visual art So...I drew Slender...

[EpicMuffinTime 216]

My first attempt at drawing slender

 

NOTE: I might edit this later, although I'm pretty happy with the outcome

 

http://daskov.deviantart.com/art/Slendy-360132824?ga_submit_new=10%253A1363573276

 

Critique always helps

 

ANOTHER NOTE: Sorry for the bad quality, taken from my iPad

Edited March 18, 2013 by EpicMuffinTime

[Moon Rat 4,772]

ooh, not a bad drawing for a first time, I like it :3

 

the only two things I really have a problem with would have to be the background and the tree

 

those squiggly lines need to be either eliminated or, if it's supposed to represent the wind, made a little lighter.

 

 

 

the tree looks a bit off as well...

I really can't quite place it but...

I think it needs to be colored in as well

maybe even straightened out a little bit...

 

 

other than that, I love it

keep it up

Edited March 18, 2013 by ~Wuvable Woona~

[Zygen 6,066]

Yeah I agree with Woona, the lines are a bit distracting, but the overall drawing looks well done to me, so i'd say its a job well done other then those lines.

 

Good job keep it up .

[Clover Heart 978]

I think the squiggly lines might be static? Like in the game? I could be wrong, but I do agree, they're a bit distracting. If it's static, I'd just have left it out altogether. Static seems like it'd be extremely hard to replicate with pencil. I'm a little disappointed that you didn't draw the bottom half. This might just be an artistic preference thing, though. As a more technical point, I believe Slender's hands tend to be bigger than that, and I think the arms are a bit longer as well. Though, without the rest of the legs, it's a bit difficult to tell. 

 

Other than that, great job

Edited March 18, 2013 by Clover Heart

[EpicMuffinTime 216]

Alright, I edited it, it looks a lot better now

 

http://daskov.deviantart.com/art/Slenderman-360198297?q=gallery%3Adaskov&qo=0

 

I'm going to be doing a Slender let's play soon, btw. I love the game so much

 

I think the squiggly lines might be static? Like in the game? I could be wrong, but I do agree, they're a bit distracting. If it's static, I'd just have left it out altogether. Static seems like it'd be extremely hard to replicate with pencil. I'm a little disappointed that you didn't draw the bottom half. This might just be an artistic preference thing, though. As a more technical point, I believe Slender's hands tend to be bigger than that, and I think the arms are a bit longer as well. Though, without the rest of the legs, it's a bit difficult to tell.

 

Other than that, great job

About the legs thing, I meant it to be like he was in the background, like he was behind some kind of hill watching you. And yes, I too think the arms are a bit short, but that's not really something I'm worrying about as of right now. I'm still trying to perfect my OC, I have yet to finish it and I have some things popping up that would postpone the editing of Slender and the completion of my OC. Anyway...yeah...I'll have it fixed as soon as I can Edited March 18, 2013 by EpicMuffinTime