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[Stargazer Nights 226]

So recently I've been working on getting back at drawing/painting... and I've done a few more pictures of my OC, BassClef. I was trying out digitally sketching my pieces, too, instead of pencil sketching, and I think they turned out alright.. What do you guys all think?

 

Any tips on what I can improve on?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

Well Bass Clef, your on your way towards the mastery of art. 

In all three art designs, you got the general idea of what to draw in there.

As for improvement, you got the idea of how to create a background, but with a few more added details, it could look impressive.

 

Amazing work dude, keep it up.

[Stargazer Nights 226]

Well Bass Clef, your on your way towards the mastery of art. 

In all three art designs, you got the general idea of what to draw in there.

As for improvement, you got the idea of how to create a background, but with a few more added details, it could look impressive.

 

Amazing work dude, keep it up.

Oh, first, thank you so much for the compliments. And I know the backgrounds don't necessarily include much, but by the time I get there I'm too lazy to add the details >.> I do plan on working on that that though, soon.

 

Once again, thanks for the compliment and advice!

[RosemaryPetal 112]

I love the third one, it's clearly the best. 

I'm sure you've heard this before, but just work on your legs a little

Only error with the third pic., nose line shouldn't extend through the horn

Cool OC, btw

[Stargazer Nights 226]

I love the third one, it's clearly the best. 

I'm sure you've heard this before, but just work on your legs a little

Only error with the third pic., nose line shouldn't extend through the horn

Cool OC, btw

Thank you for the input, and I'll be sure to work on my legs.

 

His nose line? Oh, heh, I guess I didn't look that one through... That was originally gonna be a strand of hair, but it came out wrong. >.>

 

And Thanks for the compliment, too. ^.^

[RosemaryPetal 112]

Thank you for the input, and I'll be sure to work on my legs.

 

His nose line? Oh, heh, I guess I didn't look that one through... That was originally gonna be a strand of hair, but it came out wrong. >.>

 

And Thanks for the compliment, too. ^.^

Ooooh now I see it.

Np, keep up the good work.

Meant to say, I like how you do your eyes, nice and shiny lol.

(Ain't nobody got time for 100 characters)

[Stargazer Nights 226]

Ooooh now I see it.

Np, keep up the good work.

Meant to say, I like how you do your eyes, nice and shiny lol.

(Ain't nobody got time for 100 characters)

Heh yeah, and thanks again. I do enjoy the eyss shiny, I suppose. Helps maintain a certain cuteness in the character x]

 

I will most certainly try to keep improving! ^.^

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Colourwise these are well done, the anatomy looks a bit doughy though:

In the second pic, he seems to be missing a neck, the hooves don't always match and so on.

 

I'd say try some more sketching to get more familiar with the anatomy.

[Stargazer Nights 226]

Colourwise these are well done, the anatomy looks a bit doughy though:

In the second pic, he seems to be missing a neck, the hooves don't always match and so on.

 

I'd say try some more sketching to get more familiar with the anatomy.

 

Thanks for all the criticism! I'll be sure to work on all that more, for sure.

 

Your OC should really lay off the cake!

Your proportions are a little off. His hooves should be a bit thinner, and like Silverwisp said, he's lacking a neck in the second picture.

Try doing some practice sketches for a bit! You'll find that it'll make your proportions better.

Thank you, as well. I'll try to work on thinning it out... I've always had trouble with proportions. but once again, I'll continue to work on it! Thanks again!

[Dark Horn 430]

You did an exceptional job in all three pictures. I like them all, especially the third one. But, as someone else has already stated, a little more detail in the background could go a long way.

 

Nevertheless, excellent work, and thanks for contributing!