planning winter in ponyville a story by biolena

[biolena 2]

                                                                    WINTER IN PONYVILLE               a story by biolena

december 1,you ready leo yeh said leo,well lets start.as biolena stared to try the spell her eyes tured black and something went worng and she fanted.biolena wakes up did i do it said biolena,no but you did frost the intire HOUSE!said leo,wow you better start cleaning it up then thats what i pay you for said biolena,what you dont pay me said leo,i give you a home right food ever thing you need to live thats your pay said biolena,but am you brother your soupost to take care of me said leo,but you know when mom and dad died.i havet hade extar money to spend. my job barly pays for our rent and bills thats the reson we moved to ponyville.its cheper to live here said biolena,fine i just dont want to talk about mom and dad any more said leo,oh am sorry i didt mean too as biolena walks slowly towards leo,its ok as leo has a tear come down hes check,biolena and hugs hem so hard and says siletly in hes ear iam sorry.its ok said leo and leo stared toward the door.were are you gon were supost to finish the frost spell said biolena,awwwww but we have worked on it all night i have not been out side said leo,fine you can go said biolena,thx said leo,as leo startd to walk toward the door he opend the door and as he looked out side he said holy crap said leo,i cant belive you i did not rase you like this and whats outside any way that would ma......as she looked around she was amazed of what she saw snow every were, holy crap.......do you thinck that i did this with th right as she was saying that leo cut her of saying yeh most likely unless someone made a bliserd gun said leo,is there  a pos as leo cuts her off i was being funny.ok its not so bad i can clean it up magic right said biolena nerflysely,not by your self said leo,we cant let any one find out that i did this said biolena,you know who we have to tell your cuzsn said leo,noooo i dont want to she always makes me feel gulty about never visting and its just a pain said biolena,well maybe if you would go vist she wont be like that said leo,fine will go said biolena,as biolena glup towrads there cuzsn house they get to the house its a big tree the tree of the best magic caster in ponyville,when they get to the house biolena knocks on the door.a dragon opens the door saying oh hey guys what you don here said spike,oh hey spike said leo,can we talk to twilight said biolena,sure come in said spike,as they walk slowly in to the treehouse and then out of no were twilight pops out of green smoke saying like my new spell i found this cool new book that hade it in it. why are you here any way you never vist your always in that house reading books and never comeing out said twilight,but thats what you used to do said biolena,but i stoped and met freinds and now i go out some time and find new things to do said twilight,but i dont have money every sence mom and dad died i work full time i cant get out my hobe is don spells said biolena,well i know you dont have money but you can let other ponys pay a real freind helps out a nother come with me i can get you to met some ponys that could be your freind said twilight,ok heres the real reson why iam here i may have frosted all of ponyville said biolena,you WHAT! theres very few book or scorlls that have a frost spell thats that big said twilight,well i may have found it some were in the swaps said biolena,you found it in the swaps........i cant belive you would go there by your self said twilight,i didt i may have got leo to come with me.....said biolena,you didt you got him to come with YOU! thats unbliveuble you put your brother in to one of the most dangers places in ponyville said twilight,i know it was a really good book said biolena,right then spike got a letter from luna luna never sent letters to twilight but it was night time so no one was awake spike started to read the letter saying i hope your not asleep but this snow is not your normal snow its cursed someone in pony ville has done this and i need you to find out who put this spell over ponyville i hope you can alert me as soon as you can thx for the help signed luna,wait did she say cursed but the...book...didt.....say that oh no what have i done i cant belive this we have to turn me in said biolena,dont worry we can clean it up with magic and maybe they will let you go said twilight,weres the book that has all the spells that you used said spike,its in my house said biolena,lets go find that book and see whats we can do said twilight,as the ponys and the dragon run back to biolenas house its starting to snow really hard,wow its really starting to snow said leo,yeh its cold maybe we sould stop by raritys and get some jackts said twilight,ohhhhh rarity said spike,what you like rarity said leo,what no no no yeh said spike,i like appjack more my self said leo,the pony and the dragon get to raritys and buys jackts,and started back on the road to biolenas house,when they get to biolenas house they open the door and inside they find the book oh man look out side said leo,all the ponys started to look out the windows and see the snow start to pille up and they started to rush to twilights to start to try and clean up the snow but it didt work.whys it not don any thing,what why did it not work said biolena,well in the letter they did say cusred said twilight,no no no well maybe luna or leo cut of biolena saying no even they cant left it its cusred and magic cant left it is cusred said leo,well what are we gon to do then said biolena,well lets see in the book and get some more history about this spell said twilight,as the ponys and the dragon walk over to the book and go to the chapter that the spell was on and twilight started to read it saying this this is one of the most dangers spells that were ever performemed it is the same sortof spell frosted all the world when there were 3 tribes theres one way to stop this curs is to get the 6 sets of elements the 1 elements of harmony 2 elements of dark 3 elements of light 4 elements of live 5 elements of heart 6 elements of world,onece you have these you must point them to the sky and say the all of the elements sets and the snow will clear now to any one who reads this dont try this spell no mater hwo good you are your not able to control it,thats what we have to do we have to get theses and we dont even know what they are this is gont to be inposble said biolena,dont worry i am sure princess celestia knows the elements we can ask her said twilight,but i will be punshied for this said biolena,i am sure shelfind a way so you dont get punshied for it said twililght,now lets get perperd for the jernoy ahead of us said twilight,and as the ponys and dragon got perperd for the jernoy ahead,

