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Shade gasped and woke up... She was panting after waking up...

"Il show them bad... Il show all of them"

 

She looked up and saw discord heading her way...

 

"What's happening discord? Getting ready for the rain? Because now... I'm ready when you are! Thees ponies can't maintain a good friendship, even without your discording powers... I think this is going to be easy."


 

 

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Yavolin looked at her."Luna... I can't lose you to Discord if there is a way to save you i will take it but please reconisder and run away with me we can leave ponyville and hide out in the everfree forest or somewhere far away where discord can't find us". Yavolin was crying openingly at this point.


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Luna looked at Yavolin, seeming upset.  "Yavolin, please don't cry!" she hugged him.  "I...I couldn't run away even if I wanted to!  Its...its my duty!"

 


 

Discord nodded at Shade.  "Oh, I've just got one more little thing to do," he smiled.  He was pretty rest-up but still felt a little tired.  But if he was going to rule Equestria, he wouldn't have much more sleep.

Oh well.  A small price to pay.

Discord went into Luna's room.  Princess Celestia's lack of magic had made the force field disappear. 

Luna was curled up on her bed, glowing slightly.  Discord knew this meant she was in another ponies dream, but otherwise asleep.  Yavolin was sleeping on a chair, but seemed quite shaken. 

Discord slowly lifted up Luna in his arm.  Luna gave a slight shake.  Discord held her gently, like a filly.

 


 

Luna made a slight jerk in the dream.  Luna gasped.  "I...I..." Luna let out a cry as she got jerked again.  "Wait, Yavolin, some ponies waking me up...I---"

And then she was gone

 


 

Luna blinked and looked up.  She gasped and pushed away.  Discord held her tighter.

"Luna, don't fight.  There's no reason for you to get hurt," he said, gently.  So gentle it scarred her.

"What!   No!  Get off me!  What are you doing?!"

"I'm just taking you away.  So that no pony can stop this chaos.  Now, don't fight, and I won't hurt you."

"But---"

"Luna.  Shut up."

And he pulled her out of the room as she began screaming.  Discord flew upwards and gave Shade a salute.  "See ya!" he grinned.  He disappeared.


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Shade watched discord take Luna away...

 

She grinned

 

* hahaha this is so awesome! *

 

As discord flew away with Luna... She saluted back...

 

* I think il play a little game *

 

Shade transformed into Luna, got rid of the horn and wings...

 

Looking like Luna, she ran out into the hall


 

 

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Yavolin screamed."Luna"! He awoke he saw that she was no longer in her bed, he called out to her."Luna! where are you"? Yavolin had to find Luna but he didn't care if he died but he had to find Luna and save her from what ever fate as became her. Yavolin began to worry for his Luna.

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As soon as shade was far enough away... She turned back and started to run back to yavolin...

 

"Yavolin!!!"

 

She got to yavolin

 

"Pant* pant* I'm... I'm... Discord just... Pant* pant*"

 

She lost her balence and put her hooves around yavolin

 

She was still out of breath

 

* hahaha! This is way past cool! I'm so awesome! Good idea discord! *


 

 

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Yavolin saw Luna , or what he thought was Luna."Luna, i am so happy your alright, please tell me what did Discord do to you"? Yavolin kissed the fake Luna on the forehead believing what he saw but he felt like something was off if Discord attacked she'll be fighting to the death even thought she had no horn.

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Once yavolin kissed her... She felt an unusual feeling of power...

* could I be feeding on him? Crystalice told me once I have a pony like this... Hahaha! Finaly I can feed on love for once!!! *

 

'Luna' caught her breath..

 

"Discord tried to take me... But shade came out of nowhere and freed me... She told me to run, so that what I did. I don't know what shade is doing... When I looked back, she was attacking him"

 

"I don't know why discord wanted to take me away... But I don't know what to do, it seems too dangerous for me to stay here"


 

 

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Yavolin raised an eye brow he remembered what Luna said to her in the dream it was her duty to stay and fight discord and Yavolin knew his Luna."Wait are you saying you want to run away with me"? Yavolin looked at Luna looking for anything out of the ordinary.


