visual art My Kirby 64 art (I'm mediocre, feedback needed)

[Harmonic Revelations 8,835]

So I decided to try to draw some Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards fan art. The result isn't that great, but I don't think it's bad enough that I should just let it gather dust in the corner nether regions of my computer until the universe finally collapses in on itself in the end of space and time.

 

So here it is, but first, I want to make a few points.

 

• You may ask why 0² is on a black background, it's because he looked horrible with just an outline, and even though the image has transparency, it shows up white on this site since the text has a white background. For this reason, I opted instead to encase him in a black box.
• Originally I had a few more characters but I failed at drawing them so hard that I erased them.
• Kirby 64 is amazing.

Bearing that in mind, here we go, I appreciate feedback because I'm horrible at art, especially since I'm on a laptop, not a tablet. (I dislike tablets and am not going to buy one.)

 

To be honest, I'm most proud of Ghost Knight (The green one with the lance and shield), the crab (His name escapes my memory), and the fire breathing thing (His name also escapes my memory)