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@@Dawn Stripes, Dennis clumsily puts his seatbelt on. He tries to calm down, he takes a deep breath from the mouth and exhales from the mouth. He then turns once again to Rainbow Dash "Did i do anything wrong Rainbow Dash? Did i offend you in any way? I  don't remember anything..."

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"Oh? No, no, nothin' like that." Rainbow Dash chuckled, looking away briefly. Had he woken up a little quicker than she'd thought?--well, maybe. No sense worrying about it now.

 

Disembarking took less time than boarding had. Rainbow was just snagging their luggage when she noticed the row of people outside the terminal...a row of people in rainbow-colored shirts holding up signs saying 'Dash'.

 

"Hey, there she is!"

 

"Shit," Rainbow muttered. "Who spilled?" She turned towards Dennis with a sweet smile. "We're gonna' have a hard time gettin' anywhere with these blokes around...no way I'm lettin' 'em near Fluttershy. But they can't catch both of us!"

She scribbled down an address on a scrap of paper. It was the address for the apartment she'd gotten for Fluttershy. "Lessay'...meet me here an hour?"


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@@Dawn Stripes"Just go, go! I'll distract them!!!"  he says taking the paper and shoving it in his pocket, at the same time he gives her his phone saying "You need it more than i do... i'll call you on this number in case you get lost or anything."  As the crowd aproaches he spreads his hands open attempting to block them and yells "Guys, guys, GUYS!!! Stop! You're scaring her!" His efforts and those of the security guards prove enough to hold the crowd back just enough so that Rainbow Dash can get lost around the corner. Eventually not finding her the crowd gives up the chase. Some of them are somewhat angry and turn against Dennis. "Holy crap i am dead." He manages to escape their grasp after taking a couple of angry shakes from them. He runs as fast as he can and manages to lose them in a dark alley, when they disperse he peeks out and sighs in relief. Looking at the paper he remembers his promise to Rainbow Dash. "Dammit i shouldn't leave her alone... gah what was i thinking?" He takes a telephone card just in case he wants to phone Dash and starts to make his way in the city. ((OOC:We landed in Scotland not England right??))

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Rainbow Dash made it straight for the address--it took her forever, as she wasn't used to finding directions by groundpounding. But one human city could only be so big...right?...

Eventually, gasping and muttering curses at the fragility of only having two legs, she stared up at a dizzyingly tall apartment complex. The weather was getting a little spooky in Glasgow--a heavy fog had moved in, almost like a fleet of low-hanging clouds had invaded the city. But through the mist, Rainbow Dash could make out the numbers. This was the place.

Finally.

"I'm coming, Fluttershy."

Five minutes and twenty stories later, she slammed a door shut with a yell, then rubbed her throbbing temple a moment to reveal an older guy in a shirt reading "Fluent in Javascript and Kinglon" giving her the eyebrow. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE'S NOT HERE!?"


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@@Dawn Stripes, Dennis finally made it to his destination. As he was getting up the storey he heard a scream "RAINBOW I AM ON MY WAY!" he dashes jumping the steps two at a time. When he finally arrives to find Rainbow unharmed he gasps and tries to understand "What... what the hell happened? I thought you were in danger. Don't you worry me like that Rainbow my heart skipped a beat there!"

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She was holding herself up against the wall, sweating into her fleshy human core, ridges on her thumb scarring the drywall. "Sorry, there, brony..." She closed her eyes long enough to grind her jaw, frustrated reminiscence of a past equine joint mobility, and gaze at the apartment door which had swung shut to half-inch band of TV-glow. "You wanna' clear something up for me...?" She waited, but not for a response. The cracks in the floor couldn't even match the poor finish on her adolescent voice. "Did I just get on a PLANE and fly eight HOURS across this Celestia-forsaken PLANET? Did I just..." She spasmed, "fail....Fluttershy....again?