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(Sorry I haven't been posting D:)

 

Metal & Lightning were conversing, occasionally waking up another pony when their voices escalate quickly. Then, after a while, they brought up Discord.

 

"I thought I heard you talking about Discord a while before. What about him?", Lightning asked.

 

Metal's face turned rose red. "Oh, well, uh... nothing really."

 

"C'mon...", Lightning pressured.

 

"Its, uh... complicated...", he replied quickly.

 

Lightning Dancer gave him a look, and Metal figured out that he lost a while ago. He sighed.

 

"Well?" Lightning asked.

 

"Its about how he 'Discords' ponies."

 

"Yesh, why?"

 

"Usually that is when their personality flips, right?"

 

"I dunno."

 

Metal took a look outside of the window. "Its getting late, we should be getting some sleep.

 

Lightning was in no mood to object, sso she waved good-bye, and left for bed.

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"its not safe for me, but i am princess of the night and my duty is to stay and guard the castle, even in times like thees" 

 

said 'luna' 

 

* he seems to be buying it... and i feel like im getting power from this... is this how changeling feed of love? well once i have total trust... then i start casting spells on him... making him weaker and soon il have total control over him after i drain him of his love.... at least thats what queen chrysalis tough me.*


 

 

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Princess Celestia rushed into the room.  "Luna!  I heard you screaming!" she cried.  She fell off balance and crashed to the floor.  A nurse rushed in.

"Princess!  I told you to stay put!"

"But...but...Luna...Luna was," she turned back to Luna.  "What happened!?"

 


 

Angel Feather's eyes fluttered open.  She brushed a hoof across her eye and turned to the clock on the bedside table.  It was morning apparently.  But still dark outside.

Princess Celestia could not raise the sun.  Yes.  Of course.

 


 

Mystical Flow yawned and sat up in bed.  She reached out her hoof towards the bedside table and felt around for the clock.  When she felt it, she held it up to her face.

7:30AM

Dear Celestia why is it so dark out?  Did Celestia forget to raise the sun again?  Did she sleep in? 

Oh.  Yeah.  Nevermind.

 


 

Discord pushed open the dungeon door.  Luna looked in.  She was no longer in Discords grip.  She was standing on her own four hooves.  She guessed Discord knew she wouldn't try anything stupid.  The dungeon resembled a jail cell.  It had the weird bed thing and everything.  Discord shoved her in and closed the door.

"Hey!" Luna growled, turning to him.  "I'm a Princess!  I can't stay in these conditions!"
"Oh, geez, sorry your Highness," Discord said in a sarcastic tone.  "I'll get you a pillow or something.  Just shut up."

"Excuse me?!  Let me out this instance!"

"Don't worry.  Are you hungry?  I'll make you macaroni and cheese.  I make good macaroni and cheese."


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Yavolin didn't know that this was his Luna or not so he tested her with something that only the real Luna would know."During that night at the gardens what did i give you as thanks for visiting me at the canterlot jail cell"? Yavolin said it with no emotion in his voice and kept the answer locked awe ay in his mind.


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Lightning Dancer woke up with a start. She had thought she had heard somepony screaming. she rushed out of bed and went into the mane hall. There was nopony there. Confused, she walked over to Metal's room. Metal was snoring; Lightning hated snoring. Lightning sighed, and knocked as loudly as she could.

 

Metal was unamused. 'Why would anypony be knocking at thi- Oh. Yeah. Right.' Metal got out of bed and opened the door. "Lightning, why in Celestia's name are you here at this time in the morning?" he said tiredly.

 

"I just wanted to know if you heard some screaming last night...", she said awkwardly.

 

"No, I haven't."

 

"Oh. Well, uh, you can go back to sleep if you want.", Lightning said, walking out of the room.

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Angel Feather crawled out of bed and looked around the room.  Should I stay here until some pony collects me or...

 


 

Mystical Flow stumbled out of bed and into the hallway.  She looked around, spying Lightning at Metal's door.  Mystical yawned and looked around.

I'm starving.  Wheres the royal guards to lead me to breakfast?


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'Luna's' eyes grew large...