 

 

 

                                                                          THATS ALL FOR PART 1

                                                                      PART 2 WILL BE OUT SOON

                                                                 IF YOU CAN POST A COMENT SO

                                                          I WILL KNOW IF YOU LIKED IT OR NOT SO

                                                      PLZ BE SOUPORTIVE AND THX FOR READING

                                                    I KNOW IT WAS LONG AND TOOK ME ALMOST A DAY

                                              WITH BREACKS NOT ALL DAY BUT IT WAS A LOT OF WORK

                                       PLZ DONT COMPLAIN ABOUT MISS SPELLS I AM 11 AND ITS A TYPO

                                   I AM A BOY AND I KNOW MY NAME IS A MARE BUT THATS BECAUS OF MORE STORYS I COULD DO IN MLP ITS EASYER TO COME UP WITH A STORY IN MLP ABOUT MARES SO THX FOR THE  READ AND THIS IS NOT DONE YET THIS IS MY FRIST RUN THO SO IT WILL CHAGE

Edited December 31, 2012 by biolena

[Aureity 3,055]

Hello!

 

It looks like you might need a little clarification on the recommended format for RP World. This link should help ya with that. Additionally, this thread belongs as a "Planning" thread, rather than an OOC, since it looks like you haven't finalized details on what your RP is about.

 

Feel free to send a PM (personal message) if you have any questions regarding roleplays.

[An Old Head 4,816]

No offence, but don't you think this idea is slightly flimsy? I mean, all it takes is some magic to melt away the snow. It would have to be cursed snow or something. I also think that a roleplay should be at least somewhat open-ended, rather than snowing everyone into their houses - there's no room for flexibility or adventure in that sort of environment.

I do like the idea of snow, though. There are loads of potential pitfalls and challenges to be made with it.

[Marathon 562]

yeah, I know this guy. He's my friend and I was talking to him while he was making this and I was complaining to him about all his spelling errors and stuff. But yeah, he isn't the brightest bulb around.

[biolena 2]

No offence, but don't you think this idea is slightly flimsy? I mean, all it takes is some magic to melt away the snow. It would have to be cursed snow or something. I also think that a roleplay should be at least somewhat open-ended, rather than snowing everyone into their houses - there's no room for flexibility or adventure in that sort of environment.

 

I do like the idea of snow, though. There are loads of potential pitfalls and challenges to be made with it.

well its a start and thats what i ment it to be and i will fix it later butt i do relise what i did worng so i will make is cursed snow and this is my frist rp

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah, I know this guy. He's my friend and I was talking to him while he was making this and I was complaining to him about all his spelling errors and stuff. But yeah, he isn't the brightest bulb around.

 

 

yep what ever but i am gon to fix it dont worry jezzz man all the places to insualt me you want to here wow what a freind

Edited December 30, 2012 by biolena

[Marathon 562]

well its a start and thats what i ment it to be and i will fix it later butt i do relise what i did worng so i will make is cursed snow and this is my frist rp

 

yep what ever but i am gon to fix it dont worry jezzz trent all the places to insualt me you want to here wow what a freind

well now that you told the whole community my name I guess it would appropriate to tell them your name, but im not because i don't want to get warning points from some admins so i think you should take my name off there.