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[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

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"I'll take a wild guess and say that her name is Charcoal." Arrow said after hearing the stallion say her name. "I want to know your name stallion." Arrow said still holding out his hoof in the same friendly manner tht he Shad it before. "I'm guessing that you two are 'close' friends?" he asked with a smirk.

 

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"My name is Thunder Farts, but you can call me Thunder. I think i heard your name was Arrow?." Thunder said while shaking hoofs with Arrow. "Well, very nice to meet you. And about the 'close friends' nah, not yet." he said, smiling when he did so.

 

((OOC: i like how the only mistake i could find was the one in your explaining.))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"My name is Thunder Farts, but you can call me Thunder. I think i heard your name was Arrow?." Thunder said while shaking hoofs with Arrow. "Well, very nice to meet you. And about the 'close friends' nah, not yet." he said, smiling when he did so.

 

Blushing a little bit Charcoal starts to walk away. "Um, well ok then. I'll just leave that to you two then. I'm gonna go this way, bye.

 

((OOC: i like how the only mistake i could find was the one in your explaining.))

Blushing a little bit Charcoal starts to walk away. "Um, well on then, I'll just leave the scavenging to you to then. I'm just gonna..." Looking around she tries to find something for her to do. "Go talk to Pinkie Pie well good luck see you later." Charcoal finishes in a rush." Edited August 6, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

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"Wait, can't you come with us? There's always more found with more ponies there to find things." Thunder asked Charcoal. "That, and i'd like to spend more time with you." Thunder winked at Charcoal as he said that, then looked if Arrow was ready to go.

 

 

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[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"Wait, can't you come with us? There's always more found with more ponies there to find things." Thunder asked Charcoal. "That, and i'd like to spend more time with you." Thunder winked at Charcoal as he said that, then looked if Arrow was ready to go.

 

 

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At that Charcoal's blush deepens. "I-I, um, I guess I could come. You do make a good point there, so I guess I could come with. Oh and also." She turns to Arrow. "On the way would you mind explaining to me what was up with that bow from earlier?"

 

((OOC: Just a heads up, I'm heading out to have dinner with family soon so I will probably be off for a while.))

Edited August 6, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

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(Sorry I wasn't on, I went to see Pacific Rim)

 

"Nice to meet you Thunder." Arrow said."I guess we can go now?" He said as he conjured his bow 'n' arrows. "It'll be a trip so we probably won't be back for a good few hours. Or the raiders put up a good fight." He walks on. "On ward my fellow steeds!" He yells as he raises his bow in the air and marches.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"Is it really nessesary to march? I mean, we are invading a raider camp, not enroling for the army." As they walk along Charcoal again, notices Arrow's strange bo again. "Say Arrow, can you tell me about that bow of yours? I'm a blacksmith, but I've never seen a bow like that before."

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

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Arrow stops marching and smile. "Well one, I was thinking that it would be funny if the raiders saw marching an opening fire while marching through their territory. Two, This is made of wolframite and ebony." Arrow said. "The frame of it is wolframite, the limbs are made of ebony. The end of the limbs are sharpened to a point so if I go close quarters, I stab 'em." He points the bow horizontally stabbing the air. "Like so. 60lbs. pull back and the arrows," He conjures an arrow that the arrow head was in a drill shape. "This is also made of the same material. the arrow tip is in a drill because--believe it or not--the arrow spins. So once it spins in the air, the drill spins; thus a deeper penetration to the armor or skin.... Any other questions? Ms. Blacksmith?" He teased.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"Yes acually. Where did you find the wolframite to make that? I've worked with ebony myself but I've never acutually seen anything made with that material since it seems to be so rare. Either that or I just haven't been looking in the right places for it."

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

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"Wolframite is in the quartz crystal family." Arrow said. "I also think you might take an intreats in this?" He conjures a sword handle first, that's connected to a chain, that is also connected to six smaller chains, that were connected to razor blades. He started to pant a bit. "This takes more energy to conjure this up more than the bow for some reason. Even though it's made of more common metals. Iron and aluminum. I call it, The Mutilator." He spins it in front of letting the metals fly in a circle then stops. "Wanna see it?" He floats it to Charcoal. 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"Woah, heck yeah i wanna see it." Charcoal takes the blade and begins to looks it over. "Hmm, honestly I can't imagine using magic on this thing can be very good for its condition in the long run. But you seem to have taken good care of it, that I can apreciate."

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

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"Thanks." Arrow said and put an arrow on the string. "I normally use it to torture, and use it for self-defense. I love to see the faces of those who come across it." He says with a smirk. "It's funny." He ended. "...... You can keep that, I can try to conjure up another one if I get the materials and what not." 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"Thanks." Arrow said and put an arrow on the string. "I normally use it to torture, and use it for self-defense. I love to see the faces of those who come across it." He says with a smirk. "It's funny." He ended. "...... You can keep that, I can try to conjure up another one if I get the materials and what not." 

