open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)

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"If you want i can take him, but i thought you might've liked him around. Your call, if you want me to take him, i'll take him with me, otherwise he stays here and you have to take care of him." Thunder said, getting kind of scared as he saw the madness in Charcoals eyes.

"Well what about the other foals when they are born, are you going to take them to?" Charcoals voice was beginning to raise. "We have gone through so much together Thunder and now you want to leave me half the time to bed with my best friend!" Charcoal almost screamed with tears still falling from her eyes.

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Thunder looked at the ground. "Yes." He whispered quietly. "Yes i want to. Lightning stays here, Caprisha took care of him when you were on your heat, but she aint his mother, you are, and you always will be." Thunder said, then he walked out of the door and towards the hospital.

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Thunder looked at the ground. "Yes." He whispered quietly. "Yes i want to. Lightning stays here, Caprisha took care of him when you were on your heat, but she aint his mother, you are, and you always will be." Thunder said, then he walked out of the door and towards the hospital.

"I... I..." Charcoal slowly made her way to the bedroom. All she wanted to do was cry right now, but she was thinking about getting something done later that involved a long piece of rope and a stool for her to stand on. She desperately didn't want to, but she wasn't sure now as she began crying herself to sleep.

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Thunder walked towards the hospital with tears in his eyes, they almost froze in the cold wintery snow. He entered the hospital and later Caprisha's room. "Hey Prish, how're you doing." he said to Caprisha who was lying in her bed. He sat on Caprisha's bed.

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Thunder walked towards the hospital with tears in his eyes, they almost froze in the cold wintery snow. He entered the hospital and later Caprisha's room. "Hey Prish, how're you doing." he said to Caprisha who was lying in her bed. He sat on Caprisha's bed.

Caprisha was sweating. She had been practicing her magic for a while now and it was beginning to take its tole. "Oh nothing... just practicing my... magic. I'm getting... better at... it. I can almost... lift this... cup with... water in it." Caprisha said between each breath she took.

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"That's great." Thunder said. He sighed. "I don't think Charcoal is do happy with you and me being together. She seemed awfully unhappy when i mentioned going yo you." Thunder took a deep breath. "And we're going to get twins. The problem is we're nearly out of money and i lost my job not too long ago."

 

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"That's great." Thunder said. He sighed. "I don't think Charcoal is do happy with you and me being together. She seemed awfully unhappy when i mentioned going yo you." Thunder took a deep breath. "And we're going to get twins. The problem is we're nearly out of money and i lost my job not too long ago."

 

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"That could be a problem." Caprisha said. "Well what was your job before? Maybe I could take it for you. It couldn't be too bad compared to my last job with the gang that cut off my horn." Caprisha said causally, but truthfully it was still really hurting her on the inside.

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"Well, mine involves hunting motherbuckers, torturing motherbuckers and killing motherbuckers." Thunder chuckled. "But what was your job anyways? It must be serious business if it makes you do something horrible like losing a vital body part." He said.

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"Well, mine involves hunting motherbuckers, torturing motherbuckers and killing motherbuckers." Thunder chuckled. "But what was your job anyways? It must be serious business if it makes you do something horrible like losing a vital body part." He said.

"Well, basically somepony would hire us to get something for them, or kill someone, or steal something and it is always from somepony important. I guess it is pretty much your job but we don't have to torture them and the stuff we steal is always extremely valuable."

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"So, what was the thing you were going to do, the thing that you failed?" Thunder asked. He wanted to know what was important enough to let a unicorn lose her horn. He sat on a chair next to the bed looking at Caprisha's bright orange face and the giant round eyes.

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"So, what was the thing you were going to do, the thing that you failed?" Thunder asked. He wanted to know what was important enough to let a unicorn lose her horn. He sat on a chair next to the bed looking at Caprisha's bright orange face and the giant round eyes.

"I was supposed to retrieve a specials rifle from two ponies that live in town here. I thought it was just going to be a normal mission, get in, get the rifle, get out. Then I found out you and Charcoal had the rifle I needed. I wasn't about to steal from Charcoal and now I'm even less likely to take it."

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"Yeah, that rifle should be destroyed." Thunder said. Then he hopped on Caprisha's bed and layed next to her. "But first i'm here. The moon is starting to show itself and sun is hiding. Do you still want a foal?" Thunder asked, still laying next to Caprisha, looking at her.

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"Yeah, that rifle should be destroyed." Thunder said. Then he hopped on Caprisha's bed and layed next to her. "But first i'm here. The moon is starting to show itself and sun is hiding. Do you still want a foal?" Thunder asked, still laying next to Caprisha, looking at her.

Caprisha smiled. "I would still very much like to. As long as it is with you Thunder." She said. She leaned forward and gave Thunder a passionate kiss. She just continued to kiss him until he did something, she wanted him to take control of the situation.

