Corrupted Twilight Sparkle

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

 

Tell me what you guys think!

I spent quite alot of time on this, so i would really appreciate on what you guys think of it.

 

Resource: http://browse.deviantart.com/#/d5nf4l1

 

 

[Friendship_Cannon 1,676]

Very nice drawing, cool idea

Great how you changed her horn, ears and eyes to the more agressive type. Position is good as well, clear lines, actually perfect.

The only thing missing would be a bit of shading (and maybe coloring)

Edited December 29, 2012 by Your Friend

[ApexHunter 166]

Now that is AMAZING I couldn't have done that even I'f I took hours of time...probably wouldn't even come close. Anyway Really GREAT job

[NavelColt 22,882]

Pretty good :3 Corrupted Twilight is awesome, and I love the dark magic concept overall. A pretty good sketch off of that vector.

[Doctor-Whooves 288]

Really good. That's from Crystal Empire, no? I have a theory that the dark magic is actually what corrupted Luna, turning her into Nightmare Moon.

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Thanks my friends!

 

I was thinking if i wanted to put this up in this section because i normally don't get any replies or any thing for a compliment or crtitism. So for all the drawings i do, i never share them but it seems that you guys like my drawing very well.. i appreciate it very much because it motivates me to draw even more!    and continue to share them.

Again, Thanks.

[chrisalis1 1]

It's quite wonderful, to be honest.

I'm actually jealous, I couldn't draw something remotely that good if I spent the entire day on it.

[Gone for good 1,593]

Not bad, not bad at all. Now that you can do things like this pretty well, the next big step would be to try to draw something like this without using another picture for reference.

[Batbrony 16,056]

Not bad, not bad at all!  Really, excellent sketch overall!!!  Would love to see it colored, but this is great.  Hope to see more art from you in the future!  Keep up the great work!!! 

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

So, now the all the other people have been nice to you, its my turn.

It is a very cool concept and decently executed, but there are some flaws:

-There is just a bit too much forehead between the eyes and the mane

-The tail is too wide at the end

-Twi's left foreleg is a bit off and right hindleg needs repositioning to (our) left

-The horn looks a bit too busy, maybe get rid of the barbs on the backside.

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

So, now the all the other people have been nice to you, its my turn.

It is a very cool concept and decently executed, but there are some flaws:

-There is just a bit too much forehead between the eyes and the mane

-The tail is too wide at the end

-Twi's left foreleg is a bit off and right hindleg needs repositioning to (our) left

-The horn looks a bit too busy, maybe get rid of the barbs on the backside.

Take a look at the resource link at the bottom

thanks. theres a reason for that.

 

but i guess i appreciate the pointers.. thanks..

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

AWESOME drawing! Tremendous improvement, this looks legitimately amazing. I won't critique it because this is better than my work.

 

It does inspire me to try again at drawing though haha.

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

AWESOME drawing! Tremendous improvement, this looks legitimately amazing. I won't critique it because this is better than my work.

 

It does inspire me to try again at drawing though haha.

Go for it Crystal, and i appreciate your kindness.

I am sure you're drawings are good as well, but you know it takes practice   but yea

[Wubsie 1,123]

This looks pretty badass in my opinion. :3

Nice work on Corrupted Twi. The lines look very smooth. And I like the horn. A nice chaotic touch.

[Sensuna 138]

I can't draw something like that on paper and it looks so... evil and ominous I don't know why you would think I would like it

well I do like it but

I just love cute things way more :3

But after all it's still something nice

[.:Freshien:. 30]

I think it needs to be more awesome... Yeah about 20% more awesome. Lol jk. I think a cool idea would be seeing her horn split along the swirly lines. Great job though.