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David took a double take for a moment before answering. He put his elbow on the table and rub face with a groan “I feel like I’m missing something” he mumble to himself he looked at chrysalis and shook his head “oh sorry about that” he said as he rub the back of his neck “and it’s not your fault ether from what I can tell Dash seems arrogant” he said with a smile  “And yes I think it’s a wonderful idea  spread the truth about how you’d change I’ll get to work as soon as possible” he said cheerfully he stared he for a moment.  He lean in slowly till he was face to face with her he stared deeply into her eyes  with a smile “I think we were about to do something before we were interrupted”  ((: sorry if the post didn’t make sense it was rush))

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@@Dawn Stripes, To Dennis Rainbow looked like she was about to pass out from the shock. Right now she needed to sit and relax. He held steady by the shoulders and slowly pushed her to sit down. He sat next to her and carressed her hair to make her relax "Easy... easy... take slow, deep breaths from the nose and breathe out from the mouth. You didn't fail Fluttershy and what you did was admirable to say the least. Not to say that it shows a lot of courage from your side." he pauses for a moment thinking at what to say then continues. "You asked of an almost total stranger to help you on your quest, you crossed thousands of miles with him not knowing where this would lead. During all of this i didn't see you show any sign of hesitation, and you tried your best. You are one of the most loyal persons i know of Rainbow."  He thinks a little bit about what might have happened to Fluttershy. "Listen... this doesn't mean something happened to Fluttershy, if it did probably the whole bronyhood would be mourning. I am quite sure she's still out there... and i'm gonna help you find her. Don't lose hope...  And please... call me Dennis, there is no need for formalities with me."

@@Meteorite, Chrysalis allowed herself to be embraced before kissing him with all the tenderness of love. It felt like she was breathing life through the kiss and she thanked the maker for this wonder. After the kiss she rubbs her nose against his smilling. "Thank you for finding me... i wish you had found me earlier."

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"Yeah...for-malities...wouldn't want that." She pinched a finger over her nose and breathed slowly, like a winded racehorse.

"Mm-hmm. This happened." She scowled, then tried to relax again where she'd been seated on the radiator in the hallway. "You know what though?"

This was so, so hard without wings. She hadn't even realized how much she depended on them. With wings she could just fly away from this for a while, anything and everything, leave her problems behind her as steam trails in a water-crystal palace in the sky. This....this sucked. Admitting it made her feel a little better. But she still felt like hitting something--bit of a scary feeling.

"I wasn't brave, I was a total..." she grunted in frustration. "I dragged a total stranger thousands of miles away from home, for nothing, if I had hesitated for at least a couple minutes I probably wouldn't have made this mistake...just like usual." Her voice lost grip and slid into defeated octaves. "Thanks, Dennis, and all..."

Was he stroking her hair? .......whatever. She said nothing.

"But I need to be alone for a while right now." She got up, gingerly breaking contact, and stumbled down the hall looking for a stairwell.


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Stephen stepped out of his flat after receiving an email from Shawn of Rainbow Dash's whereabouts. He was now set with the task of finding a purple eyed girl with rainbow hair along with the guy that came with her… Shouldn't be too hard, right??

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@@Dawn Stripes"I would do anything to help someone in need. You weren't a burden at all Rainbow... I'll say it again: You did the best you could and that's all that matters." he felt a little hesitant at leaving Rainbow alone but in the end he understood that it was probably the right time for her to think things over on her own.  "*Sigh* Alright Rainbow... i'll leave you alone for sometime. But don't go too far... i won't forgive myself if something happened to you. I'll be right here if you want me for anything okay?" 

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On a soulless-grey roof, Rainbow Dash tiptoed along the top of the two-brick facade ringing the rectangular roof, balance perfect, suspended between the rock-hard flooring and a forty-story drop into the mist.

Gritting her teeth, when her mane caught in the wind, she threw herself towards the roof, throwing her arms forward as if the repetition of motions would cause wings to sprout from her back.

She was rewarded for her senseless faith by a face full of concrete, leaving bruises on all four limbs and those peskily bulging breasts. Not to mention she might have just broken her nose.

The sky so--damn--empty. Rainbow climbed on top of the radiator, than the guardhouse-style stairwell top, by shimmying up the drainpipe, and jumped again, working her pitiful legs as far as they could. All she managed was to get herself bloody.

