My first pony drawing!

[Sylvester 350]

Hi everypony, so this is my first attempt at drawing a pony, I have to say I'm quite satisfied with the results, let me point out the cutie mark isn't an ice-cream cone, it's a microphone, and I had some trouble with the legs. Please comment. Thanks.

Edited December 17, 2012 by Silverstar

[YesIAmTori 285]

For a first try this is good although it looks like you just drew the outline. Try using a skeleton like this:

Not sure if you can see the circles and lines in the pony but it helps if you draw those and then the pony around them.

[Sylvester 350]

Hmm, I see, thanks for the advice, and I must say that mine looks very fat compared to your skeleton drawing  , do you know where I can find a clearer example???

[Moon Rat 4,773]

Not bad for a first timer, certainly a lot better than anything I could ever draw for my first try although, I really did not think the Cutie Mark looked like an Ice Cream Cone as much as I thought it was an electric razor

 

Other than that, it looks really good

Keep it up

[Sylvester 350]

Hmm, dunno if I should post my progress here...

Or should I create a new Topic...

I think I will do both XD

 

Okay, so it's been long and very humiliating mind you, but I have, I think, Improved a bit, I took the tips from this post and basically went on there. If you are by any chance wondering why it took me so long, I stopped drawing after the post. I only picked up on it a little while ago, and basically continued from there. Okay then, without further ado, here are my latest drawings:

(I first tried my own style, but then thought to myself I should probably try to perfect the show style before I do that.)

 

Note I did one drawing twice, I first got the pose wrong, so I redid it.