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@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"No" Thunder said, not looking at Charcoal "I don't want you to get drunk, i want us to get drunk. Please get food, drinks and alcohol from the market, then come look me up at the motel. Please." THunder pointed his hoof at the market.

 

((OOC: Nah, that was clear so you did it right.)

"Oh alright. Party pooper." Charcoal whispering the last part to herself. "What exactly do you want me to get? How long do we need it to last for? What kind of alcohol do you want me to get? Because some can be better than others, especially when it is just one mare... and one stallion." Charcoal whispers into Thunders ear.

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"Just some food for a couple of days. And maybe some beer, whiskey, vodka and something you like. Now, i'll head off to the motel and see you there." Thunder smiled at Charcoal. Then he walked to the motel. "You did it Thunder, you fucking did it." He said to himself.

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Watching Thunder walk off Charcoal just watches him as he seems happy. "The fuck is he so happy about? Oh well lets get this over with." About an hour later and after some bad bartering, curses, and maybe a bit of flirting Charcoal was walking in the direction she thought was where Thunder told her to go with the food, fresh water, and plenty of cheep but good whiskey. Taking out a bottle she begins drinking one, distracted she doesn't even notice Thunder untill she ran strait into him.

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"Oh, hey Charcoal. Look at the room i rented. Isn't it... shitty." Thunder looked at Charcoal and grabbed the whiskey "gimme that!" Then he started chucking away the whiskey. As it burned in his throat he felt a sensation he had not felt since long, a good drink.

"I will sit on the couch now."

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"Oh, hey Charcoal. Look at the room i rented. Isn't it... shitty." Thunder looked at Charcoal and grabbed the whiskey "gimme that!" Then he started chucking away the whiskey. As it burned in his throat he felt a sensation he had not felt since long, a good drink.

"I will sit on the couch now."

"Hey give that back!" Trying to get her drink back Charcoal up and tackles Thunder down. Holding down his legs and grabbing the bottle back from him. "Ha, it's now." Blowing a raspberry at him Charcoal begins to drink once more from the bottle that was hers.

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Blowing a raspberry at him
 

((OOC i have no idea what that is...))

 

"Then i'll just grab this one." Thunder grabs one of the bottles from the bag, opens it, and drinks it about halfway until putting it down on the table and proceeding to lie down on the couch. "I've been waiting so fucking long for this."

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((OOC i have no idea what that is...))

 

"Then i'll just grab this one." Thunder grabs one of the bottles from the bag, opens it, and drinks it about halfway until putting it down on the table and proceeding to lie down on the couch. "I've been waiting so fucking long for this."

"Giggle, what's the matter down feel you could take me of shour own courage?" Charcoal slightly slurs out. "I mean come on are jou a stallion or a moush? Just fucking ask it ish not dat hard. All jou gota do is say 'Charcoal have sex with me.' does dat sheem so hard?"

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"Charcoal have sex with me." Is what Thunder than said, he felt his heart pound as he asked this. Though this is what he has been working for, this is not the way he imagined it to be, nor feel. But it felt so good already, he couldn't wait to see wha happened next.

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"Charcoal have sex with me." Is what Thunder than said, he felt his heart pound as he asked this. Though this is what he has been working for, this is not the way he imagined it to be, nor feel. But it felt so good already, he couldn't wait to see wha happened next.

"Hehe, are you shure jou want to? If jou are really ready follow me to jhe bed. I'm shure I can jhow jou a fucking good time with me. Giggle" Charcoal walked off the the bedroom and got into bed waiting to see if Thunder would really come.

 

((OOC: Remember, if Thunder is going to do this it will be another time skip.))

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(( OOC: yeah, i think discribing suck sexual content will get us banned on the forums...))

 

"Sure i guess i'm ready for your good time." Thunder said, getting up and walking towards the bed with a bottle of whiskey and he threw one at Charcoal "Catch, Char" he shouted at Charoal.