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Thunder crawled under the blanket and grabbed Caprisha's chest with his forehooves and turned her on her side so they were facing eachother. He gave Caprisha a big kiss and brought one of his hooves up to her mane, which looked messy and uncombed.

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Thunder crawled under the blanket and grabbed Caprisha's chest with his forehooves and turned her on her side so they were facing eachother. He gave Caprisha a big kiss and brought one of his hooves up to her mane, which looked messy and uncombed.

Caprisha was greatful for the affection she was getting from Thunder. She wrapped her arms around his head and pulled him closer to him. She saw that the door was still open and used her magic to pull the door stop out of the way and the door closed on its own, hopefully they wouldn't be interrupted.

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BUT THEN SOME PONIES CAME IN AND KILLED EVERYPONY ((sorry))

 

Thunder stroked Caprisha's mane and tangled his hind legs into Caprisha's. He flipped her on her back and layed on to of her. "It's time, honey." He said as he started with Caprisha, giving her what she wants.

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BUT THEN SOME PONIES CAME IN AND KILLED EVERYPONY ((sorry))

 

Thunder stroked Caprisha's mane and tangled his hind legs into Caprisha's. He flipped her on her back and layed on to of her. "It's time, honey." He said as he started with Caprisha, giving her what she wants.

Caprisha woke up the next morning feeling... nice. When she remembered the night before she smiled. She got out of bed and stretched for a second before seeing the mess they made of the bed. And Thunder wasn't exactly clean himself. She smiled and kissed his cheek.

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Thunder was still heavily asleep when Caprisha woke up. But not much later he woke up himself, and saw the mess he had all over him. He wiped it off on the blanket and got out too. He walked up to Caprisha and kissed her neck. "I love you Caprisha." He said. Hj

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Thunder was still heavily asleep when Caprisha woke up. But not much later he woke up himself, and saw the mess he had all over him. He wiped it off on the blanket and got out too. He walked up to Caprisha and kissed her neck. "I love you Caprisha." He said. Hj

Caprisha kissed him back. "I love you too Thunder." She said. "You know, you have probably made one of the dumbest financial decisions in the history of forever. You don't have a job, you are having foals with two different mares who you plan on sharing your time with, and one of the mares is having twins from what I've heard."

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"Yes, but i don't really call it a mistake, since i didn't quit, but i were fired." Thunder sighed. "I'm going to enlist in the army. I heard pegasi are much needed lately." He said. He looked out of the window, at ponies shoveling snow from their doors to make a free way.

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"Yes, but i don't really call it a mistake, since i didn't quit, but i were fired." Thunder sighed. "I'm going to enlist in the army. I heard pegasi are much needed lately." He said. He looked out of the window, at ponies shoveling snow from their doors to make a free way.

"But how open will that leave you for Charcoal?" Caprisha asked. "I would be ok, I'm much newer to this relationship. But Charcoal has had much more time to grow attached to you and she might not be so inclined to let you go. I don't imagine she was very happy when you said you were going to leave."

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"She wasn't. But this is my desicion, and it's to earn money to take care of the foals. I'm leaving the day after tomorrow. I'll ask you and Charcoal to come to the train station and wave me goodbye." He said. He gave Caprisha a kiss on her cheek and walked out off the room, he checked if he was clean and then he went off to Charcoal and his apartment.

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"She wasn't. But this is my desicion, and it's to earn money to take care of the foals. I'm leaving the day after tomorrow. I'll ask you and Charcoal to come to the train station and wave me goodbye." He said. He gave Caprisha a kiss on her cheek and walked out off the room, he checked if he was clean and then he went off to Charcoal and his apartment.

Charcoal had made her decision. She had gotten a rope long enough for it to reach from the roof and fit around her neck. She had found a stood tall enough for her to use to reach the rope easily. She was ready. She stepped on top of the stool and slipped her neck through the rope knot. She kicked the stool out from under her and felt her air be cut off.

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Thunder opened the door and was shocked to see what Charcoal was doing. "CHARCOAL!" He shouted. He flew up to her and held her higher than the rope, allowing her to breathe like she would normally. Then he took the rope from her neck and set her down on the ground.

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Thunder opened the door and was shocked to see what Charcoal was doing. "CHARCOAL!" He shouted. He flew up to her and held her higher than the rope, allowing her to breathe like she would normally. Then he took the rope from her neck and set her down on the ground.

Charcoal found herself coughing on the floor. It hadn't been enough. She gasped and wheezed as she lied there on floor. "I-I'm sorry, I just don't want to live without you." Charcoal tried her best to say through her bruised windpipe. She just layed there on the floor after that. Edited September 26, 2013 by Charcoal Embers