The Original 571 March 2, 2013 Share March 2, 2013 Hm... well, if you are reviewing OC's (as it seems) then i wouldn't mind you taking a look at mine. All the links are in the sig, with short descriptions of them. Cyril Coltefeller, the Head of Magical and Technological Development.Fierasil de Rosa Canter, the optimistic flyer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Motion Spark 7,807 March 2, 2013 Share March 2, 2013 Yeah the newer versions I've created are paler in pallet. Well the green is something that has to be kept because... Well it's kind of intrinsic to the character later. The white of the mane I agree does need changing. Any suggestions? As for being tweaked I'm thankful that Skybound is doing a pencil rendition for me (I can't daw even slightly). His rough sketch so far is below. holly crap! he looks gorgeous, like a prince... HOT SHIT but he completelly looks from a different planet, like he doesn't belong to Equestria because the style is so different to the MLP art. I don't know which colors can you choose, you might have to try >.< My OC's: Motion Spark || Beat Spark || Rosebelle Sorry, I don't take REQUESTS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bari 7,023 March 2, 2013 Share March 2, 2013 Alright P_M, how do you feel about my three OCs? The links are down there in my signature. I've never really had anyone critique their appearances. And if you feel like it, a critique of their backstories and personalities would be helpful as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmonic Revelations 8,835 March 2, 2013 Share March 2, 2013 About Alicorn OCs, I think Concords is the only good Alicorn OC I've ever seen, it's canon friendly since apparantly he's supposed to be part of the royal family. But anyways, about my OC here is a picture of him, I have actually art people drew of him too. (Especially Firebolt, she is awesome) But here is just a generic one with a side view. I tried to make the colors complimentary and not too strange by making them all shades of green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess_Molestia 1,460 March 2, 2013 Author Share March 2, 2013 jeez this thread is really kicking off more then I thought it would... About Alicorn OCs, I think Concords is the only good Alicorn OC I've ever seen, it's canon friendly since apparantly he's supposed to be part of the royal family. But anyways, about my OC here is a picture of him, I have actually art people drew of him too. (Especially Firebolt, she is awesome) But here is just a generic one with a side view. I tried to make the colors complimentary and not too strange by making them all shades of green. so much green... he reminds me of a plant, can I see the other artwork, maybe it looks better in drawn not ponymaker format Can't visit Ponyville? Show up and say you can't! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harmonic Revelations 8,835 March 2, 2013 Share March 2, 2013 jeez this thread is really kicking off more then I thought it would... so much green... he reminds me of a plant, can I see the other artwork, maybe it looks better in drawn not ponymaker format I like it. At least he's not colored in neon stripes or something crazy like that. Besides, I like green, quite a bit actually. I'm grateful Firebolt drew this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fridge 382 March 2, 2013 Share March 2, 2013 Ok 2nd Oc... Once again the cutie mark is a placeholder, but then its not as if you'll ever see her animated. Its going to be described instead http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/scarlet-star-r2707 Street artist | activist | Fanfic writer | Fire Spinner | attempting Musician Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgileFawkes 15 March 2, 2013 Share March 2, 2013 I actually really like both of your OCs but especially like Applewisp both because its a good name and the fact that she has very earthy colors feel free to critique my OC Silver Strings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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