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  1. 1. Who is best pony

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Shimmerstone backed up at the sight of the new pony, as always he seemed shy. He was never good at starting conversations or keeping one with ponies he didn't know. "We're all waiting to see if they're any more adventurers, wh-what is your name?" Shimmerstone said.


I am Solaire of Astora, an adherent of the Lord of Sunlight. The sun is a wondrous body. Like a magnificent father! If only I could be so grossly incandescent.

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"My name is Snow Shine." said the unicorn with near-perfect articulation. "Thou wonders if other adventurers shall join us? Alas, I'm not sure if any wilt, for thou fair Princess Luna mentioned danger, and many a pony hold a phobia of death."

 

Snow's eyes flicker around the room, taking everything in.


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"The most horrible kind of ignorance is to have an opinion on an experience that you have never experienced."

"Get off your high horse and give her a hug."

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After what she Said, Aqua looked at her, greatly confused at the unicorn‘s (as far as she could guess) Upper class canterlot voice, and said “what?". Luna then came down, having gotten her drunken sister said “does anypony in this room have any questions At all?" She then scanned the group of ponies

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"Yes, your Grace. What exactly is the precise nature of this quest that thou wish to send us upon? How may we aid thee, fair Princess?"

 

Snow Shine's steely eyes flicker as she looked from Aqua to Princess Luna to Princess Celestia.

 

((Is everyone here? Are we starting?))


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"The most horrible kind of ignorance is to have an opinion on an experience that you have never experienced."

"Get off your high horse and give her a hug."

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Pacific Glow trotted up to Aqua and whispered, "She was wondering if there were any other adventurers, and wasn't sure if there will be, as it said on the poster that this adventure will be dangerous, and most ponies are afraid of dying.

Then she turned to Princess Luna, bowing.

"It's an honour to meet you, Princess. I too am wondering what the nature of this adventure will be."

 

((I think so.))

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Luna looked at shoeshine and pasific and said "it's not just one quest, but many! Since I get stuck here, making the moon rize and all that,I can't really get outside that much,so you will send me a letter through “derpy",now if there are no more questions, all the ponies go to thier home and grab thier important things, then get to madam aqua's home which you will live for now!

 

 

 

((@Dark horn eeyup! This is just a test, so we can see how our chars react to each other so I can think of episode ideas!, we will then get settled into aqua's home and end the episode and move to the next one!))

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"Excuse me, my Princess, if I speak out of turn, yet I have one more thing to propose." says Snow Shine, looking at Aqua with a raised eyebrow and eyes as cold as ice. "Must we all share the same living quarters with... her?"

 

((Sounds good. I suppose Snow is going to be a Rarity meets Twilight Sparkle character, based on how I've allowed her to act thus far.))


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"Get off your high horse and give her a hug."

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Luna looked at snow“Yes, I stated if you sent me a letter that,(pulls out a paper) the first pony at the castle will have thier home be the main home of the adventurers!"

 

Aqua looked at snow“trust me, my home is nice and clean!" She said with a smile “I've got a 7 room house thanks to the leg thing, I also got a Super amazing telescope for some reason."

 

 

(((Geez I totally forgot about @astromare! I wondered who didn't follow the topic!))))

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"I do not wish to drag things on for a long while, yet may I ask how we wilt be compensated for our adventures? Financially, things have been poor for me, and though I thank your Grace for supplying us with housing, might I compel thee to grant us some small amount of payment for the services we do you?"


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"Get off your high horse and give her a hug."

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Pacific Glow nodded, but stayed where she was. She turned to speak to Aqua.

"I packed all my things already. I have them here. perhaps I can wait with you? If I'm going to be living in your house, it's probably bet if we get to know each other. Excuse me a moment, though. I have a question about my studies.

Glow trotted closer to the Princess.

"Excuse me, Your Majesty, but I'm a student at the Academy for Gifted Unicorns here. Is there any way I can continue my studies, or put them to use, during these quests? My talents are with Light and Water magic."

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Luna said to pasific “yes, most likely your studies will come to use with this adventures' and I heard aqua has a huge study room!" She then went to Luna walked over to snow carrying a bag that had 400 bits in it and she said “this is for your room In aqua's home!" She then dropped the bits in front of snowy and walked up to her quarters. “Goodbye, EveryPony!" She said

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"I guess we can say that we're all friends now. I'm going to go get my important things from Cloudsdale." Shimmerstone said. He gave a smile to everypony. "I hope we all get know each other a lot more later on". He flew towards Cloudsdale after saying this. "I won't be long, I'll be back very soon"


I am Solaire of Astora, an adherent of the Lord of Sunlight. The sun is a wondrous body. Like a magnificent father! If only I could be so grossly incandescent.

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Aqua looked at the group of ponies“are you ready to go to my house?" She asked the group, then started to get ready to walk to her house.

 

 

 

 

 

Extra((extra letter limit, I highly highly highly highly dislike thee so much that I explode into a million pieces that still dislike it)))

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She looked again, noticed that no one said anything, and kept walking to her house, flopping over everyonce in a while

 

 

 

 

((Extra letters so science it up all the way! I dunno what is going on so I can waste characters so I can plop this post in,I love commas))

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Shimmerstone returned several minutes later. He was carrying a bag with pictures of family, some were of him working at the rainbow factory. In the other bag some folders fell out, some with the words: Records, Status, Awards. He didn't seem too bothered about those folders falling out, he did freak out when a folder with the words "Confidential" fell out. "They mustn't see this folder, I can't let them know anything about it" He whispered to himself. Luckily the folder was covered by other papers so no pony saw it. "I'm back, did I miss anything?" he asked calmly


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“What are those? " aqua said, looking at the folders that were dropping out of her bag, she then started to bend over, but flopped next to the Pegasus's bag.

