Blazin 49 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 (edited) This is my first attempt at vector pony art, and my second attempt at pony art all together! So I've attached the 3 stages up to the finished product, a swell as the finished image with a background! Constructive criticism please! Quite happy with it but really eager to learn! Thanks, Shade Twister! Edited April 5, 2013 by Shade_Twister 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wallroux 56 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 Congratulations, great work, just that right front leg...it looks like a hook. And it doesn't create the illusion of 3D, it is very flat. But it is really marvelous! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayruthepegasister 118 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 Looks great! The only things I can really point out is: The neck is too skinny... I think the back legs are supposed to be thicker than the front... The leg that is extended... I don't think it is supposed to bend like that... I think it would be better if you just made the hoof strait... What do I know?! I'm a pixel artist!!! All I can draw is stick figures... ~Nayru "Time passes, people move.... Like a river's flow, it never ends... A childish mind will turn to noble ambition... Young love will become deep affection... The clear water's surface reflects growth... Now listen to the Serenade of Water to reflect upon yourself..." -Sheik, The Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time Self proclaimed theme song: Thanks to vinyl_scratch13 for making this!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quilava 1,290 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 Great work for a first timer . If I were to give criticism for somethings they would have to be the legs *primarily the front* and the colour *very minor detail but I am a "BIT" anal when it comes to art sorry XD*. The hind legs are drawn well, a bit high on the pull back, but didn't even really notice until I looked at it for the thousandth time ._., however the right fore leg bends at a point instead of curving. The colour of the pony is a bit too dark *but that is ->OFCOURSE<- in my own opinion*, and could be a bit brighter on the blue for the body. Great work, and keep up the good work ^~Signature by Me~^ ~^Click on the Image above for already made signatures/graphics^~ Request A Signature | Have a Question? | Signature Tips/Tricks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazin 49 April 5, 2013 Author Share April 5, 2013 Ye I agree for with that leg... it's sort like jelly XD I'mm gonna be attempting another piece of pony art today... but not sure what I'm gunna draw.The colour of the pony is just dark because Shade is a pegasus of the night, so he's supposed to be dark however I w:PAs for the neck, I will definetly keep that in mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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