"Gotta' d this.." she muttered. "Gotta...I don't know. Dun' work anymore. Gotta'...gotta' fly again...I'll catch you Fluttersy, just...gimme' a minute..." her face sank onto the ground, resting before she could throwing out her arms and push herself back up.


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@@Dawn Stripes, Dennis let her for a couple of minutes alone, but when he turned to check if she still was there she wasn't. He started looking around becoming increasingly worried by each passing moment. He finds the door to the roof open and gets stunned for a moment in fear. Getting outside he doesn't see her and looks around, shocked in fear to the point of heart attack he runs down screaming "HELP! SOMEBODY CALL AN AMBULANCE! PLEASE HELP!" he reaches her and falls on his knees. "Why... why..." he says as his eyes become watery and he starts crying, he shouldn't have left her in this state it was his own fault. When she attempts to move/talk he stops her "Shhh... don't talk, don't move, you're hurt pretty bad. It's all my fault... i shouldn't have left you." 

((OOC:Excuse me but imma godmod your body...  It seems apropriate in this situation)) 

He thinks about lifting her up, but he reconsiders because of the fall. He turns her over and calls upon all the strength he has both mental and physical. Placing a hand on her back and the other on her legs he lifts her on his arms, leaving her head to rest upon his chest. In the meantime the commotion he has gotten some attention, a lady ,who proves to be the landlord of the building they were into, appears outside and seeing Dennis carry Rainbow. "Please help me! Call an ambulance quickly!" The lady instructs them to enter upon her own place in the building and eventually Dennis lays her on a bed, he is still crying and many of those tears fall upon her. As the lady calls an ambulance Dennis proceeds to clean her wounds using cotton with dis-infectant. "This is gonna sting Rainbow... i am so sorry... so god-damn sorry." To him Rainbow looked now like a very wounded pigeon, it was like the blood upon her was commiting sacrilege upon her beauty... and he was responsible for that.

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Okay, here's my Skype number, Jack said, typing in his Skype number, And as for Applejack, I'll let her know that you need to talk to her.

Jack then turned around to face Applejack.

"Applejack," he said, "Someone on the other end is gonna want to talk to you. Not sure what it's about, but I'm just giving you a heads up."


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(OOC: Okay she wasn't that all that beat up...so...I'm gonna' play this as Dennis over-reacting. It's hard to imagine she would have let herself get carried around, but, we'll just roll with it.) 

 

"Gyah!" Rainbow sat up from the bed when she bothered to move again on account of the sting, swatting away the cotton. "Lea'me alone. I said I wanted to be alone." She sank chin onto knuckles. "M' a pegasus. Made o' tougher stuff."

 

She swung her foot to and fro for a couple minutes, acting bored and lisping uncertain breaths through her nostrils. The pain from some of the scrapes stung almost like a good hard landing--concrete made a half-decent substitute for landing on grass from altitude, and maybe it would help her think. If anything could accomplish that at this point.

"M'n althete...don't like all these...eggheads..don't get 'nuff exercise...you gotta' fly..." her eyes trailed to the ceiling. Oh, what was she ever going to do? What would dad think if he saw her like this? Working hard, getting in accident, that was one thing. Throwing yourself off a shed and stoning, well, that was another. The broken nose would sting for a couple days, just to remind her not to be stupid, huh? Stupid cartelige sack. At least it was a little less sensitive than the flared nostrils of an equine. Might be something to that.

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(OOC: Okay she wasn't that all that beat up...so...I'm gonna' play this as Dennis over-reacting. It's hard to imagine she would have let herself get carried around, but, we'll just roll with it.) 

((OOC:A two storey fall sounds fuckin bad to me... sorry but i've had my head hit enough times to worry about it.))  Once the situation settled down and Dennis had a chance to re-examine the situation it wasn't as bad as he thought. Still he was worried sick "Celestia dammit Rainbow... what the hell were you thinking? Why did you hurt yourself? Do you... do you want to die Rainbow? What would happen if you did succeed huh?" he says. He wanted to scold her heavily for what she had done "Think of how your friends would feel if you got hurt... or worse... Think of how "I" feel about this, do you even care?" He sighed and just... gave up, afterall he couldn't stay mad at her. "But i guess you're fine now... though the nose will stay for a little bit. No harm in the long run i guess, sorry if i over-reacted. I just... when i saw you in that state... nevermind. At least you will be fine now." He whiped the tears of his face and left her to think for a moment.