 

(((Best refrence to rainbow factory ever, of all time, also I'm happy you posted, I thought this roleplay died)))

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Pacific (with a C not an S) looked at Shimmerstone and stepped forward to help as he dropped his folders, a white aura starting to surround her horn,, but he gathered them so quickly that the spell she was casting backfired and gave her horn a little shock, as well as starting up a headache. She rubbed her forehead. 

"Oww, what happened?" she muttered, then addressed Shimmer. "No, not much, just me asking the Princess about my studies. We're just about to go to Aqua's house."

Pacific frowned as she remembered Shimmerstone's panicked face when he dropped his folders. What was there to be worried about? A bit of dirt? She knew that it was possible he was just naturally nervous as he was shy, as her friend at her last school was, but he had been extremely quick to stuff the folders back in. Still, it was none of her business, but she hoped that he wasn't hiding something from them. If they were going to all be adventuring together, she thought trust was key. Sure they could all have their own secrets, but flat out hiding something would cause for a lack of trust. 

She shook her head and waved it off. It was probably nothing...

 

((Yes, great reference! Oh and Noble will you please start spelling my OC's name correctly? There is no S, it's spelled like the Pacific Ocean. Google it and it'll correct it to Pacific if you type it with an S.))

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Aqua asked the ponies “ready?" She looked around one last time and started the trek to her house, she had a ache in her head about the files, asking, [i wonder how she makes the spectra to power things, or if she has a load of secrets]

 

(Sorry silent, it's just autocorrection on my ipad, also I have the idea that [*text here*]means your characters thoughts about the situation or life and whatever, and{*text here} means that chars dreams

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"I apologize for what just happened." Shimmerstone said. "Pacific, are you all right? Did I do this? If I did I'm really sorry though." [i can't keep this a secret, they'll find out soon enough, but I'm pretty sure I can trust them, we are living together now, and I'm pretty sure they trust me] "We'll all get acquainted soon I suppose, let's go then. I'm extremely sorry Pacific, I don't know what came over me." Shimmerstone adjusted the files into his bag and closed it. He walked with everypony so time wasn't wasted.


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After a while they got to aqua's home, it was spacious, but it looked like a average house. “Make your self at home in any room except the 2 floor, that's where I sleep, you guys can choose any room out of the 4 down there!" She said to the group while walking up the stairs awkwardly

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Shimmerstone looked around the house, checking each room before choosing one. "I'll take this room, if it's ok with everypony" he walked up to one room, opened it, and stepped inside. He began placing his pictures on his shelf. He pulled out a box, placed it on his counter and opened it. The only thing he placed in it what the folder that said "Confindential". He closed it and placed a lock on it. After scavenging for anymore items in his bag, he found an old letter left from his father. He read it before but it didn't hurt to reread things.

"Dear Shimmerstone,

How have you been? Pretty sure the rainbow factory is giving enough funds to live somewhere. I'm sorry I couldn't come home last week, but with royal wedding coming up, the Princess asked for more Gaurds to help patrol the castle. I promise, when this is over, I'll take you to Canterlot with me. Don't do anything stupid ok? Take care of yourself.

Love, your father"

Shimmerstone took out another letter

"Dear Shimmerstone,

I hate to bring bad news but your father was killed in action, fighting the changelings. I certainly hope that you'll still be able to take care of yourself.

Sincerely, Princess Celestia"

He tried not to tear up from reading this. He sat down, staring at the floor. "Some things don't live forever, and I got to face the fact that he is gone" Shimmerstone said. He wiped his tears away and put the letters with his pictures on the shelf.

((((I has new episode idea. The one behind the happy mask. Shimmerstone tells the group of what he did at the Rainbow Factory. Not sure how it will affect the story))))

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Pacific Glow smiled at Shimmerstone, trying to console him.
"It's fine. You just put your folders away so quickly that my magic backfired because it was aims at your folders to help you pick them up. I'm fine, just a bit of a headache."
She followed Aqua to the house. Looking at the rooms, she decided on one with the biggest desk and bookshelves in it. It was also closest to the large study. She set to organizing her things with her levitation magic. It worsened the headache a bit, using her magic, but she ignored it for the sake of efficiency. She took out an old picture of her and her friends from Manechester and placed it carefully on the bedside table. The five of them were sitting in the field. Aura Feather had Glowing Notes in a big hug while she was flying. Sunset was sitting and smiling at the camera shyly. Mint Remedy was beside Sunset and was just smiling calmly and gracefully, as always. Pacific herself was standing on the other side of Mint, staring amusedly at her hugging friends.
Smiling at the memories, she set some other photos near that one and looked at them for a while before resuming unpacking.
After finishing up, Pacific Glow left the room to explore the house.

((Sorry, but I'm just gonna go with Example text for Pacific's thoughts and Example text for her dreams. I don't like using [] or {} and just italics is the proper way to put thoughts. And I see. Autocorrect shouldn't be doing that though, weird. Perhaps go into setings and turn autocorrect off and then back on if you want to keep AC?))

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Aqua sat on her bed, and relaxed, she looked around her room, it was a glorious room with a spectra maker trasported strait from the factory, she then grinned at a picture, it was the guard that saved her life but he died saving her, she had a thought “why does he look like shimmer?", she then feel asleep

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