a lot already." He said indicating the Dragons. Turning back to Star he grabbed her hoof with his fore-hoof. "Hold on tight."

He concentrated for a moment before pressing his claw against the air. There was a resistance there that he eventually pushed past the air rippling as a gate opened into a predetermined location in the world. He stepped through, leading Star. The gate closed behind them. leaving no evidence that it had ever existed. They appeared to be standing on nothing. surrounded by the same. He started walking, expecting Star to follow. He waited for her to ask the inevitable question; where were they.


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