 

 

"No thanks. I've got my own blade to use that I prefer anyway. I'm not usually one to use blades with... atachments on the handle, gets in my way. Besides I don't have magic like you do, so I don't have that advantage. Just a plain old blae is all I need. And by the way, the torture part doesn't exactly vote trust."

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

"No thanks. I've got my own blade to use that I prefer anyway. I'm not usually one to use blades with... atachments on the handle, gets in my way. Besides I don't have magic like you do, so I don't have that advantage. Just a plain old blae is all I need. And by the way, the torture part doesn't exactly vote trust."

"I use the torture part for answers. In fact, blades are mainly torture. There used to rip skin and fur apart in such a painful way. There not meant to play a part as a quick death. Unless you have limitless amounts of mercy that you just aim for the neck and decapitate." Arrow said, evitating The Mutilator back and de-spelling it.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"I use the torture part for answers. In fact, blades are mainly torture. There used to rip skin and fur apart in such a painful way. There not meant to play a part as a quick death. Unless you have limitless amounts of mercy that you just aim for the neck and decapitate." Arrow said, evitating The Mutilator back and de-spelling it.

 

 

"You think I don't know that Arrow? I know blades, blades are pretty much my whole life. I've been around all kinds of weapons for as long as i can remember, so you don't need to explain the purpose of them to me. Now, how far is it till this camp you were talking about?"

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

"You think I don't know that Arrow? I know blades, blades are pretty much my whole life. I've been around all kinds of weapons for as long as i can remember, so you don't need to explain the purpose of them to me. Now, how far is it till this camp you were talking about?"

Arrow hushes after what the dark pony said. "About one more mile until where there." He said. "Besides they have a innocent pony there, so watch what you hit." He added while walking into a forest thick with bushes and thorn trees. "The raiders are dumb to pick here, but they managed." Arrow ended.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Arrow hushes after what the dark pony said. "About one more mile until where there." He said. "Besides they have a innocent pony there, so watch what you hit." He added while walking into a forest thick with bushes and thorn trees. "The raiders are dumb to pick here, but they managed." Arrow ended.

"I should have brought my bow and arrows with me. I could have flown I to the tree line and shot them while out of sight. But I guess just plain old sword will have to do for now." Charcoal while getting her armour into a more comfortable position unsheathes her blade and keeps it at the ready.

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

"I should have brought my bow and arrows with me. I could have flown I to the tree line and shot them while out of sight. But I guess just plain old sword will have to do for now." Charcoal while getting her armour into a more comfortable position unsheathes her blade and keeps it at the ready.

As the destination gets closer, The three ponies could start to hear a scream, bang, and then laughter. "Get low." Arrow said drawing his bow half way to his cheek and sneaks to get a closer look at the group. "If you get spotted... I wish you the best." The raider ponies were wearing metal armor thin as paper, it looked like aluminum foil from a distance. There was three raiders laugh at a young mare who just saw her own relative die by a dirty looking earth stallion. The buck walked up to the young mare and said, "Awwww, is the little filly scared to die?" He points the gun into the filly's ear and twists it around. The young mare starts to scream a bit pleading for her life. The stallion pulls away and says to the other two. "Have fun." The two other stallions grin to one another and grab the mare and drags her to the tent as she screams her relatives name 'Dawny' and then for help.

 

"Well damn." Arrow whispered.

 

(OOC: If it's too much, let me know.))

Edited August 7, 2013 by Three Wolf Moon

[Charcoal Embers 169]

As the destination gets closer, The three ponies could start to hear a scream, bang, and then laughter. "Get low." Arrow said drawing his bow half way to his cheek and sneaks to get a closer look at the group. "If you get spotted... I wish you the best." The raider ponies were wearing metal armor thin as paper, it looked like aluminum foil from a distance. There was three raiders laugh at a young mare who just saw her own relative die by a dirty looking earth stallion. The buck walked up to the young mare and said, "Awwww, is the little filly scared to die?" He points the gun into the filly's ear and twists it around. The young mare starts to scream a bit pleading for her life. The stallion pulls away and says to the other two. "Have fun." The two other stallions grin to one another and grab the mare and drags her to the tent as she screams her relatives name 'Dawny' and then for help.

 

"Well damn." Arrow whispered.

 

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"Grrr!!" Charcoal was sething with rage now at what she just whitnised. "Let me at them Arrow! Give me cover fire I'm going after those two in the tent! They are going to pay for treating that poor filly that way, she doesn't deserve to be beat by these raiders."