* buck it, guess I'm not as good an queen christalice... Being a princess with love secretes like that is impossible for me to know *

 

" thanks yavollin... Iv had my first love feeding. And your somewhat weeker now"

 

A green fire quickly turned shade back into her changeling fourm...

 

"Hahahaha! Thanks for that love yavollin! It's the first Iv ever had!... Youl never know where Luna is, because I don't know. Now it's time to give this new power a test!"

 

Shade let out a discharge of lightning, shocking everypony around. Then flew away quickly


 

 

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Princess Celestia took a step back as she got shocked.  She gasped and fell to the floor again.  She looked up.

"L...Luna...?" she whispered.

I...I've lost.  I've lost.  Luna's gone isn't she?  Discord took her.  My sister.  I swore never to let any pony take her away from me again.  And...now...now I've lost her.

"Luuuunnaaaa!" Princess Celestia screeched.


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Yavolin was angry as soon as he got up he went to find Celestia to tell her about what Shade as done."Celestia! where are you"? Yavolin's eyes were filled with anger and betrayal he knew shade couldn't be trusted and now he lost Luna he was going to make every pony pay. 

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Luna stared at the plate of macaroni and cheese in front of her.  She looked up at Discord to give him an odd look.

"You don't seriously expect me to eat this...do you?"

"I do.  Go on!  Its good!"

"You poisoned it."

"No I didn't."

"You...did something chaotic to it."

"No."

"I'm not eating this, Discord."

"Its good."

Luna pushed the plate away from her, tired of this useless chatter.  She curled up on the floor and pushed her face into her hooves, trying not to cry.

"Luna.  Eat the food."

Luna didn't reply.

Discord used his magic to make Luna float into the air.  Luna struggled as Discord shoved a spoonful into her mouth and made her chew and swallow.  Then, he placed her back on the floor where she coughed.

"Isn't it good?"

Luna didn't say anything.  Because it was.

 

(OOC: What am I doing...)

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Shade turned around to see yavollin chancing her

 

"She did trust me... But no other pony did, especially you... I don't like being this kind of pony, but when nopony accepts you for who you are, then what's the point in being nice to them. See ya later"

 

Shade turned back to her pony self and bolted like a lightning bolt to discords location.

 

* if he follows me... Then me and discord will have some fun with him and Luna! *

 

(OOC: you can't change your posts like that yavollin... You can't say he was chancing her and then change it to looking for Celestia... And btw... Celestia was right beside you)

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(Oc:You skipped Yavolin!)  Yavolin was really mad at shade and fallowed her he didn't care were she will lead him."Shade it an't easy being different because i have a bad wing but what you did is unforgivable and i will not let you live for this betrayal" ! Yavolin remembered rainbow dash and her loyalty to her friends.

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(OOC: Oh.  You changed your post xD Didn't notice)

 

Celestia looked up from the floor at Yavolin.  "I...I...I'm sorry," she whispered.  Because what else could she say?  She just wanted everypony to love.  To live in harmony.  And now she may have ruined it all...

Soon...maybe everypony will hate and live in chaos.


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(OC:Dang it  will it's to late now.)  Yavolin was after shade he began to remember Luna from when they first meet. Flash back, "Let me out if here I didn't murder him"!  Yavolin was chained to the wall of the canterlot jail cell he knew what had happen between him and his brother but it wasn't his fault. A tear went down his eye as he flew after shade this memory always made him feel bad about the past and how he wished he could keep Luna from all of this.

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shade was flying fast she was out side of the castle when...

 

* you fool! you could have worked around him asking you what luna gave him that one time. do you not wish to redeem yourself to me?*

 

shade changed back to her changeling forum..

 

* i dont work for you anymore chrysalis... nor do i want to be appart of your family... i work for discord now *

 

queen chrysalis was contacting shade... changeling can talk to one another threw there ears...

 

shade was getting close to discord...   

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Yavolin called out to shade."You are a traitor shade, I am going to enjoy torturing you to just find out where Luna or Discord is". Yavolin knew he had no Element of harmony on his neck but he wished that shade didn't betrayed his friends because now Celestia is going to have her placed in a jail cell.

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