Onylex 2,837 July 20, 2013 Share July 20, 2013 Well, before I ask you all what you think of it I just wanted to point out what I think could have made the drawing about 20% cooler. 1. Her mane could use some work 2. Her left arm could be a bit bigger 3. The wings are very awkward looking 4. The color pattern could be much better So, what do you guys think? Do you think Im being to hard on my self? I'd also love to know what you think could use improvements. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Critical 434 July 20, 2013 Share July 20, 2013 It wasn't half bad. The animation was identical to the show, the story was so-so, the voice acting was pretty good. But the references could use some subtlety and the ending was, for lack of a better term, a bit rushed. Demo Reel: http://mlpforums.com...-critical-r3994 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ownage 10 July 20, 2013 Share July 20, 2013 ^ Lol,I think it looks awesome for a hand made drawing,the only things that needed improvement are the wings I guess,awesome drawing though,I can't draw for buck 1 Signature made by the awesome SirLunashy <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Silver Essence~ 2,625 July 20, 2013 Share July 20, 2013 It looks pretty good to me dude. Most artists are a bit critical at their own work, but you got it pretty accurate so far. Overall, it's pretty good. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onylex 2,837 July 20, 2013 Author Share July 20, 2013 It wasn't half bad. The animation was identical to the show, the story was so-so, the voice acting was pretty good. But the references could use some subtlety and the ending was, for lack of a better term, a bit rushed. What do you mean? We are still talking about the drawing right? Im sorry, I think that I may have misunderstood what you're trying to tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appetite4Democracy 452 July 20, 2013 Share July 20, 2013 It wasn't half bad. The animation was identical to the show, the story was so-so, the voice acting was pretty good. But the references could use some subtlety and the ending was, for lack of a better term, a bit rushed. It helps to read before posting, bro. This is a drawing. Not Double Rainboom. What do you mean? We are still talking about the drawing right? Im sorry, I think that I may have misunderstood what you're trying to tell me. I think he's talking about Double Rainboom, which is a fan animation. 1 "For those about to rock, we salute you!"- ACϟDCSignature by Gone ϟ Airbourne (click the signature) My Tumblr Member of the Equestrian Gaming Clan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Critical 434 July 20, 2013 Share July 20, 2013 Wait. Ah man, I missed the subject. Sorry, the drawing itself is pretty good, it looks like you used color pencils that must have been hard. I'm gonna go sit down and let my skull eat itself in ebarrasment. 2 Demo Reel: http://mlpforums.com...-critical-r3994 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Periwinkle 3,775 July 20, 2013 Share July 20, 2013 My favorite part is her expression. :3 One thing I noticed is that her eyes seem awfully purple, but other than that I love it. Great pose. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onylex 2,837 July 20, 2013 Author Share July 20, 2013 My favorite part is her expression. :3 One thing I noticed is that her eyes seem awfully purple, but other than that I love it. Great pose. Yeah, sorry about that my scanner reads the coloration very oddly. It seems to only work the way it wants to. Occasionally it will work the way I want it to work but, I try not to get my hopes up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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