Broken - A Vinyl Scratch and Octavia Tale

[SparkBrony 379]

Hi there bronies! So, I wrote a FanFic starring Octavia and Vinyl inspired by this video:

 

http://youtu.be/Gp93CoKICcQ

 

 

 

Anyway, I'd love some feedback, compliments, constructive criticism, what you thought. I want to get this Fic some more views

 

Here's the link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/100686/broken

 

Thanks!

 

Oh! Also, thanks to @@Sky Warden for proofreading/editing!

[WingMcCallister 367]

I viewed it, and I liked what I saw. There really isn't a whole lot to complain about at this point. It looks like you addressed others' concerns and made corrections. Wootles.

[The Swedish Brony 153]

This is actually the first fanfic I've read so far and I most say... I couldn't be more satisfied

 

Almost brought a tear to my eye

 

Keep up the good work!

[SparkBrony 379]

Thanks for the nice comments! (Here and there!)

 

I'm thinking about submitting this to Equestria Daily, so wish me luck! Please continue to read and thumb it up!

 

~SparkBrony