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

"Grrr!!" Charcoal was sething with rage now at what she just whitnised. "Let me at them Arrow! Give me cover fire I'm going after those two in the tent! They are going to pay for treating that poor filly that way, she doesn't deserve to be beat by these raiders."

"You ready to sick 'em? Not just yet..." He re-conjures the Mutilator and levitates it to Charcoal. "It can be used by rathe ponies. just grab the handle with your muzzle and swing it. Make good use of her." He draws the bow back fully and whistles. "OVER HERE!!!" The leader of the group looks over at Arrow and right before he said something, Arrow launches his arrow drill and hit right on the stallion in the torso making a major wound and and a yelp by the leader. "Go sick 'em Charcoal." Arrow said.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"You ready to sick 'em? Not just yet..." He re-conjures the Mutilator and levitates it to Charcoal. "It can be used by rathe ponies. just grab the handle with your muzzle and swing it. Make good use of her." He draws the bow back fully and whistles. "OVER HERE!!!" The leader of the group looks over at Arrow and right before he said something, Arrow launches his arrow drill and hit right on the stallion in the torso making a major wound and and a yelp by the leader. "Go sick 'em Charcoal." Arrow said.

 

 

"With pleasure." With an insane grin on her face Charcoal blindly runs into camp using the the blades on the end to rip the surprised raider to shreads. In just a few swings raider was reduced to a pile of meat. Now covered in blood Charcoal moves onto the tent with the other two ponies.

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

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The two stallions were beating The youngling sensless with blunt weapons, her scream and bone breaking made the stallions laugh hard. One the stallions see a dark older mare walk into the tent. "What the hell?" he says as he pull out a 38. Revolver and aims it at the mare. The other stallion stops and looks over his shoulder, then looks at a blanket covered thing. "what are you doing here missy?" he asks Charcoal.

Edited August 7, 2013 by Three Wolf Moon

[Paladin Butters 163]

Spike was sitting down on a log with Pinkie Pie. Dandelion was on a log near them. They all were cutting at pieces of wood to make parts of the Barracked fence. There was a snap Snap!. Spike looked up immediately. Then there was silence again. Spike reached for his gun and pointed it in the direction of the disturbance. "We're being watched.." Spike said quietly. Spike got into a crouch position. Pinkie Pie stopped what she was doing and looked around with squinted eyes. "See anything?" Pinkie Pie said quietly

"No." Spike said quietly aswell. about of minute of this continued.

 

Spike put his gun down finally being at ease. Then a chain shot out from the direction of the wood snapping. and It grabbed Spike. Pinkie Pie tried to grab him but missed. Dandelion was too far away to grab him. Three more chains shot at Pinkie Pie and took her into the mist. Most of the ponies in the area were now on their feet. So was Sarah (Surprising I know) They held their weapons in front of them.

 

An arrow shot at Scootaloo and hit her. Then a chain shot out and grabbed her. Big Mac grabbed the chain pulling with all his might. Till another shot out and grabbed him. after they were gone a blood trail followed from where Scootaloo's body had been dragged.

"NOO!" Cried Sweetie Belle. As she tried to run after Scootaloo. She was grabbed by Apple Bloom and pinned. "They'll take you too!" She screamed! Then another chain grabbed Sweetie Belle. "Help!" She said crying. Then was yanked back into the mist. seconds later you could hear her scream.

 

AppleJack tried to run after the fillies but got shot in the head. when her body hit the ground. A stallion came out of the Mists. followed by 2 others. Franics looked at the rest of the pony's. "Looks like we got more work to do..Don't we?" He snared.

Jean and Samantha smiled evilly.

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*Don't think anypony besides Rock's controller is still at the camp.

 

(( OOC - Other reasons news you might need to know!

- Updated first thread post.

- Story Line has been changed due to player activity (No worries the story has not been sped up at all! )

- I found music that goes along with the Battle at the Camp!

- I like milk

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[Charcoal Embers 169]

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Charcoal grins evily at the stallions then slowly starts to walk forward while slowly singing a song she herd when she was little.

"Hush now, quiet now. It's time to lay your sleepy head."

"Hush now, quiet now. It's time to go to bed."

She then rushes forward and grabs the stallion with the gun by the leg an throws him outside the tent. Then she takes the Mutilator and tears out the second stallions trachea.

[Celestial Panzerhund 289]

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"WOAH!" the stallion that was thrown outside rolled along the ground to a stop. Before he evened moved Arrow send the drill of death straight into his skull. Silencing the stallion for good.

 

The stallion fall to the ground grabbing at his throat desperately trying to scream but can't as blood ruses quickly from his throat. He coughs once sending blood out. Then again... Silence.

 

The young mare gets up from being beaten and quickly rushes to the end of the room, frightened by the scary dark mare with the orangy-reddish mane. She starts to cry softly holding her broken hoof.