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(Wait a minute. What? Two stories?? That would be ridiculous! She'd break a bone! She jumped off the radiator. Onto the roof! I'll look at that post, but...we might have to go back and rewrite something although I hope not...let's see here...what does it say... stuff)

(um okay. So if you want to leave that post the way it is, I'll keep going. Lemme' know)

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Colette copied the number and dialed, wondering why and how Rainbow Dash got in contact with Queen Chrysalis. Shawn interrupted her thoughts by asking who it was on the phone. "Believe it or not, it was the Queen. How the hell Rainbow got her phone number, I have no idea! But Rainbow wants to speak to Applejack, and I want to speak to all of you," Colette said, addressing Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy. "I lost the call with Queenie, and she had Rainbow Dash on her other line! I swear, that Pony's getting worse! I just wanna knock some sense into 'er!" Colette grunted a bit before continuing her rant. "I've never known a bigger idiot in my life!"

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Stephen stepped out of his flat after receiving an email from Shawn of Rainbow Dash's whereabouts. He was now set with the task of finding a purple eyed girl with rainbow hair along with the guy that came with her… Shouldn't be too hard, right??

 

Cicada decided to come along as well. She didn't know exactly what she could do to help, but it beat staying in the flat.

 

"I'm coming, too," she said to Stephen. "And don't get worried about me meeting Rainbow; I'm pretty sure that I can take her on. I doubt tho she'd be in any fit state to attack, right after stepping off a plane."

 

Cicada had taken on board a lot of stray emotions from random humans in the past few months and she was stronger than she'd ever been. She said nothing about this to anyone tho, remembering her Queen's warning.

 


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Colette copied the number and dialed, wondering why and how Rainbow Dash got in contact with Queen Chrysalis. Shawn interrupted her thoughts by asking who it was on the phone. "Believe it or not, it was the Queen. How the hell Rainbow got her phone number, I have no idea! But Rainbow wants to speak to Applejack, and I want to speak to all of you," Colette said, addressing Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy. "I lost the call with Queenie, and she had Rainbow Dash on her other line! I swear, that Pony's getting worse! I just wanna knock some sense into 'er!" Colette grunted a bit before continuing her rant. "I've never known a bigger idiot in my life!"

Jack's Skype client began to ring, and he clicked the "Answer Call" button.

"Hello," Jack said into the laptop, "This is Colette speaking, right? I've got the girls/ponies all right here, right now."

Jack then turned to the group.

"So... anypony have anything to say?"

Twilight walked over to the laptop.

"COLETTE," she shouted, "WHERE IN CELESTIA IS RAINBOW DASH?! WHY DIDN'T YOU TRY TO STOP HER FROM BOARDING THE PLANE!?!?!!!" Twilight paused, taking a few deep breaths.

"Is... there any way I can get in contact with Rainbow Dash?" Twilight asked, "A 'phone number' or Skype thing or something?"


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Okay, here's my Skype number, Jack said, typing in his Skype number, And as for Applejack, I'll let her know that you need to talk to her.

Jack then turned around to face Applejack.

"Applejack," he said, "Someone on the other end is gonna want to talk to you. Not sure what it's about, but I'm just giving you a heads up."

"Alrighty then."

 

 

 

"COLETTE," she shouted, "WHERE IN CELESTIA IS RAINBOW DASH?! WHY DIDN'T YOU TRY TO STOP HER FROM BOARDING THE PLANE!?!?!!!" Twilight paused, taking a few deep breaths. "Is... there any way I can get in contact with Rainbow Dash?" Twilight asked, "A 'phone number' or Skype thing or something?"

"Calm down, Twi. She couldn't do anythin' about it. You know Dash." She put a hand on Twilight's shoulder reassuringly. "And yeah, do ya have any way we could reach her? It'd help us a lot...uh...Colette, was it?" She was concerned, but tried to stay calm about everything.

