My Drawings.

[SparklingTwilight 109]

So, I had a look around, and I saw people made threads for all of their drawings. So, here. I made one. Please give some constructive criticism! It'll be greatly appreciated.

 

Edited March 16, 2013 by SparklingTwilight

[Batbrony 16,055]

Quite excellent for a sketch, really.  A little light in the shading, but that might just be the scanned image, IDK.  Still, overall it looks excellent.  Great job Sparkling Twilight! 

Edited March 16, 2013 by Batbrony

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

I really like this drawing. The cuteness is really there, and a great drawing. I expecially like the cutie mark, and the hair is awesome.

 

Keep making these, and you'll get better and better!

 

bro hoof /)

[SparklingTwilight 109]

I really like this drawing. The cuteness is really there, and a great drawing. I expecially like the cutie mark, and the hair is awesome.

 

Keep making these, and you'll get better and better!

 

bro hoof /)

/) to you too! And thanks.

 

 

Quite excellent for a sketch, really.  A little light in the shading, but that might just be the scanned image, IDK.  Still, overall it looks excellent.  Great job Sparkling Twilight! 

Yeah, I didn't shade the original image anyway, it's just a sketch. And thanks for the criticism!

Have a brohoof /)

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

Have you ever thought of drawing people's oc? I think you would get extra practice, and better your drawings. Plus, your drawing are so good anyway that people would be lining out the forum for you to draw theirs! 

 

Bro hoof /)

[Zeno 47]

This is really good for a first drawing!

 

I feel like the ear is a little bit too small, and the eyes might be a tiny bit oversized (Maybe that's just me, though), but other than that it's really good! Keep at it.

[SparklingTwilight 109]

Have you ever thought of drawing people's oc? I think you would get extra practice, and better your drawings. Plus, your drawing are so good anyway that people would be lining out the forum for you to draw theirs! 

 

Bro hoof /)

I don't even have an oc myself, but I would be very happy to draw others' for them if they want me to. XD

It would be quite good practice, too.

 

This is really good for a first drawing!

 

I feel like the ear is a little bit too small, and the eyes might be a tiny bit oversized (Maybe that's just me, though), but other than that it's really good! Keep at it.

Yeah, I do tend to do that big eyes and small ears thing when I draw ponies. I don't know why, I just do. XD

Anyway, thanks. /) Your criticism is appreciated.

 

Oh yeah, and welcome to the forums!

Edited March 16, 2013 by SparklingTwilight

[JrmiRadd 20]

I really like the Twilicorn, the only real thing you could do better was that trixie's neck looks a little off to me, but other than that, Great job!

[SparklingTwilight 109]

Very hard to see, for me. Although that's pretty good for a first sketch.

Rarity-The muzzle is done incorrectly, the same can be said for the legs. However, you actually got Rarity's mane right, and that's a challenge.

Twilight-Her front hooves should be a little bigger, and her wings aren't done in style of the show. Allthough you did do the crown correctly, and that pose is amazing.

Trixie-This was my overall favourite, however, her neck wouldn't bend like that! Otherwise it is very cute.

Overall, you did a really good job, especially considering these are your first attempts. Keep up the good work!

Yeah, I thought something was wrong with the legs.... As for the muzzle, I was pretty much just experimenting with that, to see how it would look. XD So the muzzle thing was deliberate.

Oh yeah, and same thing with Twilight and the wings. I tried stray a little from the style of the show to make it look a little more unique, as most of my older drawings (pretty much ones I didn't post here) were pretty much exactly like the show. Probably because for those old ones I used a picture to help me.... Lol. Wow, I'm really straying from the point here.... Oh yeah, and you have a point with the leg thing. I might fix that up later.

Also, I did notice Trixie's neck was off, but I forgot to fix it up. So I might do that soon....

And I'm surprised you didn't say anything about her cutie mark. I had a five minute timer on Trixie so I had to rush it. XD

Anyway, thanks for the feedback!