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[Justin ZW 396]

Not sure if this belongs in here, but I figure OCs fall under the category of "Other Fan Works."

So I made this OC last night while I was hammered, and I actually like the idea now that I'm sober. However, I'd like to get some feedback from others on him.

Archaic is his name.

Be brutally honest, please. I can take it.

Edited June 23, 2013 by Justin ZW

[repsol rave 2,963]

now that is a rather original OC. his name is actually pretty damn good, considering his talent.

if there is one thing i would say about him i think it would be that his quiet and reserved personality can be somewhat difficult to work with in RP's. but that is really all i can think of. nice one!

[RAGESTAR 479]

I think he sounds really cool, he may not be a fighter, but his character is interesting and I like his design, simple, yet u ique, and I love his backstory! All in all, I approve! Not bad for somone who made it when they were drunk! Lol, jk.

[TheBreech 91]

Pretty damn good for a drunk OC... I like how well named he is.

I judge his backstory like I judge my OC's. Not an original story but it definitely works.

I give it 3/4, I found no problems in it, but nothing blows me away about it either.