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“Me too” he said softly he gaze at her, her beauty was beyond marvelous he took her hand softly and spoke with a softer tone “Are love is as pure as the sun, an internal flame that will never die” he said clutching her hand “I love you in ways you can’t even dream, I want to be with you for the rest of my life” he lean in once again and kiss her it was their souls are dancing together in harmony he pulled back slowly still looking into her eyes ((:just for the sake of moving on the story))he pick up the menu and look at her “are you hungry my love?” ((: sorry for the bi-polar post you can control David again if you want too))      

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Rainbow kicked back on the couch and thought.

 

It was tough to sit still and wait, not sure where to go or what to do or who needed her help--everyone or no one. She traced a lock of hair and flicked off blood clots for a while. The TV was vaguely tempting after so much pent inertia, but she decided against it.

 

She could understand Dennis getting upset. But Luna, she was upset. So it hardly seemed inappropriate to her. But where she chose to jump off of was her business, wasn't it?

 

What did he 'feel' about it anyway? It...blast, she would have given a pretty few bits to have that little piece of information. Maybe she could do something to get him to spill. But supposedly she should be starting back to America right. Supposedly the sooner she made it back to Fluttershy, the less she'd feathered up...she wondered if Dennis even had the money to get them back right now. No big deal if he didn't, she figured. Surely she'd find some way to work up the cash. After dropping out of flight school, she'd been able to turn a homeless filly into a mare with a sizable cloud house to herself, after all. Of course, all that was when she had feathers.

 

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"Oh...h'I would appreciate that very much, Applejack." Fluttershy peeked from around Colette and smiled, privately, at Applejack. "You, uh...you know. Talking to her." 

She hadn't had much to say, and as such preferred to keep quiet lest she say something wrong, but wanted to be a part of the plans.

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@@Dawn Stripes"I feel like part of all of this is my fault Rainbow... It is clear that you are a free spirit, and that i am restraining you. Sometimes... sometimes i feel like i try to hard to care about someone, someone like you... that i end up suffocating them. I should probably let you make your own decisions more... afterall not doing so i question your maturity and that's an insult to everyone no matter how you view it." He takes a step back and to let her breathe and stops pestering her. It was at that time that he realized what was truly going on with him and the realization shocked him.

@@Meteorite"Let's have something quick shall we? However much i enjoy this whole thing there is something bugging me. Maybe it's the fact that i'm more of an action-oriented person. However i would still like to thank you for bringing me into this place, it was a great chance to express myself and make a good impression upon the world." she was a little distracted, she was thinking about Rainbow and the problem she had mentioned. "Now that i know what love is... i can't understand why others don't seek it so actively. All else has lost the importance it had to me... well except the changelings of course. But you know what i mean."

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Whose apartment was this anyway? She might as well---

Dennis returned.

...Free spirit....

"Ah! Ah..." Rainbow's eyes widened as though a static spark had hit her in the face from a stray thundercloud wisp. She stared hard at Dennis, then before he could walk out of the room, got up, trancelike, and crossed the carpet, accelerated, and got close enough to bop him in the nose.

"N-n-no..." She gripped both his shoulder. "F-flutershy...said that to me once."
She shook her head, raised an arm, ready to give herself a smack in the temple, then realized the human in front of her probably wouldn't like that any more than her loyal friends did, and went back to squeezing his arm. "I mean...I'm trying to say--" She swallowed past a lump. "Don't--don't do that." She pumped out a breath, eyes glistening, looking for his amber ones. "Don't...uh...leave me." She got a little hot, remembering some of the human connotations. "I mean don't--uh--damnit, this isn't complicated...let me...go. I know I'm an asshole, I...screw up sometimes." She rain a hand through her hair to let some air in. "Tell me...when I'm wrong. I--without you I wouldn't be on my feet right now. I..." Was it so hard to admit she needed him here? It should have been obvious. Not only would she still have been in America, barring him, she probably would have been caught at the airport by some madness, barring that probably thrown herself off the roof by now.


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