SparkBrony 379 May 5, 2013 Share May 5, 2013 Hi there bronies! So, I wrote a FanFic starring Octavia and Vinyl inspired by this video: http://youtu.be/Gp93CoKICcQ Anyway, I'd love some feedback, compliments, constructive criticism, what you thought. I want to get this Fic some more views Here's the link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/100686/broken Thanks! Oh! Also, thanks to @@Sky Warden for proofreading/editing! 1 ~SparkBrony The Brony Who Does Way Too Much Stuff! Check me out on Fimfiction! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingMcCallister 368 May 5, 2013 Share May 5, 2013 I viewed it, and I liked what I saw. There really isn't a whole lot to complain about at this point. It looks like you addressed others' concerns and made corrections. Wootles. 1 Original Characters? Guess I truly am addicted now... Wick I write and do physics too. Crazy, ain't it? http://www.cfxt.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Swedish Brony 153 May 9, 2013 Share May 9, 2013 This is actually the first fanfic I've read so far and I most say... I couldn't be more satisfied Almost brought a tear to my eye Keep up the good work! 1 Sig made by Thunderstorm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkBrony 379 May 13, 2013 Author Share May 13, 2013 Thanks for the nice comments! (Here and there!) I'm thinking about submitting this to Equestria Daily, so wish me luck! Please continue to read and thumb it up! ~SparkBrony ~SparkBrony The Brony Who Does Way Too Much Stuff! Check me out on Fimfiction! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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