My first attempt at drawing an OC

[UndershineKnight 10]

Her name is Sky Charmer. It isn't perfect but I'm pretty happy at how she came out. This is my first attempt any kind of pony art. Her cutie mark is a distorted clock because she always loses track of time when she flies. Any kind of critique is welcome! 

[Fluttermena 1,223]

The neck is to short and wide, the left front leg doesn't look right, it should cover the right leg a bit more and the nostril is missing. Other than that, it's good. I love the eyes and the tail.

[Friendship_Cannon 1,677]

I like it, a lot, looks quite cool with the colors and the rings in her ear

 

The shape of the face is fine as well, just some details need a bit of work (Flutters wrote some right things).

All in all, it is very good for your first OC drawing, seriously, keep it up.

[akita-ken 581]

Her colour scheme looks like a cross between Twilight Sparkle's and Shining Armour's, an interesting combination to say the least

[UndershineKnight 10]

The neck is to short and wide, the left front leg doesn't look right, it should cover the right leg a bit more and the nostril is missing. Other than that, it's good. I love the eyes and the tail.

Thanks for the tips, I'll fix this one and make sure to keep  what you said in mind for the ponies I draw in the future.

 

 

 

 

 

Her colour scheme looks like a cross between Twilight Sparkle's and Shining Armour's, an interesting combination to say the least

Oh wow, now that I think about it, it kind of does. 

[Wubsie 1,123]

She's adorable. She's quite fat though with a beautiful color scheme.

I like it. It's a nice first attempt to be honest.

Nice work. 

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

The neck is pretty thick, unless that was what you were going for, it should be thinner.  The front hooves look a little too rounded off.  Keep it up.