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(( OOC: yeah, i think discribing suck sexual content will get us banned on the forums...))

 

"Sure i guess i'm ready for your good time." Thunder said, getting up and walking towards the bed with a bottle of whiskey and he threw one at Charcoal "Catch, Char" he shouted at Charoal.

Charcoal attempts to catch the bottle but misses and it smacks her in the face. "Ow. Well oopppsh, I mished." Picking up the bottle she opens it and downs another big gulp. "Ahh, giggle. Why don't jou come here Thunder, so I can show jou how a true mare shows her stallion a good time.

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((OOC: if we were to describe it and then publish it, it would be one hell of a clopfic...))

 

"Hold your horses, i'm getting there" Thunder said smiling at Charcoal.

He jumped on the bed, ready for Charcoal, and took a big mouthfull of whiskey.

"Well, what you're waiting for?"

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((OOC: if we were to describe it and then publish it, it would be one hell of a clopfic...))

 

"Hold your horses, i'm getting there" Thunder said smiling at Charcoal.

He jumped on the bed, ready for Charcoal, and took a big mouthfull of whiskey.

"Well, what you're waiting for?"

"Ab.. so.. lutly... nothing." After a long night of many pleasures the two of them finally finish up and get some much needed rest.

Waking up the next morning Charcoal was awakened by probably the worst thing to wake up to... a hangover. "Oh luna my fucking head. Ow oh, what happened last night." Looking around Charcoal tried to piece together what had happened the night before. Then she saw Thunder, and noticed all the strange fluid everywhere. "Wait did we- with the- and the... SCREEEEEEEEEEM!!!"

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Thunder woke up due to the horrible scream Charcoal gave "What's wrong Char? Are you alright?" He asked panicing. 

"This isn't the way i want to wake up." He said.

 

((OOC: As thunder wakes up, i go to bed, once again i stayed up way too long even though i have to be up early...))

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Thunder woke up due to the horrible scream Charcoal gave "What's wrong Char? Are you alright?" He asked panicing.

"This isn't the way i want to wake up." He said.

 

((OOC: As thunder wakes up, i go to bed, once again i stayed up way too long even though i have to be up early...))

"I and- you the- with the- and the-. *pant pant* I-I-I-I... how in the- with you- and the thing-." During her panic attack Charcoal had gotten out of the bed and gone to a corner to start crying and talking to herself. Not even noticing Thunders question or his presance in general.

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Thunder got out of bed to make breakfast for him and Charcoal. "I'll deal with her later, but i can't do that with an empty stomach." He took the breakfast to the bedroom and gave Charcoal a plate. "Here you go, breakfast." He sat down next to her, "Hey, what's wrong Char?"

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Thunder got out of bed to make breakfast for him and Charcoal. "I'll deal with her later, but i can't do that with an empty stomach." He took the breakfast to the bedroom and gave Charcoal a plate. "Here you go, breakfast." He sat down next to her, "Hey, what's wrong Char?"

With teary eyes Charcoal slowly looks up at Thunder. "I'm... I'm... I'm... I'm not ready to have a foal Thunder." Lunging forward she embraces Thunder and crys into his shoulder. "I'm not ready for it Thunder, I'm just not ready for it!" She continues to cry into his shoulder, completely ignoring the breakfast put next to her.

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Thunder smiled at Charcoal, "Hey, this doesn't necciserily mean you're going to be a mother" Thunder took a bite from his sandwich. "And if it were to be so, i'm sure we would be capable of raising a foal. Though i'd never want it to know how the night went..." Thunder firmly grasped Charcoal into a hug. "I'm sure you'd be a great mother."

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Thunder smiled at Charcoal, "Hey, this doesn't necciserily mean you're going to be a mother" Thunder took a bite from his sandwich. "And if it were to be so, i'm sure we would be capable of raising a foal. Though i'd never want it to know how the night went..." Thunder firmly grasped Charcoal into a hug. "I'm sure you'd be a great mother."

"I-I-I... alright, I'll believe you Thunder." Calming down a bit Charcoal breaks from the hug and wipes her tears away. "But this isn't how I wanted it to go at all, I wanted to do it with a stallion I loved not some stallion my drunk self decided to bang just for the pleasure of it. Oh why..."

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Samantha got back to Bavik. She ran up the Guards "I need to talk to Francis." Samantha said.

"Well...Well..You're back Samantha." The Guard said.

"You're free to go through the gate." The Guard added.

 

Samantha was trotting through the town seeing the destruction that was bestowed. There was alot of the Fort left.

Samantha got up to the front door and slammed through the doors. She ran over to the stairs and trotted up them. Then came to the top and stopped in front of Jason Lark and Francis. They weren't surprised to see her.

 

"Where's the rest of your unit?" Francis asked.

"I killed them." Samantha replied.

Jason Lark smiles then chuckles, he stands up then goes over to Samantha and slaps her hard. Crack!

"I DO NOT WANT YOU TO DO THAT AGAIN!" Jason Lark screamed.

"I know." Samantha replied.

 

"Francis, go down to the square. There's more recruits waiting." Jason Lark demanded.

"Sir." Francis replied.

 

Francis walked down the stairs then out the front door.

Jason Lark looked at Samantha.

"What is your squad report?" Jason Lark asked.

"I found the group of ponies you were looking for. They had the Gun." Samantha said.

"Do you have it?" Jason Lark asked.

"Negative." Samantha replied.

 

Jason Lark smiled and then walked over near his Thrown. There was a chest that was near it.

"There used to be a device owned by the people in the city of Scipio. There isn't a city there anymore." Jason Lark snared.

Jason Lark turned the gun on and pointed it to Samantha.

"Don't!!!" Samantha yelled.

"You've made to many mistakes." Jason Lark said.

"You have no idea what it will do to me!!!" Samantha yelled. still showing no worried emotion.

"Oh....I do." Jason Lark said.

 

The device turned on and it shot and hit Samantha.

"AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Samantha screamed.

 

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Sarah looked at Rock. "Rock." She said quietly.

"It hurts." Sarah said.

Sarah's stomach had gotten even bigger than before.

She hit the ground hard.

 

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"Listen up you losers!" Francis snared.

"You work for us now! and you will respect us." Francis said.

Francis looked at the large group of recruits. He saw a mare with green hair. Francis walked up slowly and looked at her.

She was trembling she did not like where she was.

"What's your name baby?" Francis asked.

"M-m-m-m-Milly..." She said quietly.

Milly looked down and she started to cry quietly.

"It's okay Milly." Francis said with a smirk.

"We will make you suffer." Francis said in her ear.

Milly cried and looked at Francis.

"P-please!!! PLEASE!!.!" Milly said balling loudly.

"We will make sure you fit in well here." Francis snared.

 

Milly dropped to the ground and kept crying. She was freaking out a little.

She started to breath to quickly and was about to pass out.

Francis motioned to some Guards they came over and lifted up Milly.

Francis punched her in the gut. and her head immediately lowered. and no more sounds came from her.

"Damn that was annoying. Take her away. The toucher chamber will be nice? Won't it?" Francis said.

Both Guards smiled evilly and looked at Francis.
"Go ahead." Francis told them.

The Guards dragged her away.

"Now, anypony else want to be a cry baby?" Francis asked.

No noise came from the group.

 

"Now lets continue." Francis continued.

"You are ponies from the city Scipio. Your job is to kill the following ponies. And capture the Dragon weaponry." Francis said.

Francis started.

"Pheonix Lark, Rock Thatcher, Sarah Levings, Apple Bloom, FlutterShy, and Charcoal Embers." Francis ended.

"Sir..What are these ponies wanted for?" A pony asked.

"They know too much and must die. If it wasn't for our friend we wouldn't know their location. We have 3 squads heading there now." Francis ended.

 

"Sarah Levings is known for being pregnant. She must die." Francis said.

"Sir, Yes sir!" The group confirmed.

"Now go and see Jean. He'll get you all fitted for your armor and weapons. Now MOVE IT!" Francis yelled.

"Sir, Yes sir!" The group said. and they trotted off towards the new smithing shop.

 

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This has to happen to make the story have an edge.

[ 9 Months later ]

 

Sarah looked at Rock. "Rock..." She said smiling.

"He's so beautiful." She said with small tears holding a little filly.

 

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"DAMNIT!" Jason Lark kicked Francis in the face. Francis hit the ground hard.

"FUCK!" Francis yelled.

 

"You didn't find them you bastard!! And now they have a kid!" Jason Lark yelled.

"How are you sur-" Francis started. Francis was picked up and thrown against the walls.

"I'm FUCKING SURE OF IT!" Jason Lark said and punched Francis.

"Fuck you! Jason!" Francis said.
Jason Lark let Francis go.

"Okay, you're going to find the ones who own that damn gun. AND the ones who had that damn child." Jason Lark said.

"If we ever want the storm to happen we need that gun. Then we'll have the last Dragon piece." Jason Lark added.

 

Francis looked at Jason Lark after shaking the wall dust off him.

Cough, Cough. Francis started to speak.

"We now control Cough five cities. We haven't found them yet." Francis said.

"That's not good enough we need them dead." Jason Lark remarked.

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((OOC: I think a filly is a female, but I'll assume the child is male))

 

"He has your eyes" Rock wiped away a joyful tear, now he could restart living with a family "What should we name him?"

 

((OOC: So where are we now? What's happened? What do we do? I don't know where to go with this!!!)) :angry:

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Sarah looked at Rock.

 

"I'll let you name your son." She said with some tears coming from her face.

 

(( OOC - IMPORTANT - So basically what's important about this is what happens from here. Gingerjoy, you and sarah are in one of the city's that aren't owned by Chichs Devision. That's the new name of Jason Lark's empire. There are 5 out of 7 city's that are owned by them. Ginger btw. it's not alot to go on but It's mean't for you to basically role-play how YOU want to live now. The same goes for Charcoal and GameBeaver. If you end up not liking it. I'll change time back. up to you ))


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"We'll call him Kevin" Rock smiled

 

((OCC: Okay, that sounds good. So can I have input on what the city is like, what it does and ect. or do you already have plans for that? Also, where are the rest of the peeps such as Fluttershy and applebloom or can I decide that as well?))


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"We'll call him Kevin" Rock smiled

 

((OCC: Okay, that sounds good. So can I have input on what the city is like, what it does and ect. or do you already have plans for that? Also, where are the rest of the peeps such as Fluttershy and applebloom or can I decide that as well?))

"That sounds wonderful!" Sarah agreed.

 

(( OOC - It's up to you. Pheonix is dead though he ended up dying. ))

 

(( OOC - The two cities that aren't controlled by the new found power is controlled by Local Soilders. Nothing with great funding. ))

Charcters lol dang things. ))


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Knock Knock

 

"You can come in now" Rock said

 

The door opened, a curious Apple Bloom and smiling Fluttershy entered.

 

"Congratulations" Fluttershy walked over to the couple "I'm happy for you two"

 

Apple Bloom climbed on the bed which Sarah was lying in "Is it a boy or girl?" She asked

 

"Boy" Rock answered "I think..." He double checked "Yepp, Kevin's a boy"

 

"Oh cool!" Apple Bloom cooed "When will he grow up?"

 

Everypony shared a small laugh at the filly's naivety.

"A few years from now" Rock looked at Kevin "But he's going to need a big sister to help him" 

 

"Oh! I can do that!" Apple Bloom waved her hand as were volunteering. During the 9 months of running from Francis, Rock and Sarah had seen Apple Bloom as an adopted child of their own.

 

((OCC: I hope I wasn't godmodding too badly. I just thought this was awesome! I'll change anything if you want me to))


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